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Subject: Kai Togami (PU for Side Plot) Mon Nov 02, 2015 3:35 am
Kai Togami "What did you say we needed to do again?"
The Biography
Birth Name: Kai Togami Aliases: Dusty Gender: Male Age: 18 Birth Day: August 7 Arcana: Fool. Evoker: Tarot Card (P4 Style) Place of Residence: His apartment in Eirini Job : Trainee soldier
Appearance: Kai is a simple looking guy with short brown hair that he rarely styles, a simple chin and nose, slightly larger ears, and a slightly lighter skin color. His eyes are goldfish brown in color, and his body is somewhat heavier set. The one thing that makes him stand out is a scar that runs along his left cheekbone. He weighs about 200 lbs. and is about 6 feet and 7 inches tall, often making him stand taller than most other people. He often wears a simple tan pair of cargo pants and a green shirt when not in uniform.
Personality: When you first meet him, Kai will seem... normal, though it's what's under the surface that can show his "true self". He tries to be polite and avoids conflict but he has no qualms about defending himself if necessary. He takes insults and dwells on them a little longer than he should... He is a faithful friend ready to help his friends, though he is a little gullible... He also blames himself for the harm that has befallen his family, though there wasn't anything he could do to stop it.
The Potential
Strengths:
—Strength Name: Self Trained —Description: Kai has been training himself outside the colony, and has gotten used to being scared by the Sfalma that are outside. (15% Resistance to Panic)
—Strength Name: Good Cook —Description: Kai has the skill to cook good tasting meals with few ingredients, and he could stretch the meal to last a long time if he wanted to. Kai needs materials and a 400 word post to make them. (Food items he has made do different effects based on the things he uses to cook in it.)
He can get materials from enemy drops and stores.
—Strength Name: Survival Training —Description: Kai was trained by his father, to be able to survive and even thrive in most environments, which has given him the ability to move faster in nature settings. (He and his group moves 10% further on nature based dungeons/floors per post.)
—Strength Name: Resistant Blood —Description: Kai has a natural resistance to poisons and diseases thanks to his DNA (15% resistance to poison)
—Strength Name: —Description:
Weaknesses:
—Weakness Name: Oblivious —Description: Kai tends to be oblivious unless on alert, often meaning he sometimes misses things or foes sometimes have better opportunity's to sneak up on him.
—Weakness Name: Martyr Syndrome —Description: Kai blames himself for bringing his friends into dangerous situations, sometimes becoming stressed out. (Giving Kai a 15% chance to become Distressed or Raged when a friend get's harmed in battle)
—Weakness Name: Passive —Description: Kai is naturally peaceful, giving him a dislike for harming other people or things that look like people, yet he will fight back if needed.
—Weakness Name: Over Eager —Description: Kai has a 10% chance to use 5% more HP or SP when using a skill.
—Weakness Name: —Description:
Soul Bound Weapon:
Weapon Name: Pillow-Talk Weapon Description: It looks like a regular, 1foot long, wooden flute that can even play music until he activates it. After that, the flute changes to a katana with a 8 inch long Dragon styled hilt, a square hand-guard that looks like it was made from black steel, and a 5 foot blade that seams to sing while it slashes. Weapon Image: Not Available.... Weapon Attack Type: Slash Weapon Element:
The Background
History: Kai has always be a curious guy. Ever since he could walk, He's been wondering and exploring, often getting himself in trouble, to his parents dismay. Both Kai and his father often went out of the colony, though they almost always stayed close to the walls and gates to stay safe.
Kai's father was a hunter, often going out of town and killing game to sell or feed his family. As such, he was gone for weeks at a time often making Kai's mother worry. One day after His father came home from hunting, some of the Sfalma from outside found a way in and attacked the colony. Kai's parents were some of the ones who perished in that attack...
Life after that was hard on Kai, he had many times where he didn't know where his next meal was going to come from, that was until He was enlisted into the army by someone he never knew... The army life has been good to him though, giving him a roof overhead and 3 square meals a day.
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Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
Subject: Re: Kai Togami (PU for Side Plot) Thu Nov 05, 2015 7:39 pm
Your strengths need to be a bit more balanced. Usually a strength for resisting ailments is one ailment per strength, so you need to restrict that to one ailment between Fear and Panic. To balance it, you need a 15% higher susceptibility to another ailment. 3% is way too small, along with removal of the condition if your strength has no such condition. Same for Poison. Add another ailment weakness that makes up for it or something that balances it overall. For your cooking, you can do that, but you need a way to make it. Certain materials or perhaps a word count. You cannot make the food for free. In the sideplot there are material drops that you can use for food if you so choose. As for your final weakness, what is the chance and how much HP/SP would drain from you when using a skill?
Also, your environmental strength, it doesn't exactly help you cause it's so vague, but what do you mean by easier navigation? Are you faster? Is it a leadership strength? Make sure to iron these strengths/weaknesses so it makes more sense.
Also, describe the dimensions of your soulbound weapon.
Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
Subject: Re: Kai Togami (PU for Side Plot) Thu Nov 05, 2015 9:40 pm
You still need quite a longer word count to make these meals. To be able to pick either, you need at least probably a 500 or so word count. Talk to Ri-tan about the materials you might need so you can add them to be specific.
Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
Subject: Re: Kai Togami (PU for Side Plot) Sat Nov 07, 2015 11:28 pm