Tatsui Kitao's Initial Persona, Forseti (Endyimon)

Persona Name: Forseti

Persona Type: Initial Persona

Persona's Arcana: Justice (The Arcana should be the same as its Wielder)

Owner: Tatsui Kitao (The owner's name of the Persona. This should be your character's name)

Persona Appearance:

Forseti:

Forseti appears as a grim yet young man with blonde hair sitting on a throne of sorts. His posture indicates one of judging someone or something. He is also clad in royal robing, looking akin to European kings. He looks to be about 6 feet tall. (What your Persona looks like. It should relatively be not human in appearance.)

Persona Background: Forseti (Old Norse "the presiding one," actually "president" in Modern Icelandic and Faroese) is an Æsir god of justice and reconciliation in Norse mythology. He is generally identified with Fosite, a god of the Frisians. Jacob Grimm noted that if, as Adam of Bremen states, Fosite's sacred island was Heligoland, that would make him an ideal candidate for a deity known to both Frisians and Scandinavians, but that it is surprising he is never mentioned by Saxo Grammaticus.[1]

Grimm took Forseti, "praeses", to be the older form of the name, first postulating an unattested Old High German equivalent *forasizo (cf. modern German Vorsitzender "one who presides").[2] but later preferring a derivation from fors, a "whirling stream" or "cataract", connected to the spring and the god's veneration by seagoing peoples.[3] However, in other Old Norse words, for example forboð, "forbidding, ban", the prefix for- has a pejorative sense. So it is more plausible that Fosite is the older name and Forseti a folk etymology.[4]
(Your Persona's background and history)

Strengths: Light (What type of attacks is your Persona strong against? This is specifically for Elemental and Physical based skills. Damage from these attacks are reduced by half. You can have up to two strengths with the Initial Persona)

Weaknesses: Dark (What element/physical-based skills is it weak against? Must have atleast one unless your Arcana says otherwise. Should have an equal amount of strengths your Persona has. Damage from these specific types of attacks are twice as effective and will cause your character to stagger their next post.)

Passive Boosts:Portrayed as a woman holding a sword and balance, the Justice Arcana symbolizes a strict allegory of justice, objectivity, rationality and analysis.

Pros: The Personas of the Justice Arcana are commonly Personas excelling in Light-based affinities. Users have a latent 15% boost in light-based skills.

(This can be found on the Arcana Sheet found here. It should match up to the Arcana the owner of this Persona holds.)

Persona Skill List: ((Skill List can be found here. Your skills grow in order, meaning you must unlock Skill 4 to get to Skill 5 and so on.))

Skill 1: Hama | 25% chance of instant death from the power of Light to one enemy. | 6 SP | Tier 1(Must be a Tier 1 Skill)
Skill 2: Invigorate 1 | Recovers 3 SP on each user turn | Passive | Tier 1(Must be a Tier 1 Skill)
Skill 3: Dia | Recovers a small amount of HP (30%) to one ally. | 4 SP | Tier 1(Must be a Tier 1 Skill)
Skill 4: (Unlocked once forming your first Social Link or using your Persona 15 times in PvS combat; Must be Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
Skill 5: (Must have used your Persona an additional 25 times in PvS combat or completed 2 Missions; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
Skill 6: (Unlocked once using your Persona an additional 25 times in PvS combat or having formed three rank three or more social links; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
Skill 7: (Unlocked once using your Persona an additional 25 times in combat or formed 2 rank 5 social links; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
Skill 8: (Unlocked using your Persona 30 times in PvS combat or maxing a single Social Link; Must be a Tier 3 Skill or Lower)


Fusion Attack: (The Ultimate attack between you and your Persona. When using this, your Persona gifts you with the capability of performing a powerful attack. However, once this is done you can not summon your Persona again for the remainder of the topic. The attack does Tier 3 amount of damage. If you're an Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon this technique is replaced by your Orgia Mode. For more details on Orgia Mode, refer to the Character Types screen under Vital Information.)

Fusion Attack Name: Light Barrage
Persona Name:Forseti
Type of Damage: Hama (Elemental Damage such as Zio, Agi, Garu? Pierce/Strike/etc?)
Description: Forseti summons two large and intense balls of light and fires them at the enemies, and since they are large enough they can hit a group of enemies. This counts as 2 tier 3 Ma-Light attacks. These attacks both have a base 30% miss chance.

Soul Skill Name: Last Light [What's the tech called?]
Persona Name: Forseti [The name should match one of your Personas]
Tier: Tier 1
Cost: Passive [Make it realistic. Physical damage moves is HP for a cost. Magic is SP]
Type of Damage: [Self Explanatory]
Description: When the dark envelops Tatsui there is a chance a small light will appear to sustain him. In PvS this translates into a 10% chance to survive darkness, while in PvP this translates into a 10% extra resistance to darkness [Explain what happens when you perform this technique]

Bumping this up so it can be graded

For starters, you need to add in how tall your persona is.

Secondly, the PvP effect is way too much for a Tier 3 Fusion Skill, as attacks there are written out, and does not have a miss chance. And there's no way you could make it 6 individual Strikes. They have to act as 1, maybe 2 projectiles. As for the PvS effect, a double hitting Mahama is fine. But remember that it WILL abide by the extra miss chance of double hitting moves. It will also do Damage, and not instantly kill.

The Soul Skill is okay.

Editted (probably) to specifications

At tier three, you can't go with Auto-homing attacks. ESPECIALLY not AoE attacks. Even at Tier 4, you can't go with Homing Attacks.

Finally done.

Approved.