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| Takabe's Initial persona | |
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HighSchoolLevel:Persona
Posts : 38 Join date : 2014-12-08
| Subject: Takabe's Initial persona Wed Dec 10, 2014 12:57 pm | |
| Persona Name:PrometheusPersona Type:Initial Persona Persona’s Arcana: Hanged man Owner: Hiro takabe Persona Appearance:Persona Background: Prometheus was one of the Titans to side with Zeus and his siblings in the great war against the Titans, the original occupiers of Mount Olympus. When Zeus won the war and banished Prometheus' brethren to Tartarus for eternity, Prometheus and his brother Epimethius were given the task of populating the earth with creations. Epimetheus, who created the beasts of the world, gave his creations all of the gifts that could be bestowed, leaving Prometheus with nothing to give to Humanity. To compensate, Prometheus stole fire from Mount Olympus, incurring Zeus' wrath. However, it wasn't until he taught mankind how to trick the gods that he was given his ultimate punishment. Chained to a rock for all time, his liver was eaten every day by a great eagle sent by Zeus. Immortal, he could never die and his liver would regrow. And so he suffered, until the Greek hero Herakles freed him from his torment during the course of his famous Twelve Labors. Strengths:StrikeWeaknesses:LightningPassive Boosts: The Persona of the Hanged Man Arcana are commonly Personas excelling in survivability. Users have a latent 15% boost in health and defense. Persona Skill List: Skill 1:AgiSkill 2: BashSkill 3: Double FangsSkill 4: (Unlocked once forming your first Social Link; Must be Tier 2 Skill or Lower)Skill 5: (Must have used your Persona fifteen times in combat; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)Skill 6: (Unlocked once using your Persona thirty times in combat and having formed three rank three or more social links; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)Skill 7: (Unlocked once using your Persona to help atleast two friends overcome their Shadow; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)Skill 8: (Unlocked after defeating your fifth Dungeon Master and Persona used 50 times in combat; Must be a Tier 3 Skill or Lower)Fusion Attack: Fusion Attack Name:Chains and Stones Persona Name:Prometheus Type of Damage:Lightning Description:So what happens is the two personas chain the shadow to a bolder and a great eagle will Electrocute the shadow. Human Skill Name: Crimson Impact Persona Name:Tier: Tier 1 Cost: 7% Type of Damage: strike Description: this is a hit or miss move so what happens basically is that my guy rushes at the enemy and does a strong strike attack with his weapon, the force of blow is how fast he goes thankfully he is already fast but he may get tired after the attack, this also has 10% chance to enrage the shadow.
Last edited by HighSchoolLevel:Persona on Fri Dec 12, 2014 2:04 pm; edited 10 times in total | |
| | | Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Wed Dec 10, 2014 1:56 pm | |
| Just a few things to mention regarding your Persona. Be sure to check the skill list and look at what skills are available to you, since they are also organized by tier, and if you saw, your first three skills are Tier 1. We don't have the skills you picked so make sure to find good substitutes. Another thing is that the P2 and P3 route are taken with physical elements, so we have 3 to choose from (Slash, Strike, Pierce). You unfortunately cannot pick all three for a strength.
Also, since it's your Initial Persona, you can't have any Almighty attacks, and that includes your fusion. You can have a single element for it and it's also Tier 3 in total ability, so be sure to ask for help or look up the skills and Persona sheets to find a reference so that can be fixed. For physical skills, we go by percentages when giving a cost so depending on the skill it may cost 5% or 8%. Just make sure if it's physical the cost is a percentage rather than a number. Also, a Human Skill is a skill you can use without your Persona and it can be almost anything you can think of whether it's an attack or utility, but make sure to be specific on what you mean by "powerful blow" That way it won't cause confusion. Or if you change it after all this, make sure to be clear on what it does.
Once all of that is said and done, you'll be approved! | |
| | | HighSchoolLevel:Persona
Posts : 38 Join date : 2014-12-08
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Thu Dec 11, 2014 10:47 am | |
| Okay i did the edits though i'm not sure how to do the whole percentage thing i'll fix if i need to. | |
| | | Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Thu Dec 11, 2014 11:41 am | |
| You need to be specific on what your Human Skill does. It sounds like all he's doing is just attacking, which is free if you just use your soulbound weapon. Maybe you could add something like an extra small bonus to damage or a chance to inflict an ailment if you just want it to be a normal attack. Also, you need to describe your fusion attack and change it into something. Also, if you noticed in the skill list, skills have the Tier next to them, and your first skills have to be Tier 1, so you can't start with Maragidyne or Twin Shot unfortunately. Make sure to fix that and you're approved. | |
| | | HighSchoolLevel:Persona
Posts : 38 Join date : 2014-12-08
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Thu Dec 11, 2014 12:53 pm | |
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| | | Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Thu Dec 11, 2014 12:59 pm | |
| Don't forget your fusion attack and Human Skill. You can add something to it if all you want to do is make it an attack. You could add extra damage (10%), maybe have a 10% chance to inflict an ailment, whatever you can think of as long as you make it Tier 1 in ability. | |
| | | HighSchoolLevel:Persona
Posts : 38 Join date : 2014-12-08
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Fri Dec 12, 2014 4:18 am | |
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| | | Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Fri Dec 12, 2014 11:07 am | |
| Your fusion can only have one element. Also, physical attacks have a 10% chance to critically hit or down the Shadow anyway. So that can be a given while you add something else to it. | |
| | | HighSchoolLevel:Persona
Posts : 38 Join date : 2014-12-08
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Fri Dec 12, 2014 11:31 am | |
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| | | Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Fri Dec 12, 2014 11:36 am | |
| If you don't want to alter your HS then that's fine, but know that an attack like that is free anyway since you won't be using your Person for it. Feel free to add something smaller to it if you want. | |
| | | HighSchoolLevel:Persona
Posts : 38 Join date : 2014-12-08
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Fri Dec 12, 2014 12:03 pm | |
| Okay anything else i need to edit | |
| | | Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Fri Dec 12, 2014 1:01 pm | |
| Make the cost 7% and you're approved. | |
| | | HighSchoolLevel:Persona
Posts : 38 Join date : 2014-12-08
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Fri Dec 12, 2014 1:58 pm | |
| *Sleeping and wakes up still half asleep*"7? er okay" *Falls back to sleep* | |
| | | Grantus
Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Takabe's Initial persona Fri Dec 12, 2014 2:00 pm | |
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