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Posts : 2048 Join date : 2014-11-21 Age : 26 Location : Nowhere
Subject: Beatrice Bonaparte [Endy PU] Sun Oct 29, 2017 1:06 am
Beatrice Bonaparte
”Tick tock… Time doesn’t stop… What a tiresome journey this all is.”
The Biography
Birth Name: Beatrice Bonaparte Aliases: BB, Green Archer Gender: Female Age: 19 Birth Day: December 18th Arcana: Hanged Man Place of Residence: East Eden Estate Evoker: Mental Shackles Academy Semester: Graduated Class: N/A
Sorority: N/A
Full Time Job: Archery Instructor
Appearance: Beatrice is girl in her late teens, having fair skin, green eyes, and a generally youthful look to her despite the loss of adolescence that can be seen in her eyes. She has blonde hair that has been dyed green at the tips of her bangs. She enjoys wearing outfits primarily in greens and blues and specifically always wears a skirt no matter the occasion. She is 5’ 7’’ and weighs 120 lbs.
Alternate Appearance: Sandiego – Phantom Archer
While wearing the mask of her persona, Beatrice will change garb into a traditional, war ready archer. Armor covering her chest and shoulders accompanied with a quiver of arrows for her bow. Armored boots along with a skirt that allows for unhindered movement. Aside from an outfit change and a mask, very little changes about her.
Personality: Very little can be said about Beatrice’s personality. She comes across as solemn and quiet, talking in riddles or song lyrics as if trying to convey a more serious tone that her voice tends not to have. She is a hard worker though, never hesitating to give her all to a task until it is complete. She isn’t a perfectionist, mind, just someone who finds satisfaction in seeing something through to the very end. This in part can make her seem more distant than usual but she’ll often do things in the best interest of others. She has a bad habit of thinking the worst in a situation. Pessimistic in nature, she’ll generally try and avoid conflict as a result due to a notable lack of confidence when it comes to interacting with people. She views most people as an obstacle to overcome, generally thinking they wish to exploit her in some way off the bat. However, she is a very caring person once you get to know her. Self-sacrificial is often a word used by those close to her. She won’t hesitate to help those in need, often forgetting about her own insecurities to aid the person to the best of her abilities. Whilst not one to fight, she’ll use her talents as an archer to protect those if need be, though often just threatening someone with a bow and arrow is enough to scare bullies away.
The Potential
Strengths:
—Strength Name: Archery Prowess —Description: Beatrice is a trained bowman, practicing hard every day as to not lose her edge. This makes her an exceptional shot, thus allowing her to attack twice with dex attacks.
—Strength Name: Precision —Description: Beatrice has an eye for accuracy and each shot always counts regardless of the situation. Beatrice’s dex attacks deal 5% more damage.
—Strength Name: Cover Fire —Description: Beatrice is trained in covering the charge of others, providing offensive support when able. However, she is also trained in using the art of cover fire to her own advantage. Whilst in PvS this gives her counter chance a 5% increase.
—Strength Name: Hard Working —Description: Beatrice devotes all her energy to completing a task she deems worthy. She’ll not stop until the task is seen to its completion regardless of the physical repercussions of the task. This allows her to work hard and give her best in a task regardless of the circumstances.
—Strength Name: Swift Footed —Description: Beatrice is very quick on her feet, capable of moving faster than others. She’s a fast runner and excellent at dodging when she wishes to be.
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—Floating Strength Name: —Description:
Weaknesses:
—Weakness Name: Pessimistic —Description: Even if her hard working nature allows her to work hard no matter what, her pessimistic nature can often get the best of her. She’ll do her best, but thinking the worst lowers her guard and allows Ailments to last a turn longer on her.
—Weakness Name: Poor Defense —Description: Whilst an excellent archer, her close range defenses are lacking. She simply doesn’t see a point in strengthening a weakness that she views nonexistent despite it impacting her a lot. Her endurance stats will grow at half its normal rate.
