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| Babadoo, Sumato Nagaki True Self [Finished] | |
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Nix Shraik
Posts : 10 Join date : 2016-06-26 Age : 28 Location : Void of lost thoughts
| Subject: Babadoo, Sumato Nagaki True Self [Finished] Mon Jun 27, 2016 10:29 am | |
| True Form Name: Babadoo Shadow's Arcana: The Devil True Form Appearance:Sumatos true form is nothing short of a nightmare. He stands just a bit over 220 cm, seeming like white skin had been pulled over a bit of meat and bones. He has a huge head without any eyes, but with giant smile, filled with dozens of sharp teeth. The most muscles would be in his overly long arms. They ended with five deadly claws. Big veins of blood could be seen through the paleness of the creatures skin and stench of blood followed the thing, where ever it was. Though, even more horrifying he can be. If desired, the Shadow can make the skin of its head to split in two, releasing a blood covered bone ball. With the rest of the body it is attached thanks to a long cord of entrails and muscles, while the bone ball still possessed its huge mouth. In this form the Shadows voice is high pitched, almost unbearable to the ear. Form Background: Babadoo, a boggy man used by many parents to scare their children. He was yet another tool to bind the little Sumato to his books and make him obey. As a child the boy always feared the monster and even when growing up and knowing there were no such things, somewhere, in the back of his mind, he did believe. This form represents the first step in binding the boy. Strengths: Mudo, Hama. Weaknesses: Pierce, Slash. Passive Boosts: The Persona of the Devil Arcana are commonly Persona excelling in support skills. Users have a latent 15% boost in buff/debuff skills. Shadow Skill List:Skill 1: Mudo | 25% chance of instant death from the power of Darkness to one enemy. | 6 SP | Tier 1 Skill 2: Evil Smile | 25% chance of inflicting the Fear ailment to all enemies. 50% chance fear may stop their next attack. Wears off after 3 turns. | 10 SP | Tier 2 Skill 3: Tarukaja | Raises one ally's Attack by 30% for 3 turns. | 6 SP | Tier 2
Skill 4: Rakukaja | Raises one ally's Defense by 30% for 3 turns. | 6 SP | Tier 2 (Unlocked once defeating ten Demons/Shadows; Must be Tier 2 or below) Skill 5: Virus Breath | Inflicts damage equal to 25% of the target's current HP with a 25% chance of inflicting Poison. | 40 SP | Tier 3 (Must have used your Shadow Frenzy ability to defeat atleast three enemies in one battle or used your True Form 35 times in PvS combat; Must be Tier 3 or lower) Skill 6: Full Analysis | Used to detect an enemy's stats, weak points, and any attacks or skills it may use | 23 SP | Tier 3 (Unlocked once defeating thirty additional Demons/Shadows and using your True Form 35 times in PvS combat; Must be Tier 3 or lower) Skill 7: Die for Me! | 80% chance of instant death from the power of Darkness to all enemies. | 35 SP | Tier 3 (Unlocked once using your True Form to defeat a Boss above your Level or using your True Form 45 times in PvS combat; Must be a Tier 4 Skill or Lower) Skill 8: Ailment Boost | All status ailment attacks are 50% more effective. | Passive | Tier 3 (Unlocked after defeating 60 Demons/Shadows in combat and using your True Form 45 times in PvS combat; Must be a Tier 4 Skill or Lower)Special Ability:Ability Name: Shadow Frenzy Appearance while in Frenzy: (Does your appearance change or do you take any interesting traits while in your frenzy state?) Description: The Shadow Selves have a special ability called the "Shadow Frenzy" allowing them to cast skills at half the price, and link Tier skills like a chain. For Example: If a Shadow Self were to go into a Frenzy, they could cast a Tier 1 skill and immediately follow that Tier 1 skill with a Tier 2 skill in the same post. The only requirement is that the skills being chained must be the same type, such as Garu to Garula, or Magaru to Magarula. Also you can only link up to three skills total. This Shadow Frenzy only lasts for three (3) turns, and once it ends it can not be used again the entire topic and all following skills will be weaker by 50% (unless a special item is used). Soul Skill Name: Shadow Essence Persona Name: Babadoo Tier: Tier 1 Cost: Passive Type of Damage: -//- Description: Recovers 4 SP on each user turn (Works only, if there is another Shadow or Shadow Self, besides him, in the battle)
Last edited by Nix Shraik on Mon Jun 27, 2016 1:15 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
| | | Lost
Posts : 2048 Join date : 2014-11-21 Age : 26 Location : Nowhere
| Subject: Re: Babadoo, Sumato Nagaki True Self [Finished] Mon Jun 27, 2016 10:39 am | |
| Hello! Alright, everything looks great except your SS. So, let's talk about it and get your True Self ready to be approved!
Alright, well... It's interesting and neat, but even with the nerfs you gave it you simply can't have it as a Tier 1. It's too much to ask to alter minds as well as create shadows. As well as the fact that you can't viably teach other Shadows Selves a SS either. I would ask that you create a different skill altogether as... I simply can't allow a skill of this magnitude to pass. | |
| | | Nix Shraik
Posts : 10 Join date : 2016-06-26 Age : 28 Location : Void of lost thoughts
| Subject: Re: Babadoo, Sumato Nagaki True Self [Finished] Mon Jun 27, 2016 10:55 am | |
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| | | Lost
Posts : 2048 Join date : 2014-11-21 Age : 26 Location : Nowhere
| Subject: Re: Babadoo, Sumato Nagaki True Self [Finished] Mon Jun 27, 2016 11:06 am | |
| Alright! This True Self is now approved! Cheers~ | |
| | | Lost
Posts : 2048 Join date : 2014-11-21 Age : 26 Location : Nowhere
| Subject: Re: Babadoo, Sumato Nagaki True Self [Finished] Mon Jun 27, 2016 1:02 pm | |
| Ah, wait, I'm sorry but I need you to precisely tell me how far away this other shadow can be from you for this skill to activate. As long as they're in the same party/battle as you are, that's fine. Other than that, it's a no go. I would also ask you take it down to 4 SP as well. 5 is a bit much for a Tier 1 regardless of this stipulations as well. Do this and you'll be re-approved. | |
| | | Nix Shraik
Posts : 10 Join date : 2016-06-26 Age : 28 Location : Void of lost thoughts
| Subject: Re: Babadoo, Sumato Nagaki True Self [Finished] Mon Jun 27, 2016 1:15 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Babadoo, Sumato Nagaki True Self [Finished] Mon Jun 27, 2016 1:22 pm | |
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