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| Aleksandra (Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon) | |
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Zane
Posts : 86 Join date : 2017-03-02 Age : 30
| Subject: Aleksandra (Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon) Fri Mar 03, 2017 1:53 am | |
| Aleksandra"To save the world from darkness, that is my reason for living."
The Biography
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Birth Name: Aleksandra Aliases: N/A Gender: Female Age: 3 (looks 16) Height: 5'6" (1.67 m) Weight: 190 lbs (86.18 kg) Birth Day: January 23rd Arcana: Strength Place of Residence: Academy Semester: First Year Class:
Sorority: N/A
Part/Full Time Job: Waitress at a local restaurant part-time.
Residence: Aleksandra either lives in the school dorm (if there is one, or in an apartment paid for by her 'father' that is near her school.
Appearance: Her hair is blue and tied up into twin tails, her eyes are hetero-chromatic. Her left is red and her right is blue. She often gets questions about the eye so her end-all-be-all answer was an eyepatch. Her skin is fair and she looks very meek however due to what she is.
Her common outfit consists of her school uniform with an over-sized school jacket. She often wears thigh-high socks and a pair of tennis shoes.
Alternate Appearance: When she's not in school uniform her outfit consists of a long hoodie, often worn open showing a tank top underneath and a pair of black jeans, she however wears the same shoes.
Personality: Aleksandra, despite being in Russia most of her life does not carry an accent, instead she alters her accent to make her more easily understood by whoever she is talking to. She is a kind and shy girl who doesn't know how to speak with others well unless it's in formal conversation. Once befriended she will open up more and speak more freely. Though she does not know if it is programing or free will that drives it, whenever she makes a close friend she's always driven to help them at any given chance.
She loves to listen to music and is quite a good singer but lacks any other musical talent to the point of frustration. She can be temperamental at times but often she gets depressed instead of angry. Her primary thought of those around her, especially friends is that she needs to be there for them whenever needed. She's willing to risk destruction to defend a friend and often times does her best to help them in whatever way she possibly can.
Quirks: Aleksandra has a few quirks in her personality beside just being bad at talking to people; First off, she has a tendancy to hide behind her "sister" when someone scares her, if her sister is not available she'll instead hide behind someone she likes/trust/knows or feels doesn't pose a threat to her emotionally or physically. Second, she is very gentle so much so people expect her to be brittle, primarily because of the fact she could probably crush someone's hand with a simple hand shake. Thirdly, Whenever her creator would do routine maintenance or repairs on her body he'd often hum the Russian tune Katyusha, this caused her to occasionally hum or sing the song without noticing when she is fighting Shadows.
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The Potential
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Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three. Inhuman strengths will only be active in Orgia Mode.)
—Strength Name: Solid Frame —Description: Aleksandra's metal endoskeleton is a strong metal that allows her +15% resistance to Strike Damage.
—Strength Name: Synthesized Muscle —Description: Gives a 10% increase Dex damage. Being an android through and through she has no human body parts, which allows for much more strength to come from significantly less bulky limbs. This allows her to exert minor feats that would be very difficult for someone of her size and stature; such as carrying a full grown adult (though it would still be cumbersome).
—Strength Name: Synthesized Muscle (Inhuman) —Description: High tension mesh muscles allow for the use of strength outside their weight class. This allows a +15% Dex Damage. (Stacking with the 10% in PVS for 25% and overriding it in PVP for only 15%) She could potentially lift a bus off the ground when using the full extent of her Orgia strength increase and throw it up to twenty feet (though it'd more likely slide or roll due to it's size and weight,) but in combat with other humans she has a tendency to hold back some of her strength in the hopes of capturing instead of killing.
—Strength Name: Thorough Engineering (non-combat) —Description: Aleksandra's body has a thick layer of poly-fiber coating including a series of micro tubes to simulate skin, muscle and veins so that in the event she were harmed by accident, she would not have her identity as a robot exposed. This also allows her safety from metal detectors.
