The Me I'll Be Tomorrow (Nadia's Compendium)

I'm granting tentative approval to this. Godai or Grantus may weigh in or not.

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30

I'm fine wirh the pvs effect but you won't be able to detect how much hp/sp they have. The PvP effect is a little weird. If you want to just make a guaranteed analysis skill that instead of having hp and sp gives strengths instead I don't mind, what it is now doesn't seem very helpful. The dungeon effect is a nogo cause that makes it a combinaiton of analysis and auto analysis at once. You'll have to pick one type of effect between scans at tier 2.

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30

If you want it to be a continuous analysis effect for pvs fights, it'll need some kind of cooldown, three turns is reasonable. But the cost will have to be at least 25 SP. As for the dungeon effect it's the same issue, it still appears to be similar to Dungeon Scan, where you can detect hidden presences from a certain range. The dungeon and in battle effects are too incongruous to make a single skill at Tier 2. Like before I suggest you just go with either the effect that you describe for in battle, or if you want to shirk the cooldown, you can just make it cost 20 SP and just be an instant Analyze that gives you strengths and weaknesses.

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30

Approved

Posts : 1468 Join date : 2018-09-15 Age : 34

Got an energy drink for my birthday today! yaaaaay!

Posts : 1468 Join date : 2018-09-15 Age : 34

Team Attack name: Carrion Call
Characters: Nadia Marquee and Cecil Erinforth
Personas:Ereshkigal (I) and Ankou (I)
Cost:1/3 SP both users
Damage type: Dark/Slash
Description:
Nadia and Cecil each summon their Personas. As they combine their powers, a swell of dark energy bursts from the center of the enemy force and engulfs the targets in swirling black feathers. At the same time, Swirling bone fragments swirl out from the center of the burst, spinning and slashing through the victims. Targets take tier 2 dark/slash damage. In addition, any targets within the effect have a 30% of being left bound by spectral chains when the attack ends, unable to dodge the next attack directed at them (Mechanically similar to Frostbite).

Posts : 1468 Join date : 2018-09-15 Age : 34

Kendra's Awakening
+ 2000 VC
+ 151 EXP
+ "White Devil" Name tag

Posts : 1468 Join date : 2018-09-15 Age : 34

Courage +5 <3 Karaoke! | Thanks, everyone, I'll be back!

Posts : 5994 Join date : 2013-10-06 Age : 30

Carrion Call,

Make it 30% for the chains and we'll call it good.

If it's the 30% chance like Godai said then we'll call this good.

Posts : 1468 Join date : 2018-09-15 Age : 34

+2 Suspicious Candies from Halloween!!

Posts : 1468 Join date : 2018-09-15 Age : 34

Bought a thing.
+ Revival Bead
- 1200VC

Posts : 1468 Join date : 2018-09-15 Age : 34

Awakening Rewards
x1 Strength of Will
62 EXP

Posts : 1468 Join date : 2018-09-15 Age : 34

Making up for past mistakes
- 2000 VC
- 4 dex
+ 4 Luck

Posts : 1468 Join date : 2018-09-15 Age : 34

Kendra, SL rank 3
+4 Dex

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