—Weakness Name: Sure Footed —Description: Regardless of a situation, Beatrice will always stand her ground. Whilst not the most defensive person in close quarters, nothing will waver her conviction. She will have a 10% dodging chance against foes with less Luck than her and if a Sukukaja is cast on her.
—Weakness Name: Exhausting —Description: Beatrice’s dedication to a task can and will almost certainly be detrimental to her. She gives her all to completing a task, and due to this she’ll often ignore her own weakening state of body and mind. She’ll exhaust herself completely if not stopped or if the task takes too long.
—Weakness Name: Physically Weaker —Description: Whilst a trained bowman, her body is built in a way that is only useful in archery based strengths. This means real world damage will deal significant damage to her as, again, her defenses are lacking and she refuses to strengthen them.
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—Floating Weakness Name: —Description:
Soul Bound Weapon:
Weapon Name: Artemis Weapon Description: An elegant bow that is based off of the bow Beatrice imagines Artemis herself would wield. Regardless it is a standard bow despite its elegance. It is 48’’ tall and the arrows are 7’’ long. Weapon Image: Weapon Attack Type: Pierce Weapon Element:
Side-Arm Weapon:
Side-Arm Name: Orion Side-Arm Description: A standard pistol that has no special or outstanding characteristics. It is a .45 caliber pistol with a height of 5’’ and a length of 7’’. Side-Arm Image: Side-Arm Attack Type: Gun Side-Arm Style: Revolver - Single Shot - Accuracy is increased by 20%. Consumes only one type of ammo per use. Can shoot only one enemy at a time.
The Background
History: Beatrice was born into the Bonaparte family, an old family who has slowly amassed a small well of wealth, through the means of animal breeding, that has allowed Beatrice and her sister to grow up comfortably without wanting or needing anything. Their parents were kind and loving, and it was honestly safe to say that Beatrice would have never undergone any form of conflict in her life, but all good things are forced to come to an end. Sadly, one night when her parents left on a business trip, they were killed in an accident, forcing Beatrice to become the head of her household and the owner of her family’s estate. She lived a solemn and withdrawn life, whatever business ventures her parents put up sustaining her and her sister’s lives for the time being.
The Great Divide caused mass chaos but did little to impact the wellness of Beatrice and her sister’s life. They holed up in their family’s estate until order retook, their home becoming part of the newly founded East Eden. She was forced to retake some business ventures of her own, retaking a small foot hold in her family’s former economic stability. Luckily, such ventures were a stroke of luck for Beatrice, easily stabilizing her family’s finances in the new world the Queen helped build. Beatrice returned to her life of solitude shortly after though, focusing on managing her estate and raising her younger sister. However, the threat the new terrorists pose may force her to step out of her home once more.
Last edited by Lost on Mon Oct 30, 2017 3:30 pm; edited 2 times in total
Enigma
Posts : 4801 Join date : 2014-01-13
Subject: Re: Beatrice Bonaparte [Endy PU] Sun Oct 29, 2017 1:46 am
Well, it's time to do the dirty dancing. We are well acquainted so I'll skip the introductions, I will also proceed to talk normally if you don't mind?
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Spoiler:
—Strength Name: Hard Working —Description: Beatrice devotes all her energy to complete a task she deems worthy. She’ll not stop until the task is seen to its completion regardless of the physical repercussions of the task. This allows her to work hard and give her best in a task regardless of the circumstances
^ Something is telling me that you are wanting something more for this? Could this possibly equate to a higher payout when it comes to job threads? Since you work so hard, you can reap a better reward? This could also equate to dungeon puzzles (god i hate them), your hard effort can give you a handicap? Could be a waste of a strength, could not. I would want a better strength for you because the interpretation threw me in a bit of a loop, besides that she's stubborn and could ignore strength related limitations to do something. Is that what this is? If yes then i'll leave you to it.
2.
