Adagium [Raphael's Initial]

Persona Name: Adagium

Persona Type: Initial Persona

Persona's Arcana: Magician

Owner: Raphael Gatsby

Persona Appearance: Adagium is actually 12 feet tall,  he sports a demonic and muscular frame with grey skin. The wings that Adagium sports are 8 feet in length, along with the ability to spread out feathers and manipulate them to a degree.  The rest of his body is red, covered with spikes and a long streak of red cracks throughout its body. They seemed to be scars of some kind. His claws are metallic, and all around his body is a symbol of some sort that can also be placed on areas to invoke it's spellcasting. Overall, Adagium looks like a frightening demon.

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Persona Background: Born from Raphael's heart, this persona takes the shape of Raph's true self. He is a hugely glorified and deeply trusted god. Crime, pleasure and leadership are crucial elements this divine being is associated with and many think of him as blunt and morbid. There's no preferred place for those in pursuit of the aid of Adagium, but handheld symbols and natural sanctuaries are prevalent even outside of these circles.

Strengths: Fire

Weaknesses: Light

Passive Boosts:  (Pros: Those of the Magician  Arcana have a 15% boost to Agi skills)

Persona Skill List: ((Skill List can be found here. Your skills grow in order, meaning you must unlock Skill 4 to get to Skill 5 and so on.))

Skill 1:  Me Patra | Removes Panic, Fear, Distress, Despair, or Sleep from all allies | 6 SP | Tier 1
Skill 2: Matera | Inflicts a small amount of Earth damage to all enemies. | 6 SP | Tier 1
Skill 3: : Invigorate 1 | Recovers 3 SP on each user turn | Passive | Tier 1
Skill 4:  Maragion | Inflicts a moderate amount of Fire damage to all enemies. | 12 SP | Tier 2
Skill 5: (Must have used your Persona an additional 25 times in PvS combat or completed 2 Missions; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
Skill 6: (Unlocked once using your Persona an additional 25 times in PvS combat or having formed three rank three or more social links; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
Skill 7: (Unlocked once using your Persona an additional 25 times in combat or formed 2 rank 5 social links; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
Skill 8: (Unlocked using your Persona 30 times in PvS combat or maxing a single Social Link; Must be a Tier 3 Skill or Lower)


Fusion Attack: (The Ultimate attack between you and your Persona. When using this, your Persona gifts you with the capability of performing a powerful attack. However, once this is done you can not summon your Persona again for the remainder of the topic. The attack does Tier 3 amount of damage. If you're an Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon this technique is replaced by your Orgia Mode. For more details on Orgia Mode, refer to the Character Types screen under Vital Information.)

Fusion Attack Name: Vanishing Flame Return
Persona Name: Adagium
Type of Damage: N/A
Description: For visual purposes, Adagium basically sets Raphael and his allies with a non-harming fire that seems to be burning away at their essence. All the way up to the last piece of matter, the technique ends with a burst of bright red flames, leaving the targets nowhere to be found. In dungeons, this serves as an escape from battle and teleports the group within 25 squares from the last known location. Outside of battle, this teleports the user and allies up to 25 meters from the last known location.

Soul Skill Name: A Demonic Masquerade
Persona Name: Adagium
Tier: Tier 1
Cost: 10 SP
Type of Damage: N/A
Description: With Adagium, one of the more potent things of the persona's history is the pleasure of being whoever or whatever you would want to be.  Adagium took on whatever form he desired at the time to communicate with his subjects, and that was passed on to Raphael as well. Within a reasonable amount of changes being applied through the use of soul skill, Raphael can change his facial appearance through the use of an illusionary mirage. This soul skill naturally lasts for three turns. However, there is a sustained cast linked to the skill that can automatically deduct the 10 SP cost and continue the upkeep of the image until the user chooses to end the technique. However, If Raphael wished to change the image to something else, he would have to end the technique and recast it the following turn in order to get a different image.

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In dungeons, this functions as Traport, but instead of going back to the last save point, it goes back to the last safe zone. This allows the users to exit a battle and put them to the nearest exit of the dungeon. Outside of a dungeon, this puts them a couple of meters close o the nearest safe zone of the characters affiliation and/or associations.

Save Zones don't even exist in the current dungeon mechanics. And even outside of dungeons, that's very vague. All of this is way too vague. Rework this. You have a limit of 25 meters/squares in general.

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This soul skill allows the user to be capable of being able to make a pact with a demon. Upon activation, a mark would be created upon the user's hand and trigger a special instance of being able to negotiate with a demon of their choosing. What can be asked of them is dictated by staff.

Too vague. Are you trying to force a demon into negotiation? I'm going with no on this, and it's too much at tier 1. If you mean additional options, it means more work for me to do. So I refuse to do that. You could do increased rewards from negotiation or decrease in the materials/VC you have to give to win over a demon.

That said, you can't force a Pact on a demon. Not at Tier 1.

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Soul Skill Name: A Demonic Masquerade
Persona Name: Adagium
Tier: Tier 1
Cost: 10 SP
Type of Damage: N/A
Description: With Adagium, one of the more potent things of the persona's history is the pleasure of being whoever or whatever you would want to be. Adagium took on whatever form he desired at the time to communicate with his subjects, and that was passed on to Raphael as well. Within a reasonable amount of changes being applied through the use of soul skill, Raphael can change his voice and appearance through the use of an illusionary mirage. This soul skill naturally lasts for three turns. However, there is a sustained cast linked to the skill that can automatically deduct the 10 SP cost and continue the upkeep of the image. However, If Raphael wished to change the image to something else, he would have to end the technique and recast it the following turn in order to get a different image.

Full-self modification is going to start at T2 and I truly mean start. At T1 you can change your face only or your voice only but you if you want the skill it must do one of those and only one.

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Approved.