Gate (abel's initial persona) (Ready for grading)

Persona Name: Gate

Persona Type: Initial Persona

Persona's Arcana: The fool

Owner: Abel rock

Persona Appearance: Gate is a large snow white oni with long black wings, he stands at 9,7 and weighs about 347 pounds. His wingspan is 6,9.

Persona Background: Gate is a powerful oni that appears every 1000 years, to see if mankind has become corrupt. If he thinks that mankind is free of corruption he'll go back to sleep, however if he believes that they have become corrupt he'll go on a killing spree and won't stop until he is tired again. (This isn't based on any real story, its just something a made up.)

Strengths: Fire

Weaknesses: Wind

Passive Boosts: 15% boost to fire.

Persona Skill List:

[i]Skill 1: Agi
Skill 2: Maragi
Skill 3: Mudo
Skill 4: agilao
Skill 5:(Must have used your persona an additional 25 times in PvS combat or completed 2 missons; Must be a tier 2 skill or lower.)
Skill 6: (Unlocked once using your Persona an additional 25 times in PvS combat or having formed three rank three or more social links; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
skill 7:(Unlocked once using your Persona an additional 25 times in combat or formed 2 rank 5 social links; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
skill 8: (Unlocked using your Persona 30 times in PvS combat or maxing a single Social Link; Must be a Tier 3 Skill or Lower)



Fusion Attack: (The Ultimate attack between you and your Persona. When using this, your Persona gifts you with the capability of performing a powerful attack. However, once this is done you can not summon your Persona again for the remainder of the topic. The attack does Tier 3 amount of damage. If you're an Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon this technique is replaced by your Orgia Mode. For more details on Orgia Mode, refer to the Character Types screen under Vital Information.)

Fusion Attack Name: Hell's bell's
Persona Name: Gate
Type of Damage: Fire
Description: many flameing meteors fall from the sky to crush their opponents. Hits all enemies for tier 3 fire damage.

Soul Skill Name: Luck boost
Persona Name: Gate
Tier: Tier 1
Cost: 12 SP
Type of Damage: N/A
Description: Increases abel luck stat by 5% for 2 turns.

Bump

>> Persona Skill List
It's okay to have a progression in mind, and many of us do keep a projected list of skills in our compendiums, but on your initial persona application you begin play with only 4 skills. the last 4 are still locked.

>> Fusion Attack
At it's core there is nothing wrong with your fusion attack, but I would ask for you to clarify for later that the attack hits all enemies for tier 3 fire damage. Just for the sake of clarification.

>> Soul Skill
Invisibility is a bit too powerful for a tier 1 soul skill, and we don't really have a time mechanic on the site so "5 seconds" isn't a reliable duration. If your skill lasts for a certain amount of time, please note it as a number of turns (either in combat or in dungeon movement). Most boosts last for 3 rounds of combat or a single post of dungeon movement.

I'd suggest looking over some other Persona apps for applicable soul skill ideas.

I made the changes.

Skills and fusion look good. Soul skill is fine, but to be fair, it won't do much for you. The effect of an increase to luck in combat will be negligible. If you want it to stay as is, you could increase the turn count to 3 like most other buffs, and call it good, but I would suggest making it an increase to Evasion/Accuracy like a mini version of Sukukaja. You could probably get away with 15%, since the tier 2 equivalent is 30%.

But if you want to stick to luck, you can do that.

Edit: After reviewing with staff, we'll only be able to allow a 5% boost to Luck with the skill as is. in the long-run it may be more effective, but will be less effective in the short-term.

Made it 5%

Approved by me, then. I'll have another staff member come check it out to be sure.

Cool.

Approved.