Spoiler:
—Weakness Name: Poor Defense —Description: Whilst an excellent archer, her close range defenses are lacking. She simply doesn’t see a point in strengthening a weakness that she views nonexistent despite it impacting her a lot. Instead of gaining 2% defenses when her HP or SP state is high enough, she’ll instead gain 1% in her defensive stats.
^ Just a request, but straightforward can worded in a more simpler manner. You can take it as is or .....
—Weakness Name: Poor Defense —Description: Whilst an excellent archer, her close-range defenses are lacking. She simply doesn’t see a point in strengthening a weakness that she views nonexistent despite it impacting her a lot. PEmd and MEnd resistance gains through stat increase goes up by half its value.
^ This covers basically the mechanical portion and knowingly places mods in the state of realizing that 1% increase instead of 2%. We cap at 50% for those resistances anyway so good call, who gives a shit? But basically, this is just for less of a headache for others if they find difficulty interpreting your weakness.
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Spoiler:
—Weakness Name: Sure Footed —Description: Regardless of a situation, Beatrice will always stand her ground. Whilst not the most defensive person in close quarters, nothing will waver her conviction. Regardless of circumstances in PvS combat, Beatrice will always have a 10% chance of dodging an attack.
Something about it is...off... it's basically saying the standard miss rate will always be...the standard miss rate. We should explore this weakness a bit more because i don't think it really does anything hindering, or i cant think of a situation where this will factor in. You are either hit with a weakness, with an enemy getting a once more and giving you no miss rate, having low luck and thus factoring the difference into your miss rate, having equivalent luck with a standard miss rate, or having a higher luck and increasing the miss rate for the enemy.
Now here is where it gets fucked up. With your wording, that can make your miss rate 10% for a time where your luck is higher and it should be more of an rng sum to hit you, playing against you. I dont think this is what you want, so we should change this a little. "Regardless of the circumstances", get rid of that wording asap before accepting because i smell a fuckup a mile away buddy.
Other notes
Spoiler:
there is no real scale for real-world damage tbh. A broken arm because someone broke your arm is a broken arm, so an increase of real-world damage is just allowing someone to say simply that even blowing in your fucking direction is going to kill you. Put it this way, me getting shot as kogami didn't change a thing if i had your weakness "physically weaker", or not. I died and that was it, so i dont think we can calculate being weaker to real-world damage to a point where it's a relevant weakness.
I don't usually do this but for history, I need a source of income. Feel free to be a "Rish Man", but for plot purposes "no promises" its always good to have a grasp of origin as to what your family does to be so wealthy.
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Lost
Posts : 2048 Join date : 2014-11-21 Age : 26 Location : Nowhere
Subject: Re: Beatrice Bonaparte [Endy PU] Sun Oct 29, 2017 11:51 am
So, for the first one I literally don't want anything extra out of it. It's simply a personality strength stating she tries her hardest in a task. I really don't feel like adding anything to it so that is what it is.
Second and third are reworded.
For the real world damage weakness, I know that has been passed a lot outside of just my characters. I'll leave it as is since being fast would normally mean you're weaker, yeah?
Lastly, as far as being 'rich' goes I specifically stated they were 'well off' not swimming in cash. I've added something less vague than just 'business ventures' but she's by no means rich.
Enigma
Posts : 4801 Join date : 2014-01-13
Subject: Re: Beatrice Bonaparte [Endy PU] Sun Oct 29, 2017 1:35 pm
Subject: Re: Beatrice Bonaparte [Endy PU] Sun Oct 29, 2017 2:27 pm
—Weakness Name: Poor Defense —Description: Whilst an excellent archer, her close range defenses are lacking. She simply doesn’t see a point in strengthening a weakness that she views nonexistent despite it impacting her a lot. Her defense stat will grow at half its normal rate.
Does this affect PEnd, MEnd, or both? I'm assuming the last one based off the wording and any would be fine, I'd just like to check to make sure for the sake of clarity. Other than that, this all looks good to me and is ready for approval.
Lost
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