Raia Jehuty

Posts : 527 Join date : 2013-04-05

Raia Shibuya
Try to start every day with the most important thing you have to do.

The Biography

Birth Name:Raia Jehuty
Aliases: Raia Jehuty, Raia, Jehuty
Gender: Male
Age:21
Birth Day:October 9
Arcana: Emperor Arcana are Personas typically excelling in lightning-based and physical attacks. Users of this Arcana have a 15% boost in lightning based skills or strike attacks. *Picking Lightning*
Place of Residence: Endymion, Formerly Egypt
Academy Semester: First
Class: (We'll fill this in once you're approved. This will be your class in school)

Sorority: Demon Research

Part/Full Time Job: Depends on whats available

Appearance: Raia has dark skin, medium-length white hair, and green eyes. It's a bit similar to the Shibuya traits of having grayish white hair a darker skin tone, the only thing differing from him is the different eye color and the fact that his hair is more lengthy. His physique is a tad muscular to a certain degree, given the fact that most of his life he had to be physical on certain situations or subjects. Raia wears a white off-the-shoulder tunic, white shorts, a thick golden belt, and gladiator-style sandals. That was the outfit he wore in egypt for a while, so it was a force of habit and took a bit to adjust to the casual wear that Endymion sport. With that, it would be a green hoodie jacket with a black undershirt. His black jeans would be rolled up towards his ankles and he would also wear black converses. Behind his jeans, there would be a small lined design around the top base and a small chain attached to the left side. Whenever hes around the academy, it would be a kahaki vest with a white dress shirt under it. He would also sport a green and black checkered pants and black shoes.

Raia's main height is 6'1 and he's 175 pounds

outfit 1

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Outfit 2

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Personality: When it comes to Raia, he seems to have a very exacting personality. Raia can be analytical up to certain degree, trying to keep himself thinking and his task oriented attitude keeps his busy with a few things. Thats mostly towards work, but the way he lived in captivity for most of his life kind of made him adopt a harsh tone towards life. Whenever he tries to be fun-loving, there would always be a little thing to reminds him just how cruel the world really is. Raia is rebellious at heart, something that also grown on him in the past. He doesn't take kindly to being ordered around and might not respond in a desired way. Overall, even with his analytical prowess like kogami used to have when he was alive, Raia also adopted his daring nature. When the time comes, Raia is willing to take a risk if he absolutely has to. With that being said, he has a little bit of a tendency to be selfish at random moments, focusing on himself in order to protect himself. It might seem like a mixed bag of emotions, but they all create a perfect circle that makes Raia who he is.

Sadly enough, it does come with its downsides, Raia's passion can make him seem like a hothead when he really isn't. Raia is emotionally fragile as well, making him a bit scared to open his heart in fear of rejection or disappointment. Especially when it comes to those who dont meet Raia's self appointed standards "That no one seems to know about", he can be a little judgmental as well.

The Potential

Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)

—Strength Name: Seasoned Pit Fighter
—Description: With the early years of his life that Raia has spent fighting in the pit, his experience with his shadow weapon type or anything modeled after is exceptional, based off of his own refined style that's not limited to any natural fundamental. This makes Raia dangerous and unpredictable.

—Strength Name: Feats of strength
—Description: Considering Raia's strength , the aparent bloodline of being freakishly strong in the shibuya family still seems active. Tying that in with his "physical past" Raia has basically honed his body to access those freakish feats of strength at will. His brain is able to summon greater reserves of power that his body has, and he develops a small case of analgesia during it. This increases his Dexterity by 15%

—Strength Name: Disciplined
—Description: Considering Raia's character, he actually managed discipline and self-control. It's opposite of Kogami, one of Raia's philosophies is doing the most important thing of the day first and foremost. Maintaining focus on his goals like this is one of the things that makes Raia stand out in a sense, keeping his mind focused on his work or goals, and avoiding mental disturbances. If Raia's dedicates his time to a job or social quality gain first thing in the morning, he gets a 20% bonus upon completion.

—Strength Name:Snake's swiftness
—Description:Raia has honed his speed to exceptional speeds concerning his chosen weapon of choice. This allows him to be quick on the uptake, with an extra sense of movement in his actions. In battle Raia is able to do two Dex attacks

—Strength Name: Symbiote weapon
—Description:Due to the fact that his demon weapon is actually a symbiote, Raia can actually wear the weapon like some formatted layer of skin. The symbiote retracts and dwells from inside of the body, but covers up Raia when needed in time fo battle. In a sense, it provides a sort of suit that looks a little like this, there is black strand tattoos around his eyes and his mouth is mostly covered. Pic 1

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((A floating Strength is a strength you've gained inRP. For example, if you were on a Kendo team for some time, you'd naturally know Kendo which is where this strength would come in. However, be aware, it will not be as strong as any of your actual strengths and is a small plus)

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Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)

—Weakness Name: Conseverative
—Description: When it comes to Raia's ability to attack twice, he more than likely likes to conserve energy from time to time. After the extra attack, raia has a 1 post cool down before doing the extra dex attack again.

