Yuri Ivanov [Endymion NC]

Subject: Yuri Ivanov [Endymion NC] Tue Jun 05, 2018 5:29 am

Yuri Ivanov

"I will deliver judgement to all who oppose the Queen."

The Biography

Birth Name: Yuri Ivanov
Aliases: N/A
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Birth Day: December 12
Arcana: Tower
Place of Residence: School Dorms
Academy Semester: Third
Class: (We'll fill this in once you're approved. This will be your class in school)

Sorority: N/A

Job: Cadet

Image:

Appearance: Yuri's appearance is that of a sickly individual. He's abnormally thin and pale, and his grey eyes hold a hazy, emotionless look. Black, unkempt hair covers most of his face. His attire is usually somewhat formal, with his preferred outfit being a grey double breasted overcoat, black pants, and black leather shoes.

Personality: Yuri is a man of unending self-confidence, who firmly believes himself to be superior to all others. He does not act this belief out in a painfully egotistical manner, however. He has extremely high moral standards, and feels as though everyone should only ever act with others in mind, and never for themselves, no matter the situation, and he carries a deep hatred for those who harm the public. Yuri is also devoutly religious, and states that above all, God's will is his highest priority.

The Potential

Strengths:

—Strength Name: Steel Will
—Description: "Emotions are the root of all that has ever gone awry. Do not be so selfish as to let yourself succumb to such madness." [+15% resistance against mental ailments.]

—Strength Name: Peace Enforcer
—Description: "Bloodshed is necessary to obtain peace." [15% boost to Ppstr.]

—Strength Name: Advanced Warfare
—Description: "Humanity has done well to development wonderful technologies. Firearms are among the most powerful ever created." [Damage output from guns & Gun skills are increased by 15%.]

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—Floating Strength Name:
—Description:

Weaknesses:

—Weakness Name: Go! Go! Justice Never Rests!
—Description: "Sloth is a horrible sin. No matter your condition, you must always act, for the sake of attaining the brightest future." [Skill cost is doubled while HP is equal to/less than 15%, or while suffering from an ailment.]

—Weakness Name: Law of Nature
—Description: "It's sinful and arrogant for a human to use the power of magic." [Pmstr reduced by 15%]

—Weakness Name: Extravagant Parade
—Description: "Your unholy methods cannot harm me. I invite your attacks." [MEnd decreased by 15%]

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—Floating Weakness Name:
—Description:

Soul Bound Weapon:

Weapon Name: Gamer Knife
Weapon Description: A double-edged knife with a 10 inch blade. Its handle a solid shade of grey, with a short guard above it to protect the hand.
Weapon Attack Type: Slash
Weapon Element: N/A

Side-Arm Weapon:

Side-Arm Name: Python
Side-Arm Description: A 6-inch revolver, with noticable signs of wear.
Side-Arm Attack Type: Gun
Side-Arm Style: Revolver

The Background

Yuri came from a rich family who owned a large oil drilling company. They could afford whatever they pleased, but were not very happy, as they were none too close. With his parents dealing with business all day long, and no siblings to talk to, Yuri had nothing better to do than to explore his hometown. It is unusual for a small child to be walking out on their own, especially late at night, which is why Yuri caught the attention of one old priest, looking out the window of his church. He called Yuri in, to phone his parents, and lectured him about safety, just as his parents would later that night.
The next day, Yuri returned to the church. He wanted to talk with the priest he met the day before, however, there was currently a service happening. Yuri attended. He would continue to attend, again and again. The youth who had learned nothing of life from his parents, nor had any friends to learn from, had now been told that the purpose of life is to go out and do good. If this is the case, he thought, those who harm the general public are scum unfit to live. And thus, with newly concentrated angst, he gathered his savings and left his estranged parents, to live on his own, unsure of where life would lead him.

Subject: Re: Yuri Ivanov [Endymion NC] Wed Jun 06, 2018 12:58 am

Looks like an interesting character! Though we do have some things to go over with Yuri before he's approved.

Quote :: —Strength Name: Steel Will
—Description: "Emotions are the root of all that has ever gone awry. Do not be so selfish as to let yourself succumb to such madness." [+20% resistance against mental ailments.]

Sorry man, max % allowed for Strengths is 15% to keep things even. You'll need to lower it if you want to keep it.

Quote :: —Strength Name: Peace Enforcer
—Description: "Bloodshed is necessary to obtain peace." [The Tower's 15% Ppstr boost is increased by five, to 20%.]

If you really want to you can just call it a 5% increase to PPstr, but it needs a balancing combat Weakness of equal intensity. Nothing wrong with keeping it at 5% though.

Quote :: —Weakness Name: Go! Go! Justice Never Rests!
—Description: "Sloth is a horrible sin. No matter your condition, you must always act, for the sake of attaining the brightest future." [Skill cost is tripled while HP is equal to/less than 10%, or while suffering from an ailment.]

—Weakness Name: Unchanging
—Description: "My tactics are safe and reliable. I will not throw that away." [All combat experience gained is reduced by 20%.]

