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Daniel
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| Subject: Maximilian Verde (Complete) (Endymion)  Tue Mar 08, 2016 1:11 am | |
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Maximilian Verde
"My Allies may fight cleanly but I cheat cuz' that's the only way to win this fight"
The Biography
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Birth Name: Maximilian Verde
Aliases: Claw
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birth Day: January 1st
Arcana: Hunger symbolizes the danger of losing control, of being consumed by power. The card also implies strength, but strength which comes through Dominance. It is not true power, but the pure bliss of abusing power.
Place of Residence: Suzie Q
Evoker: Mental Shackles
Academy Semester: 3rd
Class:
Sorority: None Yet
Part/Full Time Job: N/A
Appearance:
Maximilian Verde has short black messy hair tanned white skin and a birthmark on his face that looks like a burn scar. Maximilian stands at 6'2 and weighs 176 lbs. and has a slightly lanky frame. Maximilian Verde usually wears a button up t-shirt loose black tie dress pants an overcoat and a belt with a rectangular belt buckle.
Alternate Appearance:
Maximilian Verde when wearing his mask hunches over a lot so he looks shorter. Maximilian wears a brown stitched mask with a built in gas mask. Maximilian wears stitched together pants a rope is tied around the mask to make it look like a broken noose. He also wears a glove with needles on the individual fingers.
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Personality:
Maximilian Verde is a delinquent there is the common consensus among the masses of students, though you will here no argument from Maximilian himself on that matter. Though underneath the Delinquent nature of his he actually wants to do the right thing though he doesn't know how to do it properly. Maximilian seems to not care about himself to much but his friends he does, and would sacrifice his life willingly to protect them if they are close enough friends. Maximilian is attracted to females only though he doesn't know how to express romantic feelings that well and gets easily embarrassed easily around the opposite gender. Otherwise he's scene smoking cigarettes at Suzie Q or at school not attending classes. Magical events don't even surprise Maximilian since he comes from a long line of mystics though he himself doesn't seem to to be one of the members of his family that studies their unnatural abilities about the mystic arts he seems to know about the existence of Demons and the feud between Philemon and Nyarlphotep.
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The Potential
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Strengths:
—Strength Name: Try It, Scum!
—Description: He likes to goad opponents to attack him even if their stronger. +1 Rank to courage when starting out.
—Strength Name: Unnatural Strength
—Description: For such a lanky man he can lift very heavy objects around 150 lbs. by himself at max.
—Strength Name: Hmm, is that supposed to be Scary?
—Description: It is almost impossible to scare Maximian and fact he's more likely to scare the thing that is supposed to be scary. Gains twice as much Courage Points
—Strength Name: Big Softy
—Description: Maximilian doesn't show it often but he is a big softy who is very kind to animals and the elderly.
—Strength Name: Unnatural Pain Endurance
—Description: Maximilian can resist an unnatural amount such as it takes many many hits with weapons or fist to knock him down and out.
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—Floating Strength Name:
—Description:
Weaknesses:
—Weakness Name: How does this Contraption work?
—Description: Maximilian is terrible with technology. Gains 1/2 the amount of Intelligence points.
—Weakness Name: Dude I'm Scary Stay Away from Me
—Description: Maximilian is scene everybody by that one scary guy. Gains 1/2 the Amount of Expression points.
—Weakness Name: Smoker
—Description: Some people hate him smoking he even smokes in non smoking zones such as inside of the school buildings sometime.
—Weakness Name: Get's jumped a lot
—Description: No matter were he is Maximilian always get's jumped by people may it be other student's he thought and beat up before at school or thugs twice as old as him in the city.
—Weakness Name: I don't care if I die as long as you guys get out of here okay.
—Description: Maximilian doesn't care what happens to his own body or life hence his smoking habit and getting into fights that would get any normal person hospitalized or killed and he would gladly die for what he thinks is the proper cause.