—Weakness Name:Lazy Nightster
—Description: High dedication to the mornings kind of makes Raia a bit lowly dedicated to things involving the night. The 20% increase is reversed to social quality gains or jobs involving the night time, giving them a 20% decrease upon completion.

—Weakness Name: Still hurts
—Description: Because you can't feel it, doesn't mean its not real. Raia analgesia's case when he's utilizing his gifted strength makes him quite unaware of the damage that's really done to his body, if there was any. Raia takes 15% more damage from dex based attacks.

—Weakness Name: Wait ,Y-you want... M-m-more than that?
—Description: Romance is a pretty tough thing for Raia in a way. When he senses a certain bond or relationship he has with someone shooting out of the friend zone, he doesn't necessarily know how to convey his feelings or respond appropriately. You would have to guide him a little.

—Weakness Name: A bit selfish
—Description: In the pits, the only person you could count on was yourself.This was reinforced after his dad turned him into a prized fighter. This could go from taking all of the candy from the candy bag for himself. not sharing his ice cream, and even putting his own life over someone else. This can be combated with his discipline and a strong bond depending on the situation, but his selfishness can be a bit picky.

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((A floating weakness is one gained in RP. It could be a fear you inherited during RP, or an injury that hinders your character. Some can be temporary while others can be permanent.)

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Shadow/Demon Weapon: ((This is the both a Weapon and a Shadow/Demon. You have a parasitic relationship with this Shadow/Demon, and as such you will always want it near you as it is the source of your power. Unlike Soulbound Weapons, this Shadow/Demon Weapon cannot be summoned and will always remain active, meaning you'll have to keep it on you at all times.))

Weapon Name: Calor
Weapon Description: Calor is a symbiote weapon that covers the majority of Raia's entire body. However, when it comes to actual soulbound attacks it s a mixture of two things in general. It's either the whole body due to the fact that it smothers Raia up to the point that his basic attacks utalize his soulbound, or appendage strands that can shoot out from Raia's body that are up to 10 meters long in lengdt due to the majority of Calor's being being served as a suit
Weapon Image: (Not necessary)
Weapon Attack Type: Slash
Weapon Element: (Leave this blank. Only special weapons obtain an element behind its blows.)

Side-Arm Weapon:

Side-Arm Name: Belrater
Side-Arm Description: A military looking shotgun with a brown handle and a metallic base.
Side-Arm Image: Raia Jehuty 414-355-productionKSG_left_4051hires

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Side-Arm Attack Type: Gun
Side-Arm Style: Shotgun - Scatter Shot - Accuracy is decreased by 30%. Consumes 3 types of ammo at once to fire -must be same type of ammo. Can shoot all enemies with one attack.

The Background

History: Maybe it was the untold story of the Shibuya family, but Kogami was never really alone. Truth be told, his mother was actually still alive, there was quite a few loan sharks that came to collect on some debts that were not paid once Ryogami met his demise in the wrestling ring on some tour, it was the result of some freak accident. Witht hat being said, she gave up custody of Kogami to his grandmother and she ran, cutting ties in hope that maybe Kogami could have a better life. On her way to some sort of sanctuary from all of the thugs and madness, she found her way to egypt. At that point, Kogami's mother met another man by the mane of Jashim, some sort of tycoon businessman that took a liking to her.

There was some regrets in her heart that her son was out there thinking she was dead, and she had the heavy regrets of not being able to raise a child. A few more years into their marriage, she had Raia in her mid 40's. Impressively enough, Raia was healthy and born with no sort of defects, but his mother didn't survive the birthing process. All Raia had was Jashim, in which Raia took on the last name Jehuty from then on. The source of Jashim's wealth was much of a secret to Raia's mother, but it would soon be revealed that he was participating in bets based on an underground game. The people they betted on were players, who had strange powers and turned into monstrous beings when pushed to a limit.

One day, when Raia was five, the wrong bet was made, leaving Jashim to lose it all. His only collateral was his son, in order to keep his fortune. The idea was to adopt Raia into the game, if he survived the experiments and wins 12 straight rounds, him and his father were free to go and off the hook. Little did Raia know, this would change his life forever. He was fused, he was used, he was abused, pretty much knowing how the world truly worked while being treated as his fathers prized fighter. Raia was self taught, the experience of being raised as a pit fighter molded him and his personality.

