Achelle Walker's Tanted Persona (ready for eval)

Persona Name: Astarte

Persona Type: Tainted Persona

Persona's Arcana: Lust/Hunger

Owner: Achelle Walker

Persona Appearance: Astarte materializes as a seven foot tall solid white marble statue of a naked, voluptuous woman sans any defining sexual characteristics (lack of defined aureole, nipples and genitalia.) She has two large, ovoid cut rubies set in her eyes, along with another circular ruby set in her navel. She has on the crown of her head an onyx headdress shaped in the form of bulls horns and bears golden hoop earrings that rest on her shoulders, as well as a golden necklace. The biceps on both her arms appear to have been cut and her arms, bent at the elbows with flat open palms, seem to be able to move side to side.  

Persona Background: In the description of the Phoenician pantheon ascribed to Sanchuniathon, Astarte appears as a daughter of Epigeius and Ge, and sister of the god Elus. After Elus overthrows and banishes his father Epigeius, as some kind of trick Epigeius sends Elus his "virgin daughter" Astarte along with her sisters Asherah and the goddess who will later be called Ba`alat Gebal, "the Lady of Byblos". It seems that this trick does not work, as all three become wives of their brother Elus. Astarte bears Elus children who appear under Greek names as seven daughters called the Titanides or Artemides and two sons named Pothos "Longing" and Eros "Desire". Later with Elus' consent, Astarte and Hadad reign over the land together. Astarte puts the head of a bull on her own head to symbolize Her sovereignty. Wandering through the world, Astarte takes up a star that has fallen from the sky (a meteorite) and consecrates it at Tyre.

Strengths: Slash, Pierce

Weaknesses: Wind, Ice

Passive Boosts: Those of the Lust Arcana have a 15% boost to Terra skills


Tainted Persona Skill List:
Skill 1: Tera | Inflicts a small amount of Earth damage to one enemy. | 3 SP | Tier 1
Skill 2:  Bash | Inflicts a small amount of Strike damage to one enemy. | 5% HP | Tier 1
Skill 3: Regenerate 2 | Recovers 4% of max HP on each user turn | Passive | Tier 2
Skill 4: (Unlocked once using your Tainted Persona 25 times in PvS combat; Must be Tier 2 Skill or Lower) Terazi | Inflicts a moderate amount of Earth damage to one enemy. | 6 SP | Tier 2
Skill 5: (Unlocked once winning atleast 10 PvS battles and using your Persona an additional 30 times in PvS combat; Must be a Tier 3 Skill or Lower)Heat Wave | Inflicts a moderate amount of Strike damage to all enemies. | 14% HP | Tier 2
Skill 6: (Unlocked once using your Tainted Persona an additional 35 times in PvS combat or capturing a Psyche Terrorist above your level; Must be a Tier 3 Skill or Lower) Power Charge | The next Slash, Strike, Pierce, or Almighty physical attack will be 2.5 times greater in power. | 15 SP | Tier 3
Skill 7: (Unlocked once completing a mission posted solely for cadets and using your Persona an additional 45 times in PvS combat; Must be a Tier 4 Skill or Lower)Heat Riser | Increases an ally's Attack, Defense and Agility by 30% for 3 turns. | 30 SP | Tier 4
Skill 8: (Unlocked after defeating one of the NPC Velvet Attendants in combat or using your Persona an additional 45 times in PvS combat; Must be a Tier 4 Skill or Lower) Arms Master | Halves the HP cost for physical attack skills. | Passive | Tier 4

Tainted Soul:
Possessed Form Name: Ashteroth Karnaim
Persona Name:Astarte
Possessed Form Appearance: A Hybridization of user and persona. The amalgam of the two appear to be Achelle wearing what one can liberally say is gleaming white marble armor. The persona apparently shattering itself to garb it's user in it's stony skin for protection.
Description: Achelle is covered in a shattered, apparently hollow, marble statue, basically cobbled together stone armor, that for all the defensive it looks like it is, just slows her down a bit.

Soul Skill Name: Give And Take (which is totally not just rebellion now, honest.)
Persona Name: Astarte
Tier: Tier 1
Cost: 3 sp
Type of Damage: Support
Description: Achelle and all immediate allies and enemies within a four meter radi increase their critical hit range by 1 for three turns. (two numbers per roll instead of one)

I am afraid, I am going to have to say no to your tainted soul. This skill shouldn't be increasing stats and giving boons like that. This skill should only give you boons based on the given description of this ability. I can see what you were going for, but I am afraid even armor wouldn't do that for you. Besides your app has no strengths to support this sort of behavior for the skill, so please change it to something else.

Also your soul skill is a no go too. You can make it similar to rebellion, but as it is now it cannot be accepted. Also you cannot have this as a passive. Please give it cost.

If you fix this for us, we can approve it.

Since I was notified via chat-box of the update, I have looked it over again and still cannot accept what you have for a tainted soul skill. That is not allowed, so try again there.

As for your Soul Skill: You're almost there. If you give it a duration period and make it an AoE type I can let this one go.

Please fix and leave a message here so I know it is done. Thanks.

There.

Just to let you know you can change the SP to 3 if you want since it is raised by 10% or keep the cost you have now and have a 30% boost. Your choice there. Outside of this, I don't see much else wrong. So you're approved. Good job.

Reapproved.