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| Maya (Shadow Self) | |
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Sosina
Posts : 2291 Join date : 2016-05-22
| Subject: Maya (Shadow Self) Sat Jun 05, 2021 8:56 pm | |
| Maya Please.....don't hurt me.....
The Biography
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Birth Name: Unknown Aliases: Maya (self chosen) Gender: Female Age: Unknown Birth Day: Unknown Arcana: Temperance Status: Vagrant
Profession: N/A
Base & Transformed Appearance:
Maya Stands a very unimposing 4' tall, with Brown hair that is just barely shoulder length and is usually disheveled and unkempt, due to having to often hide in near inaccessible places. She however has one massive stand out feature... rather then a normal set of eyes, Maya has only one large earth brown eye. her figure is very slim and lithe, as well as frail looking. Scars from old wounds cover her body, small to large, Scratches, bullet wounds, cuts, stabs. She almost never seems to be uninjured to the point of Bandages almost always being something she is wearing as well.
- Maya:
In her True self Form, Maya's eye turns from brown to red and her sclera go from white to gold. Her hair turns black and grows till it is all the way down to her ankles. All the color drains from her skin, leaving it near pure white. Large area's on her arms, legs, chest and neck are also covered in a pitch black substance, almost like Chitin. From her hair grow large stalks that have the same Chitin like substance covering them and which each have a large eye on the end of them.
- True Form:
Personality: Maya is very scared of the world, of People and of Demons. She lacks a lot of self confidence and tends to panic quickly due to her worries of bad things happening to her. She rarely sees anything good in a situation and tends to think things will turn bad at any moment. Leaving her constantly on edge and ready to run or brace herself for the worst. Even when she sleeps she seems to be on guard.
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The Potential
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Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)
—Strength Name: Skilled Scavenger —Description: Due to her the fact that she has been forced to live alone, Maya is highly skilled at Scavenging from the ruins, managing to find things in places many though would be empty.
—Strength Name: Consumer —Description: Maya has learned that she is able to literally eat anything... stone.. metal...wood...magically created stone and ice. which has allowed her to survive even when she couldn't find what could be considered "normal" food.
—Strength Name:Highly Perceptive —Description: due to her high visual acuity Maya is able to read the micro movements on the faces of people, demons, and Shadows, the uncontrol-able and unconscious motions that can tell someone what one is thinking, making it very easy for her to tell if someone is lying, or hint to her at to what they are thinking.
—Strength Name: —Description:
—Strength Name: —Description:.
----- ((A floating Strength is a strength you've gained inRP. For example, if you were on a Kendo team for some time, you'd naturally know Kendo which is where this strength would come in. However, be aware, it will not be as strong as any of your actual strengths and is a small plus)
—Floating Strength Name: —Description:
Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)
—Weakness Name: Disturbing to Shadows/Demons —Description: Demons and Shadows see Maya as closer to human then a Demon or Shadow, but they also sense something is... wrong about her leaving them with a sense of unease when they look upon her or are to close to her.
—Weakness Name: Disturbing to Humans/ASSW —Description: Her physical Traits make it obvious that Maya is not Human, this along with the fact that both Humans and ASSW have a sense of Unease when around her or when they see her.
—Weakness Name: Demon Tongue —Description: Due to her isolated life, Maya barely knows any of the Worlds Languages, and talks almost exclusively in Demon/Shadow tongue, even she doesn't know how she knows this language however. She can Speak halting English though not with the best grammar structure. she also doesn't know why she knows this much of this language ether.
—Weakness Name: —Description:
—Weakness Name: —Description:
----- ((A floating weakness is one gained in RP. It could be a fear you inherited during RP, or an injury that hinders your character. Some can be temporary while others can be permanent.)
—Floating Weakness Name: —Description:
Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and can also form when you transform into your True Self. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon unless pre-purchased with a Nihil Soul))
Weapon Name: Tooth and Claws Weapon Description: Maya has small blunt claws on her hands, and a mouth full of sharp teeth, with which she makes tearing and slashing attacks with, her claws are only half an inch long, while her incisors are all highly sharp Weapon Image: (Not necessary) Weapon Attack Type: Slash Weapon Element: (Leave this blank. Only special weapons obtain an element behind its blows.)
Side-Arm Weapon: (This is a ranged alternative to your main soulbound weapon. All Side-Arms at base do the same type of damage (Gun), and you're limited by ammunition. Unlike soulbound weapons, Side-Arms have various different styles of fire that set them apart instead of damage type. The different styles of firearms can be found below. Read more about guns here)
Side-Arm Name: Telekinetic Blasts Side-Arm Description: The Blasts are launched from her single eye, using energy she builds up in her body. She unleashes not one but two blasts in an attempt to knock her target away, or disable them. Side-Arm Image: (Not necessary) Side-Arm Attack Type: Gun Side-Arm Style: Burst-Fire Style - Multi-Round - Base Accuracy of 70%. Hits a single target twice. Consumes 2 rounds to per trigger pull. Magazine Size of 12. Reserves Capacity of 36.)