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—Floating Weakness Name:
—Description:
Soul Bound Weapon:
Weapon Name: Needle Gauntlet
Weapon Description: A gauntlet with 1 needle that is on each individual finger they are 12 inches long.
Weapon Image:
Weapon Attack Type:Pierce
Weapon Element:
Side-Arm Weapon:
Side-Arm Name: Cross Pistol
Side-Arm Description: A 10 MM. Pistol with a red cross desighn on it.
Side-Arm Image: 
Side-Arm Attack Type: Gun
Side-Arm Style:Revolver
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The Background
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History:
A male infant born 19 years ago during New Year's Day and his name is Maximilian Verde, who is a young man born into a family of a long line of mystic's which explains his unnatural strength and pain resistance. Every baby born in the Verde Family which is his mothers side of the family is imbued with unnatural strength and resistance. The Reason why his blood carries such strange power is because one of his ancestors supposedly was such a powerful mystic. It seems his ancestor was connected to a very powerful being nobody knows who it was. During Maximilian's life he was considered the oddball because he has no interest in his own mystical abilities and just like to get into fight's since it was all he seemed to be good at.
Maximilian in later years was educated a little by his Mother about the explain about the existence of Demons and the feud between Philemon and Nyarlphotep. Maximilian as the years went on felt he belonged no where so he started fighting more and more with reckless abandon since he didn't feel like he belonged in the Verde Family, but because of his Unnatural abilities he didn't fit in with people who didn't know about the Mystical side of the World. Maximilian moved to Endymion a few days before the Great Divide, and a few week's before that took up the addiction of smoking.
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| | | | Rumi
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| | Subject: Re: Maximilian Verde (Complete) (Endymion) Tue Mar 08, 2016 6:02 am | |
| Alright, a couple of things here. First and foremost, Un-natural Strength. I'd like to have a Limit on how heavy the objects can be, and please be reasonable. Secondly, having two strengths that does the same, exact thing won't fly here, even if it's not combat oriented. Stick with one Courage Boosting Strength.
The First Weakness, although fine in terms of mechanics, makes little sense logically. Tossing Objects at people doesn't necessarily mean he lacks the will or drive to learn. It moreso shows lack of Anger Management, which should translate to an Expression or Understanding Penalty, but that's just me.
Next, the Third Weakness doesn't make much sense as a weakness. It seems more like a strength to me, taking on 10 guys on your own.
Now with Strengths and Weaknesses covered, let's have a look at your soulbound. Now, the Needle Gauntlet... I'd like a Length on the Individual Needles.
Other than that, he looks good to me. | |
| | | | Daniel
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| | Subject: Re: Maximilian Verde (Complete) (Endymion) Tue Mar 08, 2016 6:49 am | |
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| | | | Grantus
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| | Subject: Re: Maximilian Verde (Complete) (Endymion) Tue Mar 08, 2016 3:19 pm | |
| 750 lb? Even for a bodybuilder, regularly lifting 750 pounds sounds incredibly unreasonable. No person could easily lift 750 pounds regularly, that just doesn't happen. Lower the count to something more realistic. | |
| | | | Daniel
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| | Subject: Re: Maximilian Verde (Complete) (Endymion) Tue Mar 08, 2016 3:44 pm | |
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| | | | Rumi
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| | Subject: Re: Maximilian Verde (Complete) (Endymion) Tue Mar 08, 2016 4:19 pm | |
| 400 lbs is still a bit much... 100, maybe 150 lbs is around the acceptible weight range for someone who lifts regularly as a hobby. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Maximilian Verde (Complete) (Endymion) Tue Mar 08, 2016 4:24 pm | |
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| | | | Grantus
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| | Subject: Re: Maximilian Verde (Complete) (Endymion) Tue Mar 08, 2016 4:31 pm | |
| Bear in mind he wouldn't be able to just randomly lift 400 lb. He would have to focus his attention on it. Say that weight was on a vehicle, he would naturally have to focus and leave himself vulnerable to lift that much weight. As long as you understand that, you're approved. | |
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