Surprisingly so, the earnings that Raia made as an underdog for his father was triple the amount he owed. He took his earnings, paid off his debt, and left for some unknown reason. Just like that, Raia became a discarded son with no sort of explanation whatsoever, it was left to his discreteness that he was sold to the pits. Raia argued that he earned his freedom, in which they complied, but they responded briefly and cruelty afterwards. "What do you have left in this world?"

Such a thing was true, what did Raia have? He wasn't sure himself, but he sought for power. Even more power than he contained, something he didn't have. As long as he has power, he has the ability of change if he uses it correctly. With that, he found his way over to Endymion, knowing nothing but the harsh weather, the sand, and his burdens. What he sought was demons, but he didn't know it yet. Slowly but surely, he would find his place in the world, for better or worse.

Posts : 527 Join date : 2013-04-05

Done, id like to think...

Subject: Re: Raia Jehuty Thu Jan 28, 2016 11:46 pm

Mmmm...Alright. Here we go:

1. Outfit 2 under appearance is a broken picture in the spoiler.

2. —Strength Name: Seasoned Pit Fighter
—Description: With the early years of his life that Raia has spent fighting in the pit, his experience with his shadow weapon type or anything modeled after is exceptional, based off of his own refined style. Also, Raia's veteran senses in fighting in the pits that was full of dangerous traps while focusing on his opponent, made him highly adept of surveying the surroundings around him.
Perhaps I am being a bit picky here; however, I think the pit fighting should be one strength and the surveying another if you want them to sit strong; however, you do have the option of leaving it as it is. Just remember if someone specializes in the surveying or fighting arena, they will have an advantage over you.

3. —Weakness Name: Still hurts
—Description: Because you can't feel lit, doesn't mean its not real. Raia analgesia's case when hes utilizing his gifted strength makes him quite unaware of the damage that's really doesn't' to his body, if there was any. It kind of make second guess his actual limitations, second judging his sensitivity to pain and returning it at the most random or even worst moments.
I get not feeling the pain, so the last sentence is that saying that once it is over all the pain comes crashing in or is it implying something else? I am not understanding the end result.

4. Shadow Weapon is missing a name in the Weapon spot.

Outside of these tweaks I see nothing wrong with the app. Fix it and you'll have my approval.

Posts : 527 Join date : 2013-04-05

Edited

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30

Add some kind of penalty to counter the 15% boost to dexterity. For example, make a weakness have you take 15% more damage from dex or something.

Posts : 527 Join date : 2013-04-05

ok edited again

Subject: Re: Raia Jehuty Fri Jan 29, 2016 5:59 pm

It looks good to go. Approved.

Posts : 527 Join date : 2013-04-05

edited weapon and a strength

Subject: Re: Raia Jehuty Sun Mar 06, 2016 2:10 pm

Hm. Alright.

Unrelated to the edits, but it would be nice if you could add in his height and weight as well.

Other than that...the discipline strength. You should specify what kind of bonus. Is it a specific extra percentage gain or such? Also, if it nets you more social quality points or something like VC for jobs, you ought to have some weakness to balance it too.

You also seem to have two combat strengths that affect stats and such (double dex and dex boost), plus the ability to manipulate your weapon specifically. While your only directly combat related weakness is taking extra dex damage. You should balance that a bit as well. Combat strengths and weaknesses should be relatively equal in effect and amount.

Subject: Re: Raia Jehuty Sun Mar 06, 2016 2:47 pm

Alright, but you'll still need to tweak the gain boost thing a bit. You say job, but what would he get more of for completing a job? Also, if traits mean social qualities, then you'd be better off writing it as that, so that no one gets confused.

You'll need something to counter that tho. Not a combat weakness, but one nonetheless. Like perhaps gaining less points in certain other situations or getting points slower in a certain quality etc. Because gaining 20% extra stuff without any drawback in the same area won't do.

You can make the ailment one less severe on the other hand. You could limit it to only 3 specific ailments for example, rather than having it affect all of them, since there are a lot of ailments in total.

Subject: Re: Raia Jehuty Sun Mar 06, 2016 2:51 pm

Actually, you could just replace the ailment one with the weakness towards points, tbh. It should be enough with the dex thing you made.

Posts : 527 Join date : 2013-04-05

ok edited

Subject: Re: Raia Jehuty Sun Mar 06, 2016 3:03 pm

Approved ~

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