Wynona Zuke (Persona User)

Posts : 17 Join date : 2016-10-16

Wynona Zuke
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The Biography

Birth Name: Wynona Zuke
Aliases: N/A
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Birth Day: April 1
Arcana: Jester.
Place of Residence: Sunlake Palms
Evoker: Mental Shackles
Academy Semester: First
Class: 1-D

Sorority: Anime

Part/Full Time Job: None at the moment.

Appearance: Wynona is an innocent looking, pale skinned girl standing at a tall 5'10. Her eyes are a shimmering blue, which compliments her black, neck-length hair that has a blue sheen in the sunlight. Her clothes consist of warm turtleneck sweaters, black basketball shorts, blue tennis shoes, and a gold colored hairband that she wears (of course,) in her hair.

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Alternate Appearance: When the steely touch of Wynona's mask connects with her face, her clothes transform into blue and gold light armor, decorated with several buckles, belts, and designs. She's suddeny equipped with thigh-high boots, fingerless gloves, and a blue cloak with red spanning the inside.

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Personality: Wynona may seem to be an absent-minded, clumsy, and shy girl that keeps to herself in public, but don't let that fool you. It's all a guise. Wynona shows herself off as a helpless girl to garner attention and dodge responsibilities, and it works (almost) every time. Beneath the mask, Wynona is a playful, outgoing, and sociable person who just wants to get through all of her obstacles so she can rest. Some call her a slacker, but she thinks she's just a genius. She also indulges in playing online video games, as well as browsing roleplaying forums on the web.

The Potential

Strengths:

—Strength Name: Fast Fingers
—Description: After spending an intense amount of time on her computer, Wynona has developed the ability to click really fast. This gives her an extra shot with her side-arm.

—Strength Name: Focused
—Description: Spending time on the computer has also increased Wynona's focus incredibly. This allows her to deal an extra x.15 or 15% damage when using moves like Power Charge or Concentrate.

—Strength Name: Actor
—Description: Always being under a guise has strengthened Wynona's acting abilities. Expression points are doubled.

—Strength Name: Caring
—Description: When someone's in need of comforting, Wynona is there to help. Understnanding points are doubled.

—Strength Name: All Around
—Description: Wynona is a jack of all trades when it comes to combat, so she gains an additional 3% boost to whatever boost she gets in combat with the Jester Arcana during the first 3 turns of a fight.

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Weaknesses:

—Weakness Name: Leaking Mask
—Description: Being under a guise constantly hasn't only brought good things. Acting timid all the time has actually made her less courageous. Courage points are halved.

—Weakness Name: Thin Layers
—Description: Wynona's armor is light and made of cloth, making it more sensitive to magic effects like burn, freeze, and shock. 15% more chance to catch an elemental effect

—Weakness Name: Freaking out
—Description: Wynona doesn't handle well under pressure, so her chances of gaining panic and distress are raised by 15%.

—Weakness Name: Whats Studying?
—Description: Wynona doesn't study much, and therefore isn't too smart. Knowledge points halved.

—Weakness Name: The Broad Side of a Barn
—Description: Because Wynona shoots so fast, her shooting accuracy is decreased by 10%!

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Soul Bound Weapon:

Weapon Name: Soul Falchion
Weapon Description: A blade with a wooden handle and a sharp mythril blade with a golden hilt that leads into a golden streak that goes across the blade of the sword. The bottom of the blade curves outward, leaving a hole at the base of the blade to make it more aerodynamic. The blade measures 3 feet exactly and the handle adds another foot to the sword's length.
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Weapon Attack Type: Slash
Weapon Element: N/A

Side-Arm Weapon:

Side-Arm Name: Chrom
Side-Arm Description: A metallic blue revolver with golden linings running across the sights, handle, and trigger of the gun. It's a perfect fit for Wynona's hands.
Side-Arm Attack Type: Gun
Side-Arm Style: Revolver - Single Shot - Accuracy is increased by 20%. Consumes only one type of ammo per use. Can shoot only one enemy at a time.