----- ((A floating Strength is a strength you've gained inRP. For example, if you were on a Kendo team for some time, you'd naturally know Kendo which is where this strength would come in. However, be aware, it will not be as strong as any of your actual strengths and is a small plus)
—Floating Strength Name: —Description:
Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)
—Weakness Name: Poor Insulation —Description: Infers a 15% weakness to lightning abilities. The armor itself can take a hit, but is not insulated against electricity.
—Weakness Name: Low Mental Fortitude —Description: Aleksandra's prototype brain is not sufficiently equipped for the impact of a mental assault. In fact they took no measures against such assaults as they didn't think it would effect her. She gets a 10% weakness to all bad status skills.
—Weakness Name: Slow the gears (Inhuman) —Description: After use of Orgia Mode, all stats suffer a penalty of 30% for one turn after the overheat ends. When Orgia Mode deactivates Aleksandra goes into the standard heat vent, disabling her body for three rounds in order to prevent her from severely damaging herself by overcompensating. However due to some faults in the prototype design she does not have the ability to come back at full strength after venting, her body must continue to cool for the next turn but can still move.
—Weakness Name: Inhuman Eye (non-combat) —Description: The benefit of knowing when shadows are near comes with a minor inconvenience, being that her red eye begins to glow for the duration of the proximity. Other phenomena can also cause the sensor to trigger allowing her alert to go off at any time which can cause her to have a glowing red eye in the middle of a large crowd. She must wear an eye patch or quickly cover her eye and remove herself from the area to avoid exposing her inhuman nature.
----- ((A floating weakness is one gained in RP. It could be a fear you inherited during RP, or an injury that hinders your character. Some can be temporary while others can be permanent.)
—Floating Weakness Name: —Description:
Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))
Weapon Name: Paragon Weapon Description: A light exoskeletal armor encases her legs. The Armor provides no defensive bonus but acts as an augmented foot/kick weapon. Weapon Attack Type: Strike Weapon Element:
Side-Arm Weapon:
Side-Arm Name: Misha Side-Arm Description: A light machine gun stored within Aleksandra's body can project itself out of her back and fire from above or below either shoulder. The gun is not collapsible and takes up a portion of her torso's interior, it's entire dimensions would be 20 inches long, 5 inches wide and 6.5 inches deep. (calculated at a height of 5'6" to allow about 2 feet for the torso size) Side-Arm Image:
Side-Arm Attack Type: Gun Side-Arm Style: Machine Gun - Muti-Round - Accuracy is decreased by 30%. Consumes 3 types of ammo at once to fire -must be same type of ammo.)
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The Background
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History: For years a scientist from Russia had been working on a fully sentient robot, capable of fighting in place of soldiers in the military, this would require extensive customization of programming to prevent hacking but that was worries for later times. As he continued his work he ended up joining up with two other scientists who had the same idea.
Together they were quickly approaching the creation of a robot who can actually think and talk. The preemptive celebration was cut short however when the young scientist got a phone call. His wife and eldest daughter whom he hadn't seen in weeks were going out of country for business, the younger daughter was in a boarding school but the elder sister was off school due to a gas explosion.
When their plane was coming in for a landing at a small airport in the area, there was a huge explosion caused by a persona user, killing his wife and one of his daughters and summoning forth demons. The 'Eternal Divide' had destroyed his family.
Stricken by grief he couldn't bare to face his only remaining daughter, if he weren't so busy perhaps they would still all be together. Instead he focused almost mindlessly on his work.
Two years later he had completed his project, his obsession had cause one of the two scientists to quit and the other only stayed to look after his health. He had devoted his time to creating a new daughter to fill the void in his family, hoping to have two daughters again. He felt that he should name her differently from his original daughter, due to the fact he knew she was nothing like her. So he named her Aleksandra, meaning "Guardian of Humanity".
