Edgar's Tainted Persona - Ozamus

Persona Name: Ozamus
Persona Type: Tainted Persona

Persona's Arcana:Devil

Owner: Edgar Thiers

Persona Appearance:

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With crackle in the clouds and a flicker of flames that follows it's wake, Ozamus has the appearances of an entity of death and anguish. Two bitter eyes at it's a target with an infernal madness, with a constant cackling that rushes from its cavernous mouth in an attempt to intimidate people. Magma-like leathery skin with dark energy adorns its long neck, which itself is glowing with incredible intensity with a strange millennium symbol. Quick breathing escapes the creature's narrow nostrils set within a sinewy nose.

Its withered head sits atop a massive, heavy body, being 10 feet tall  3 feet wide, Otherworldly faces bulge from its skin, but you can only guess at the origins. It also contains a 5-foot tendril-like tail that slides behind it, tendril-like veins protrude from it in several places. Two humongous wings extend themselves, fully resembling webbed blackened bones. It is truly a horror unlike any known imagination.

Persona Background: Mainly born from Edgar's soul, Ozamus has lost it's "True name" and only stands as a shadow of it's former self. It is actually Ozymandias, otherwise known as Ramesses II. They are the ruler of Upper Egypt for 67 years in the 13th century BC, who had defeated the Hittites, the Nubians and the Canaanites, hugely expanded the bounds of Egypt, and built Thebes into a city of 100 gates, many covered in gold and silver.  The majority of his legacy is traced back to the famed poem.

“I met a traveller from an antique land
Who said: Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
Stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand,
Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown,
And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
The hand that mocked them and the heart that fed:
And on the pedestal these words appear:
‘My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!’
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare
The lone and level sands stretch far away.”

Strengths: Wind

Weaknesses: Earth

Passive Boosts:  Pros: The Persona of the Devil Arcana are commonly Persona excelling in support skills. Users have a latent 15% boost in buff/debuff skills.

Tainted Persona Skill List: ((Skill List can be found here. Your skills grow in order, meaning you must unlock Skill 4 to get to Skill 5 and so on.))

Skill 1: Invigorate 1 | Recovers 3 SP on each user turn | Passive | Tier 1
Skill 2: Mazio | Inflicts a small amount of Electricity damage to all enemies. | 6 SP | Tier 1
Skill 3: Tarunda | Lowers one enemy's Attack by 30% for 3 turns. | 6 SP | Tier 2
Skill 4: (Unlocked once using your Tainted Persona 25 times in PvS combat; Must be Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
Skill 5: (Unlocked once winning atleast 10 PvS battles and using your Persona an additional 30 times in PvS combat; Must be a Tier 3 Skill or Lower)
Skill 6: (Unlocked once using your Tainted Persona an additional 35 times in PvS combat or capturing a Psyche Terrorist above your level; Must be a Tier 3 Skill or Lower)
Skill 7: (Unlocked once completing a mission posted solely for cadets and using your Persona an additional 45 times in PvS combat; Must be a Tier 4 Skill or Lower)
Skill 8: (Unlocked after defeating one of the NPC Velvet Attendants in combat or using your Persona an additional 45 times in PvS combat; Must be a Tier 4 Skill or Lower)

Umbral Skill List: ((The Umbral Skill List can be found here. These Skills can be picked up after your character levels up, and the skill slots are modular, as in you can slot in skills you've unlocked in the 4 open slots before you start a Dungeon Thread, Mission or PvP Fight. These skills evolve as you keep using them. Each character starts out with a Single Umbral Skill of their choice among those on the Umbral Skill List.))
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Tainted Soul: (The Ultimate fusion between you and your Tainted Persona. When using this, your Persona fuses within your soul, corrupting it and transforming you into a higher being temporarily. Once this is done, you take on a more otherworldy appearance thanks to being possessed by your Tainted Persona, but your stats are all doubled. This form lasts for three turns, and once it is over you revert back to your original form and all your stats are reverted to 1 till the end of the topic or you use an item/skill to recover. This can only be used once per topic and once being used, your Tainted Persona can no longer be used within the same topic.)

Possessed Form Name: Ezamus
Persona Name: Ozamus
Possessed Form Appearance:

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Description: Ozamus Swallows Edgar in his chest and closes up as if he's an egg or a turtle. Afterward, Edgar breaks out of it in his new demonic, looking like a fusion of his persona and a human.  Ozamus's eye is on the bicep of the fusion's right claw and  Edgar has a more overall slim and agile look to him. There are eyes on Ezamus's chest and the user overall contains a sickening purple energy

Soul Skill Name: Cripple
Persona Name: Ozamus
Tier: Tier 1
Cost: Passive
Type of Damage: None
Description:  This ability boosts the user's buffs/debuffs by an aditional 10%.

Looks good to me, though the passive Soul Skill can be toned down to 10% as its for both Buffs and Debuffs alike. Aside from that, you're good to go.

Approved. Ozamus is ready for combat