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The Background
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History: (At Least 2-3 Paragraphs. Keep in mind that the Fall of France pre-dates current events by about 40 years.)
Maya has no Idea where she comes from, she doesn't even know where she is, she simply awoke one day out in the ruins of a place she didn't know the name of, she didn't eve know her own name. After traveling around she managed to get a look at herself... which took almost an hour for her to realize it was a reflection...
She simply started to wander, unaware of any dangers that there were, until she found a group of Demons... she barely got away with her life, but something about her seemed to cause them to stop chasing her once she got away... looking at her reflection again she thought perhaps she should find things that looked like her?
Eventually she did manage to find a group of Humans... however while they were not violent at first sight, when she got closer... that quickly changed as they started to shout things she didn't understand and they started to yell at her, the next thing she knew she heard a loud sound and she was sent flying off her feet with a wound in her arm, once again she ran away, covered in wounds and unsure of what to do, she simply hid away in a building... wounded and in pain she looked for something that could help her.. she found a red bag in the rubble with a White cross on it... and she didn't know why but she knew it would help her wounds...she managed to patch herself up and from then on simply lived alone Avoiding both The creatures that looked like her, and the other creatures that seemed to vary widely in appearance.
Though she wasn't always successful usually always leading to her getting more wounded and escaping, something about her preventing any of her attackers from wishing to chase her down which was likely the only thing that allowed her to survive.
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| | | Snow Admin
Posts : 2254 Join date : 2014-10-28 Age : 37 Location : Somewhere past Pluto
| Subject: Re: Maya (Shadow Self) Sat Jun 05, 2021 9:28 pm | |
| Okay here we go:
1. Where is your arcana?
2. I am having an issue with the use of commas in some places instead of periods. Please fix appearance section so that I clearly see 5-6 sentences which is a paragraph.
3. Same with personality. As it is now, it reads as one long sentence in some areas.
—Strength Name: Magic Resistant —Description: For some reason that even Maya doesn't understand, she has always been resistant to magic resulting in her taking 15% less damage from all magical sources.
I am afraid this will not go. Pick one sort of element she is strong against.
—Strength Name: Consumer —Description: Maya has learned that she is able to literally eat anything... stone.. metal...wood...magic... which has allowed her to survive even when she couldn't find what could be considered "normal" food.
What do you mean eat magic? Are you saying if I threw a fire spell at her she can eat it? If so I'll have to ask you to remove that as that could be a little op.
—Strength Name: Magical Analysis —Description: Maya is able to see the base of magic, allowing her to see what path it will take, where it is being aimed, at least in part, this allows her to dodge it more effectively granting her a +15% to evade all magic attacks.
I can allow one type of magic spell to have this buff not all.
—Strength Name: Highly Perceptive —Description: due to her high visual acuity Maya is able to read the micro movements on the faces of people, demons, and Shadows, the uncontrol-able and unconscious motions that can tell someone what one is thinking, making it very easy for her to tell if someone is lying, or hint to her at to what they are thinking.
I'll let you keep this as long as you don't use it to 100% read everything and know everything about a person.
—Weakness Name: Easily injured —Description: due to her bodies size, and her frail build, Maya is easily Injured, causing her to take 15% more damage from all Physical sources.
Choose one physical type she is weak to.
Also in weaknesses, I would need a counter for her evade skill. I only see one which can counter her boost on magic.
Side-Arm Name: Telekinetic Blast Side-Arm Description: The blast is launched from her single eye, using energy she builds up in her body. Side-Arm Image: (Not necessary) Side-Arm Attack Type: Gun Side-Arm Style: Burst-Fire Style - Multi-Round - Base Accuracy of 70%. Hits a single target twice. Consumes 2 rounds to per trigger pull. Magazine Size of 12. Reserves Capacity of 36.)
If this is one blast...how is it hitting twice? Please detail this out more. Fix what I ask and I will approve. | |
| | | Sosina
Posts : 2291 Join date : 2016-05-22
| Subject: Re: Maya (Shadow Self) Sat Jun 05, 2021 10:01 pm | |
| Removed two Strengths and two Weaknesses, Added arcana, added detail to Gun and fixed Grammar issues | |
| | | Snow Admin
Posts : 2254 Join date : 2014-10-28 Age : 37 Location : Somewhere past Pluto
| Subject: Re: Maya (Shadow Self) Sat Jun 05, 2021 10:12 pm | |
| Alright. Sense you explained the consumer part to us, we will approve. | |
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