The man out of spite had recreated his daughter with two purposes, to fill the void in his family and to deal with the demons brought on by the Eternal Divide. Her first combat test resulted in her crushing four T-90 tanks with minimal damage on her side before she was sent out on missions to deal with demons which had been popping up throughout Russia.
He pulled his daughter out of school and began to act like a father finally, now that he had two daughters again. Meanwhile the android, when at home, helplessly tried to portray herself as the sister she was supposed to be, despite the fact the girl knew her sister was dead.
Three years passed with a lot of friction within the family, a lot of fighting demons and a lot of repairs. The daughter, hating the poor android for attempting to replace her older sister, the hopeless android just trying to be a friend and sister to the daughter, and the father just trying to get the two to get along. Eventually a series of events happened which softened the Daughter's opinion of the Android.
The two became inseperable in the short time before they were sent off to Endymion. The broken scientist just watched as they were sent off. He had no say in the matter and neither did his children. All he knew was that that damned city was taking his family away again.
---- Aleksandra was created by her 'Father' in a lab with the help of one scientist by the time she was sentient. She spent her first month learning a lot about human culture, linguistics and many other things to help her survive in the world.
Aleksandra knew she wasn't human but was treated as such by her father, though her new sister was significantly less kind at first. She also had a lot of people she called her friends, but in actuality they were just mechanics and scientists that were there for tuning, study and just to watch her destroy demons.
Back then she was much more social joking around with the mechanics while they tuned her weapon or repaired her body, prodding at the scientists as they did her work. But after a while they all just seemed more distant, like instead of treating her as the inquisitive and friendly teen she was they were treating her like a mindless weapon.
That combined with her sister calling her names and hating her made her significantly less stable emotionally. Eventually she ended up shutting her mind off on multiple occasions, whether it be in the field where she mindlessly murdered a few demons without hesitation as if she were just some machine to when she was at home, curled up on the couch, unresponsive.
Eventually she was asked to go to the park with her sister, another attempt from father to make them bond. It just so happened a demon appeared to them, she didn't have her paragon accessable at the time so she tore up her shirt as Misha burst from her back and wrapped around one shoulder in order to get a firing position. She opened fire to rip the thing to shreads and ended up getting smacked away.
When She recovered the thing was about to attack her sister. It was too close for her to fire so she simply reacted, charging to kill the thing. Suddenly as she struck the beast with her bare hand it was instead the hand of Paragon. She had summoned it? It didn't matter she pummeled the beast until it was nothing before collapsing, not from strain but from relief that her sister was alright.
At this point her sister stopped hating her and they became an inseparable duo, at least until Aleksandra was sent off to Endymion by the Russian Government, though she was never told the reason her father was briefed and begrudgingly accepted, mostly because he had no say in the matter.
After arriving in Endymion Aleksandra ended up being directed to a comfortable apartment her father was paying for and she was also enrolled in a school, to her it seemed likely this was a cover for whatever operation she was having to do but she'd go along with it.
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| Subject: Re: Aleksandra (Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon) Fri Mar 03, 2017 9:32 pm | |
| Ok so Characters apps looking fine.
-You need to add an Arcana.
-For COmbat Armor Strength, you can have that just in general without equipping your soulbound
-For Synthesized Melee Muscle Strength I assume you mean dex, if you do. State that it adds 10% to Dex Damage.
-For your Orgia mode strength, its gets vague. When ASSWs activate Orgia mode they have an Option of Boosting one specific thing to high levels such as having rather high strength...Gaining rather High temporary speed [I'm talking nearly moving at MPH here], or something around those lines. Your stealth view generator is not going to fly also as that type of ability would be a Soul Skill one and not a strength one. You can choose to have the Boost to Dex apply in only PVS, and the seperate attribute amp apply in pvp.
-Weakness cannot Cover two Elements I believe in one weakness. Most of the weaknesses look alright too.
-Can you give a measurement on your machine gun? Like just a small regular one on how big it is. |
| | | Zane
Posts : 86 Join date : 2017-03-02 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Aleksandra (Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon) Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:56 pm | |
| - BreakFree! wrote:
- Ok so Characters apps looking fine.
