Lancelot (Scrapped)

Sorry.

Well, since you already have this finished, I'll give you some points, so you can think on it while you finish your actual character ~

First, your Strength. It can't be Physical as a whole. There are three types of Physical attacks in total : Pierce, Slash and Strike. You'd have to choose only one of the three to be strong against. You cannot be strong against all, as that would count for three strengths in total.

Second, the Human Skill. It's good that you thought of giving it some backslash to even out the amount of attacking, still that won't do. Keep in mind that it is T1. If you look at the Skill list, you can see that none of the T1 skills perform more than 2 attacks in succession against a single target, and only one if it's AoE. So this won't work the way it is. You should try to tone down the number of
blows performed. Maybe 3 could work with a small setback, if you really want multiple ( in terms that it'll be single target) . The miss thing as well, you can't really put in what will happen if you miss already, not in the skill itself. Because in PvP, it would be a bit overboard to have an attack continue after the other dodges just like that. You should just put what kind of attacks he performs, regardless of the opponents reaction to keep it fair for others.

Also, is the attack supposed to be a single target or AoE? Because at the beginning you refer to the actions against a single enemy, yet at the end you have an AoE blow. You should define that better, as a skill is usually one or the other. If you want you could have it so you can choose at the beginning whether he attacks one person or more, or something along those lines.  You might have to rework the way he attacks then though.

And as for the little bit that says that the damage dealt depends on the overloading, well, the damage is set in stone by the Tier of the attack, so it would be all the same nevertheless, just so you know.

I won't say anything on the cost yet, in case you change this up : )

That is all I think ~ If you have any troubles, ask ~

I've edited the strengths and my human skill, and have a request:

I think Medraut/Mordred should be my prime persona instead, but i have no replacement for him at the moment. It would help me a fair bit if someone could help me find a replacement for medraut, so if you could find one, please tell me. Thanks.

Allright, looks good now ~

Just a little thing. Since the style of your human skill relates to a single target pierce attack, there is no need for the cost to be that high. You can lower it down to 5% ^^ Or if the fact that he throws it after hitting the opponent means another attack, making it a two hit, then 8 % ( I'm too sleepy to try and figure it out now lol)

As for your Persona, I can try to look. But, perhaps give me some pointers of what style would you like? Something similar to Medraut, or? ~

( Funny how I see a reference to this anime a second time in a short time on this forum...I wonder...)

The kind of style would be mostly just a knight, but i'd appreciate it if it could be similar to medraut.
I WAS going to use lancelot, but someone beat me to the punch, another Anti-shadow suppression weapon at that. Sorry for being vague, but i'm having trouble describing it. Thanks in advance.

Nevermind, turns out i had a few other choices. Would erebus be okay as a Prime persona, or is it a bit much?

Ah, well, it should be fine. The appearance and the Persona you use isn't that important, it's mostly about the skills you pick for it. So, Erebus can work just fine.


Although, I don't remember a character with Lancelot even being active in RP, and I've been here long enough, I believe. Most likely it was someone from old plot and inactive, so they wouldn't even be relevant anymore. And it's technically allowed to have a Persona same as someone else, if you really want that exact one. So, you could have Lancelot if you wanted to.

Okay then, i'll start working on Aru now that i can finish this.
Thanks for your help.

M'kay.

You're welcome. Glad to have been of help ^^