—Weakness Name: Fear of the Destitute
—Description: "Evil intent is to be feared. Its holders bring death and suffering wherever they go." [Chance of instant death from incoming Dark skills is doubled, along with a 10% increase in damage from them.]

Before we get too deep into things I'll say that these Weaknesses are fine to keep as long as they balance out your Strengths. I will also say that these Weaknesses are CRIPPLING. Increasing skill cost while suffering from an Ailment or under 10% HP is fine and balances out your Ailment resistance Strength well, but tripling it is gonna make it impossible to fight Ailment-centric enemies and we've got a whole faction subset of those. Lowering combat experience is also a viable route for whatever character you wish to make but know that at -20% EXP you will lag FAR behind everyone else and you're already starting late in the game. For the chance of Instant Kill from Dark skills it's like you're taking an extra Persona Weakness which is also pretty harmful. Sorry my dude but in good faith I'll need you to tone some of these Weaknesses down a bit before starting, I can give pointers if you need them. You wouldn't be shooting yourself in the foot, you'd be blowing the whole leg off.

Less egregious is I'll need you to list the dimensions of your Soulbound I.E. how long your sword is. Just ping back in the grading channel if you need help or have edits you need looked over.

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Yuri Ivanov

"I will deliver judgement to all who sin."

The Biography

Birth Name: Yuri Ivanov
Aliases: N/A
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Birth Day: December 12
Arcana: Tower
Place of Residence: School Dorms
Evoker: Mental Shackles
Academy Semester: Third
Class: (We'll fill this in once you're approved. This will be your class in school)

Sorority: N/A

Job: Shelf stocker

Image:

Appearance: Yuri's appearance is that of a sickly individual. He's abnormally thin and pale, and his grey eyes hold a hazy, emotionless look. Black, unkempt hair covers most of his face. His attire is usually somewhat formal, with his preferred outfit being a grey double breasted overcoat, black pants, and black leather shoes.

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Alternate Appearance: Upon donning his mask, he appears a a knight with (non-functional) mechanical wings. A red robe with a white cross covers the front of his armour.

Personality: Yuri is a man of unending self-confidence, who firmly believes himself to be superior to all others. He does not act this belief out in a painfully egotistical manner, however. He has extremely high moral standards, and feels as though everyone should only ever act with others in mind, and never for themselves, no matter the situation, and he carries a deep hatred for those who harm the public. Yuri is also devoutly religious, and states that above all, God's will is his highest priority.

The Potential

Strengths:

—Strength Name: Steel Will
—Description: "Emotions are the root of all that has ever gone awry. Do not be so selfish as to let yourself succumb to such madness." [+15% resistance against mental ailments.]

—Strength Name: Peace Enforcer
—Description: "Bloodshed is necessary to obtain peace." [15% boost to Ppstr.]

—Strength Name: Advanced Warfare
—Description: "Humanity has done well to development wonderful technologies. Firearms are among the most powerful ever created." [Damage output from guns & Gun skills are increased by 15%.]

-----

—Floating Strength Name:
—Description:

Weaknesses:

—Weakness Name: Go! Go! Justice Never Rests!
—Description: "Sloth is a horrible sin. No matter your condition, you must always act, for the sake of attaining the brightest future." [Skill cost is doubled while HP is equal to/less than 15%, or while suffering from an ailment.]

—Weakness Name: Law of Nature
—Description: "It's sinful and arrogant for a human to use the power of magic." [Pmstr reduced by 15%]

—Weakness Name: Extravagant Parade
—Description: "Your unholy methods cannot harm me. I invite your attacks." [MEnd decreased by 15%]

-----

—Floating Weakness Name:
—Description:

Soul Bound Weapon:

Weapon Name: Virtue Blade
Weapon Description: A beautifully reflective short sword with a cross-guarded hilt. "XX" is engraved on the blade. Its blade is three feet long, and as wide as a fist.
Weapon Attack Type: Slash
Weapon Element: N/A

Side-Arm Weapon:

Side-Arm Name: Python
Side-Arm Description: A 6-inch revolver, with noticable signs of wear.
Side-Arm Attack Type: Gun
Side-Arm Style: Revolver

The Background

Yuri came from a rich family who owned a large oil drilling company. They could afford whatever they pleased, but were not very happy, as they were none too close. With his parents dealing with business all day long, and no siblings to talk to, Yuri had nothing better to do than to explore his hometown. It is unusual for a small child to be walking out on their own, especially late at night, which is why Yuri caught the attention of one old priest, looking out the window of his church. He called Yuri in, to phone his parents, and lectured him about safety, just as his parents would later that night.
The next day, Yuri returned to the church. He wanted to talk with the priest he met the day before, however, there was currently a service happening. Yuri attended. He would continue to attend, again and again. The youth who had learned nothing of life from his parents, nor had any friends to learn from, had now been told that the purpose of life is to go out and do good. If this is the case, he thought, those who harm the general public are scum unfit to live. And thus, with newly concentrated angst, he gathered his savings and left his estranged parents, to live on his own, unsure of where life would lead him.

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