Jacque [Completed] Persona user

The Biography

Birth Name:Jacque
Aliases:[_]
Gender:Male
Age:10
Birth Day:April 1st
Arcana:Sun
Evoker:Mask of the persona
Place of Residence:N/A
School Year:N/A
After School Club:N/A

Part Time Job:N/A

Appearance:Jacque Stands about 4 feet 2 1/2 inches and average
build and weight (70 pounds). He wears a Blue shirt with a beheaded t-rex on it
[at least that's what he says]he also wears red shorts and blue
shoes.

Jacque has Brown-ish black-ish grey-ish hair color, and his eye color is a light brown almost orange under some lights.



Personality:Jacque is a nice and friendly to almost everyone he meets, He even makes friend with people without the best of interests for the world/aka Villains/anti-hero.
Jacque is still a kid so he is brash and hyper active. He can also take one hell of a beating and return the favor. Jacque is easily excited so he becomes very hyper and it takes a day for him to tucker out, but even then he recuperates fast.
 
The Potential


Strengths:Durable,Friendly,Hope

—Strength Name:Durable
—Description:Hes like a rock that you need another rock to crack
he can take one hell beating and be ready for the next onslaught


—Strength Name:Friendly
—Description:Jacque makes friends easily and usually has a good bond with them.

—Strength Name:Hope
—Description:He believes no matter what be it Death,Depression,or lost that there is a way out,a way to escape,a way for new path,a new future,a better future.  

Weaknesses: Absentminded,Brash,arrogant, Accuracy

—Weakness name:Absentminded
—Description:He sometimes gets of track when doing something

—Weakness Name:Brash
—Description:He usually rushes into this letting the battle decide the outcome instead of going through long pages of dialog.


—Weakness Name: arrogant
—Description:He is often over confident of his ability

—Weakness Name: Accuracy/slow
—Description:His Accuracy could be better he misses at times due to him and his weapon weight     

Soul Bound Weapon:He has a épées called "Pollox"
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His épées are 31cm in Length.
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Weapon Name:Pollox
Weapon Description:is the modern derivative of the dueling sword
Weapon Image:[Look it up]
Weapon Attack Type:Slash
Weapon Element:

The Background

Jacque Was born 2004 April 1st in America and raised by his mom, his dad moved to japan for "reasons", so he ended up living with his mother most of the time and only ever talked to his dad via mail and phone calls.

When Jacque was six his uncle died of lung cancer,and what made is worst was that his house was robbed by a gang of thieves and burned down his house in the process.

Jacque has always been dealt a bad hand from Being beaten by a group of people and almost Drowning several times to the point that Jacque is terrified of water.

Jacque later was sent to go live with his dad, his mom not being able to support her son due financial problems so she did the only thing she could. Jacque started living in Japan by the age of 8 to present day where he is now 10.

Leading up to now Jacque has been having Dreams ever since his arrival about people in his life time he has never met Jacque has a feeling this won't be the end of it either.

[As i said tell me if you want me to edit it]

The Wild Card positions are taken, so I take it you'll be a Persona-User? Make sure to add more to your appearance to make it the appropriate length. Include his height, weight and build. Also, to balance out your strengths for fighting, have a couple of combat-related weakness, like perhaps he is slow or something. As for your soulbound weapon, I need the length it is to avoid confusion. Finally, the requirement for history is at least two paragraphs, and I am sure there is more to your character that you can add, so try to at least hit that threshold. Once that is all fixed, you'll be approved.

Mk, Gran said he was busy, so I'm checking this time. Your appearance is still kind of short, it doesn't even reach two lines, really. You should aim for about 4 lines at the very least, if you can't think of more. Maybe write it out in full sentences instead of just words separated by kommas? Also, build can do, but for the weight you should have a definite number just like heigth.

The low HP strength doesn't make too much sense. Maybe if you specified that he has 5/10% or so less than he would have, as we go by set stats here. Still, it kind of contradicts your Durable strength. You say he can take a hell of a beating. If he has really low HP and can die quickly, that is a really weird combination. It doesn't really go hand in hand. Maybe pick something different?

Approved