Malperico Teruin ( Endymion City)

Subject: Malperico Teruin ( Endymion City) Thu Oct 05, 2017 1:32 am

Malpercio Teruin
I am the true ruler of power

The Biography

Birth Name: Malpercio Teruin
Aliases: N/A
Gender: Male
Age: looks: appears to be mid teens
Birth Day: N/A
Arcana: Lust: 15% boost to Terra skills.
Place of Residence: Velvet room
Academy Semester: N/A
Class: (We'll fill this in once you're approved. This will be your class in school)

Sorority: N/A.

Part/Full Time Job: part time librarian.

Appearance: Malpercio has medium silver hair an amber hue'd eyes. With a height of 5'6 an weight of around 152lb. seemingly sickly pale white with a narrow face, long slender fingers covered in white gloves. As for his outfit it's common for him to usually be wearing a red trench coat with a red cape extension that extends all the way down to the knees. For his bottom half, he has black dress pants an ordinary shoes as his velvet room attire.

Personality: Consumed with thoughts of power usually overstates himself an belittles those he considers his lesser. He is however one if he puts a task to something will see it to end. The cost of that though is he can be narrow minded. He however treats his guests as equals but, will mistreat the guests cohorts. He however usually avoids other attendants due to feeling inadequate in comparison.

The Potential

Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)

—Strength Name:Former Velvet Room Attendant
—Description: He knows the in's an outs of odd places an can find some rather amusing. "short cuts": while traveling a dungeon: travel 12 spaces each 400 word post and 6 spaces for anything lower unless distracted.

—Strength Name: Power is all I have
—Description: Due to his persistence at using his lust card in combat he gets: 15% to Dexterity stat.

—Strength Name: Minor levitation
—Description: He can slight manipulate reality by floating himself one inch off the ground, floating his compendium up to 5 inches away from him and, floating his lust card up to 2 inches from his hand.

—Strength Name: Deceptive velvet attendant
—Description: Due to talking to many guests an being able to conceal his true intent he gains +1 Rank Expression.

—Strength Name: Determined
—Description: When he puts his mind to something he follows through to the end.

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((A floating Strength is a strength you've gained inRP. For example, if you were on a Kendo team for some time, you'd naturally know Kendo which is where this strength would come in. However, be aware, it will not be as strong as any of your actual strengths and is a small plus)

—Floating Strength Name:
—Description:

Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)

—Weakness Name: Firearm displeasure
—Description: His loss was from a guest who was extremely good at using firearms as a result he take 15% more damage from fire arms due to being reminded of that time.

—Weakness Name: narrow minded
—Description: while focusing on something changing his mindset can cause conflict, and not noticing the bigger picture of some situation.

—Weakness Name: velvet room attended syndrome
—Description:, Due to spending so much time in the velvet room an usually only hearing hear say of the out side world has some misconceptions an doesn't understand some of the common norms.

—Weakness Name: undistinguished
—Description: It takes him more time then usual to understand the world around him: must max out rank 1 understanding twice to get to rank 2

—Weakness Name:Slow starter
—Description: Due to usually being cooped up in the velvet room he usually takes time to "unrust" an get up to speed:During the first three post in a dungeon encounter he can not use his former velvet room attendant ability and, takes a -10% to your luck stat for the first three rounds.

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((A floating weakness is one gained in RP. It could be a fear you inherited during RP, or an injury that hinders your character. Some can be temporary while others can be permanent.)

—Floating Weakness Name:
—Description:

Soul Bound Weapon: Persona Compendium.

Weapon Name: Grimoire of the fallen prince
Weapon Description: A red book with a soft binding with worn edges. The card of lust is marked in the middle as a book mark an used as the primary slashing weapon.
Weapon Image: n/a
Weapon Attack Type: Slash
Weapon Element:

The Background

History: Once a velvet room attendant who spent many decades as one who presides over power with the rest of the velvet room attends. At first it was nice spending time with them an his master. Over the course of the many years ..seeing them go by with powerful persona users after another an non of the other siblings reaching the true potential as just onlooker he started to have doubts in the methods used. With his ideals wavering one day he challenged one of the attends an lost miserably an couldn't understand how bonds could have such power. Then trying to talk it over with master over how humans shouldn't possess such strength an it would go out of control. Master then said that the power of humanity could even overcome that with bonds. It was clear master wasn't in his right mind so I decided to keep a close eye on him watching... waiting for the next guest. Maybe then I can disprove my master's opinion till then solitude awaits.