The Background

History: Wynona was born into a family of 4: a mother, a father, herself, and her brother who was born just a moment later than she was. The Zuke family lived in Sunlake Palms, a cozy district away from the hustle of the big city life, which the family was content with. Wynona and her brother attended local schools for elementary and middle school, learning basic subjects like math and reading. This is where their friendship started to strengthen. They were both mischievous kids who would regularly pull pranks on kids in their classes that would usually go too far, and then get in trouble for it. This went on for a few years before Wynona's brother found his own group of friends and matured a little more than Wynona. Gradually, they began to drift farther apart and Wynona was left alone, unable to make any friends because of her bad prankster reputation.

This is around the time where she began to frequently use the internet, getting into MMOs and message board forums. Roleplaying on the forums gave her an idea, and at the start of her last year of middle school, she began acting as her persona, "W-wynona," a shy and clumsy girl who always made "accidental" mistakes and said sorry at least two too many times. Only students who had just moved in fell for her act, but it was a start.

Soon enough, middle school was over, and Wynona's parents had enrolled her and her brother in Seven Stars Academy where they would study and work until they decided what career they were going for. Wynona took this as a chance to wipe her slate clean and meet new people, leaving her old trickster past behind her.

Subject: Re: Wynona Zuke (Persona User) Sun Oct 16, 2016 10:49 am

Up the Thin Layers Weakness to 15%. The Final Weakness relating Luck based actions is very vague. I'd suggest a complete rewrite on it. Make sure your Strengths and Weaknesses counterweight eachother in some form. The accuracy loss on your gun should be a weakness on it's own.

Finally, I'd personally like a bit more background on her. I'm all for leaving it vague and letting the character grow, and unveiling more as the plot progresses, but I would like to see a little bit more than just the basics. It will be helpful later on, and it solidifies your character a bit more, and it'll give the DM (in this case Philemon) More to work with regarding you. Aside from that, great job. Lucina is a great Face-claim.

Cheers, and welcome to the site.

Jerry, Site Moderator

Posts : 17 Join date : 2016-10-16

Notre Dame wrote:: Up the Thin Layers Weakness to 15%. The Final Weakness relating Luck based actions is very vague. I'd suggest a complete rewrite on it. Make sure your Strengths and Weaknesses counterweight eachother in some form. The accuracy loss on your gun should be a weakness on it's own.

Finally, I'd personally like a bit more background on her. I'm all for leaving it vague and letting the character grow, and unveiling more as the plot progresses, but I would like to see a little bit more than just the basics. It will be helpful later on, and it solidifies your character a bit more, and it'll give the DM (in this case Philemon) More to work with regarding you. Aside from that, great job. Lucina is a great Face-claim.

Cheers, and welcome to the site.

Jerry, Site Moderator

Update:
+Seperated Fast Fingers into a strength and a weakness
+Tweaked history
+Evened out All Around to 5%, will change back if needed
+Upped Thin Layers to 15%
-Removed badly worded luck weakness to make room for The Broad Side of a Barn

Subject: Re: Wynona Zuke (Persona User) Mon Oct 17, 2016 5:58 am

Allround should stay at 3%, and with a sort of condition or turn limit for it's effect. Say that the 3% boost is only active during the first 3 turns, or while your health is above/below a certain amount. Those are just small examples. The rest looks good. Just add that small tid-bit to your All Around Strength, and you'll be good to go.

Posts : 17 Join date : 2016-10-16

Notre Dame wrote:: Allround should stay at 3%, and with a sort of condition or turn limit for it's effect. Say that the 3% boost is only active during the first 3 turns, or while your health is above/below a certain amount. Those are just small examples. The rest looks good. Just add that small tid-bit to your All Around Strength, and you'll be good to go.

done

Subject: Re: Wynona Zuke (Persona User) Mon Oct 17, 2016 7:20 am

Approved.

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