-You need to add an Arcana.
-For COmbat Armor Strength, you can have that just in general without equipping your soulbound
-For Synthesized Melee Muscle Strength I assume you mean dex, if you do. State that it adds 10% to Dex Damage.
-For your Orgia mode strength, its gets vague. When ASSWs activate Orgia mode they have an Option of Boosting one specific thing to high levels such as having rather high strength...Gaining rather High temporary speed [I'm talking nearly moving at MPH here], or something around those lines. Your stealth view generator is not going to fly also as that type of ability would be a Soul Skill one and not a strength one. You can choose to have the Boost to Dex apply in only PVS, and the seperate attribute amp apply in pvp.
-Weakness cannot Cover two Elements I believe in one weakness. Most of the weaknesses look alright too.
-Can you give a measurement on your machine gun? Like just a small regular one on how big it is. Got everything done. Hope it looks satisfactory! | |
| | | Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Aleksandra (Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon) Sun Mar 05, 2017 10:20 pm | |
| Need a height and weight on your character.
—Strength Name: High-output Proccessing —Description: Gives a 15% increase to Pend. The innate ability to asses the situation at a moments notice allows for a faster reaction time.
No standard increase to PEnd/MEnd without an Arcana or a specific defense to something. It cannot be a defense to everything.
—Strength Name: Synthesized Muscle (Inhuman) —Description: High tension mesh muscles allow for the use of strength outside their weight class allowing a +15% Dex Damage. (Stacking with the 10% in PVS and overriding it in PVP)
Define for me a bit of what the strength entails in PvP. I am aware in PvP this means you get much stronger than normal but to what extent? Can he push cars, bend bards, etc? Give examples of what they'd be able to do.
Your soulbound weapon should not cover so much of your body. You could get gauntlets or footwear, but not both.
Everything else looks good. | |
| | | Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Aleksandra (Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon) Tue Mar 07, 2017 9:13 am | |
| I still need a height and weight on your character.
—Strength Name: Synthesized Muscle (Inhuman) —Description: High tension mesh muscles allow for the use of strength outside their weight class. This allows a +15% Dex Damage. (Stacking with the 10% in PVS for 25% and overriding it in PVP for only 15%) She could potentially lift a bus off the ground when using the full extent of her Orgia strength increase and throw it up to twenty feet (though it'd more likely slide or roll due to it's size and weight,) but in combat with other humans she has a tendency to hold back some of her strength in the hopes of capturing instead of killing. This causes her to be able to at best use rip a lampost out of the ground and use it as a weapon or flip a car in scale of strength.
This strength will only be active in Orgia Mode. Outside of that you will be just as strong as anyone else so you wont be able to lift lamp posts when you're not going into Orgia Mode.
—Weakness Name: Insufficient Caster —Description: All Mental attribute Persona abilities cast by Aleksadnra have a cooldown in turns equal to the tier of ability it is. Tier 1 = cast every other turn, tier 3 = cast every 4 turns.
Just noticed this but the easy way out of the weakness is to not take any Mental ailment skills if thats what you refer to. The wording isnt specific enough to one type of skill. I would recommend changing it altogether or if you want to have it make sure it's a type of skill you could use without just avpiding the weakness by not taking any skills in it. | |
| | | Zane
Posts : 86 Join date : 2017-03-02 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Aleksandra (Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon) Wed Mar 08, 2017 3:29 am | |
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| | | Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Aleksandra (Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon) Wed Mar 08, 2017 2:35 pm | |
| height and weeight then approved | |
| | | Zane
Posts : 86 Join date : 2017-03-02 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Aleksandra (Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon) Wed Mar 08, 2017 4:03 pm | |
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| | | Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Aleksandra (Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon) Wed Mar 08, 2017 4:39 pm | |
| Does she have a place of residence or is she a drifter? Up to you, but your character is approved. | |
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