Drak Vongrad's Persona - Grim

Persona Name: Grim

Persona Type: Initial Persona

Persona's Arcana: The Fool

Owner: Drak Vongrad

Persona Appearance: A small ball of shadow with what looks to be wearing an unidentifiable skull as a hat. It's about half the size of an average sized human (roughly 3'), but can shrink to be smaller if need be as it is a malleable ghost. (corresponding picture is not the correct color as he’s darker)


Persona Background: Grim is a young entity of Death. They can be commonly found in large areas of disaster where there were high casualties. Despite being a symbol of death, there is no descrimination among the casualties, affecting everyone seemingly randomly. Thus their connection to the Fool fate instead of the Death fate. They aren’t foreboding or entities of doom, only creatures that bring lost souls across the River of Styx.

Strengths:
Dark
Slash

Weaknesses:
Light
Strike
(Damage from these specific types of attacks are twice as effective and will cause your character to stagger their next post.)

Passive Boosts:
Users of this Arcana are the "Jack of all Trades", allowing them to use any skills.
Users of this Arcana get a 15% boost in one skill type of any kind. (Dark)

Persona Skill List:

Skill 1: Wide Sweep | Inflicts a small amount of Slash damage to all enemies with added miss chance of 10% and added crit chance of 10%. | 8% HP | Tier 1
Skill 2: Garu | Inflicts a small amount of Wind damage to one enemy. | 3 SP |  Tier 1
Skill 3: Mudoon | 50% chance of instant death from the power of Darkness to one enemy. | 12 SP | Tier 2

Skill 4: (Unlocked  after using your Persona 25 times in PvS combat; Must be Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
Skill 5: (Must have used your Persona an additional 30 times in PvS combat, and have completed at least 1 mission; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
Skill 6: (Unlocked once using your Persona an additional 35 times in PvS combat and having formed at least three rank four or higher social links; Must be a Tier 2 Skill or Lower)
Skill 7: (Unlocked once using your Persona an additional 40 times in combat, or have helped at least 3 other characters awaken their inner potential; Must be a Tier 3 Skill or Lower)
Skill 8: (Unlocked using your Persona 45 times in PvS combat and have a single Social Link reach Rank 7, OR Complete 3 Main Scenario Quests; Must be a Tier 3 Skill or Lower)

Umbral Skill List:
Skill 1: Hex | Deals a small amount of Dark damage to a single target | 6% HP | Tier 1 (0/20 Uses to Level up to Tier 2 OR lower the cost to 3% HP)
Skill 2:
Skill 3:
Skill 4:

Fusion Attack: (The Ultimate attack between you and your Persona. When using this, your Persona gifts you with the capability of performing a powerful attack. However, once this is done you can not summon your Persona again for the remainder of the topic. The attack does Tier 3 damage.)

Fusion Attack Name: Bringer of Death
Persona Name: Grim
Type of Damage: Pierce, Dark
Description: Condensing a Dark aura into a ball, it shoots forward and pierces multiple enemies, dealing a Large amount of damage. This instant kills creatures the same level as the character, 20% chance against creatures 1-5 levels higher, and 5% chance against creatures 6+ levels higher.

Soul Skill Name: Death Cometh
Persona Name: Grim
Tier: Tier 1
Cost: 12% HP
Type of Damage: Slash, Dark
Description: Creating a blade like tear and striking an enemy produces a 25% chance instant death effect. If the enemy does not die, it does a small amount of Slash damage instead.

Oddly enough, your fusion skill seems to be lacking a bit in strength.

Given that it's a skill you can only use once per thread, and that your Persona becomes unusable for all battles in the thread after, I suggest you'd buff it up. Not necessarily in terms of damage, but you can add some extra effect on top of it, that's rather powerful.

I'd also like it if you'd give the persona a size. Looks rather small, but just to get more of a reference how much space it occupies while summoned.

otherwise everything looks to be in order.

Average human? So about 5'7?

Passable. Just know that he can change shape and such, but not the total space he occupies. He'll just have to stretch himself really thin if he wants to go small places. But shouldn't be a problem.

We don't really have a "Small, Medium and Large" scaling on the enemies here, but we can easily translate that to difference in level.

Small = At your level or lower.

Medium: from 1 to 5 levels higher

Large: 6+ Levels higher.

So that's an easy workaround. Work this into the Ability, and you should be good to go.

Approved.

Grim is ready for combat.