suzio's initial persona: berserker

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[size=16]Persona Name: berserker

Persona Type: initial persona
Persona's Arcana: chariot
Owner: suzio inochi
Persona Appearance:
suzio's initial persona: berserker Devil_berserk

suzio's initial persona: berserker Devil_berserk

Persona Background: berserker came from a line of uncontrollable beast that trace back to the history of Norse warriors. These beast were at one time contained by their masters , but their powers and resistance were so out of control that they ended up killing them and escaping into the wild. They are believed to even beat themselves up before a battle to get into the flow of a fight.

Strengths: strike and electric

Weaknesses: fire and light.

Passive Boosts: 15% boost in physical based skills and 15% defense against slash skills.
Persona Skill List:

Skill 1: Bash] tier 1 cost: 5% HP
Skill 2: Mazio] cost 6 SP tier 1
Skill 3: cleave [5% HP tier 1

Fusion Attack Name: gore
Persona Name: berserker
Type of Damage: strike
Description: both the persona user and the persona let out a wolf like cry before attacking, then they charge at the opponent and deliver a head-butt . 35% damage to opponents health if the attack hits.

Human Skill Name: berserker mode.
Persona Name: berserker
Tier: Tier 1
Cost: 3 SP
Type of Damage: N/A
Description: suzuio adopts his persona’s anger. All attacks are increased by 15%. can attack for 3 turns before cooling off.

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 29

Mazio costs 6 Sp, not 6% so keep that in mind. Also your Fusion skill can be up to Tier 3, so if you want you can just have it do Tier 3 Strike Damage with a tiny added effect if it targets only one person, since it costs your Persona to use. As for your Human Skill, it is Tier 1, so if you want to increase your attack, you could make it a 15% increase to your attack for three turns without a cooldown. If you go that route you can make the cost 3 SP. It's up to you what you want to do, I just gave you some pointers. If you have any questions be sure to ask about it before editing.

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i will take all that into consideration lol . so does that mean its approved.

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 29

Not yet. Your Human Skill is too strong for Tier 1. It needs to be 15% max to buff your strength for all attacks. Make sure your fusion attack is clarified and your skillset is cleaned up for what I said previously.

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i used your template. once i get the hang of things i will edit , but yeah i will ask first.

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 29

Alright. If you are just doing damage that equals a percent of someone's health, you can make it 35% of their health if you want. Take your time and when you are finished editing it let me or a mod know.

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you mean for the human skill?

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 29

For the fusion skill. Know that your Human skill won't transform your body, but it will give you the rage from your Persona.

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yeah i know , but i guess i should change that ''becomes beast part. i thought i could get away with it but i guess not.

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this edit might be overkill.

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 29

The 35% of damage was meant for your Fusion skill, not your Human skill.

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Subject: Re: suzio's initial persona: berserker Mon Jun 01, 2015 2:42 pm

Alright, good, but just a few details. You still have your Fusion's type as Physical. You need to pick either Strike, Slash or Pierce for it, just like the other stuff.

Also, your Human Skill is good, but it is Tier 1, not Tier 3, as you wrote. It would be wiser to change it, so people don't get confused. Also, your HS is pretty much a buff, so it doesn't really have any damage type on its own. You can just put N/A there, or that it is a boost.

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Subject: Re: suzio's initial persona: berserker Mon Jun 01, 2015 3:21 pm

Alrighty, approved ~

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