Posts : 5994 Join date : 2013-10-06 Age : 30

Yeah, a lot of it seems very unlike a Velvet Attendant behavior-wise. I suggest you brush up on your grammar and capitalization in RP.

Quote :: —Strength Name:Former Velvet Room Attendant
—Description: He knows the in's an outs of dimensional travel an can find some odd "short cuts".

By no means will this allow him to teleport from place to place. I won't allow it in combat.

Quote :: —Strength Name: In search of power
—Description: Has a 5% higher chance of learning of soul skills.

You buy them or earn them after maxing out. This strength is irrelevant. Find something else.

Quote :: —Weakness Name: vain
—Description: weak to terra, (takes double damage) due to having a affinity with casting such greatly offends him an opens him up.

So you'll have this and on top of other weaknesses with your Persona Compendium sheet?

I need you to know that if you're going to have a combat-based strengths, you need to balance with an equal number of combat-based weaknesses.

History:

Quote :: It was clear master wasn't in his right mind so I decided to leave the velvet room. Awhile afterwords I discovered the human world had a learning institution an decided to enroll there to gather gather information on such a world an see if bonds are really what is giving them this power.

Pretty sure you're not usually allowed to leave. So you might wish to change this.

Posts : 5994 Join date : 2013-10-06 Age : 30

Quote :: —Strength Name:Former Velvet Room Attendant
—Description: He knows the in's an outs of dimensional travel an can find some odd "short cuts": while traveling a dungeon: travel 12 spaces each 400 word post and 6 spaces for anything lower unless distracted.

So as long as it's kept to dungeon crawling, then it's fine.

Quote :: —Strength Name: Power is all I have
—Description: due extensive use while in the velvet room 15% more damage to almighty skills

Gonna have to say no. Almighty skills are a higher tier and stuff. Please find some other element.

Quote :: —Strength Name: Minor levitation
—Description: He can slight manipulate reality by floating himself one inch off the ground, floating his compendium up to 5 inches away from him and, floating his lust card up to 2 inches from his hand.

If that's all he can do, then I'm fine with it.

I know dungeon crawling strength of yours isn't a combat one, but find some weakness to match it.

History: It's a little better. But I want other staff to take a look and have an opinion on this. So I"ll let them.

Posts : 4801 Join date : 2014-01-13

Yo! Gabe here! For starters, welcome to the site. A bit of a rocky road, but we can fix this together!

1. You are playing as an attendant, take it from someone who was once the wild card, more is expected out of this app when you pick this role. So personality and physical description could be a little more in depth if you can help it. Just a little more.

2. Feel free to pick any sort of strength increase toward other spells than almighty, it's off the table, unfortunately. Also, if you go this route, you'll have to pick a 15% increase of damage towards another element. Can't have an affinity for one without being sensitive to another.

3. Mostly opinionated, but the dungeon crawling is a weakness could have something to do with your cardio. Whenever you use your crawling, turn after you get a bit fatigued because you are a Philemon couch potato that isn't used to such strenuous activity? Aka, give ur crawling a 1 round cooldown perhaps so it's not used consecutively? Feel free to your own suggestions as well, we can take a look and regulate it for ya.

4. You have some strengths missing here, but try to fill them up (just a suggestion), maybe a quality boost or something? Take advantage of everything you can get.

5. Feel free to message any of the district leaders for any additional inquiries about your application.

Subject: Re: Malperico Teruin ( Endymion City) Tue Oct 10, 2017 12:39 pm

Edits are made, ready an waiting for grading thanks for the tips Gabe.

Posts : 2548 Join date : 2015-01-01 Age : 25

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