Raian Auric

Posts : 33 Join date : 2015-02-13 Age : 26

Raian Auric
"Heh.. I like you, you make me feel a lot less stupid when you're around."

The Biography

Birth Name: Raian Auric
Aliases: N/A
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Birth Day: June/4
Arcana: Moon
Evoker: Tarot Card
Place of Residence: Zela Academy
School Year: Third Year
Class: 3-B

After School Club: Not /yet/
Part Time Job: Also not yet ;o
Appearance: Raian is a shorter male standing at around 5'5 and weighing around 124lbs. He has short, brown hair, and he wears rimless glasses over his deep brown eyes. His cheekbones are a bit high up and are pretty defined. He's a scrawny guy with little to none muscle in his arms, or anywhere really. He enjoys wearing V-neck tee-shirts of multiple colors to show off what he claims as his "Personality" and most of the time, if not all of the time, you'll see him wearing jeans.

Personality: Raian likes for people to believe that he is a outgoing type of person who will crack jokes at anyone, sometimes he can be a bit of an ass. What he doesn't make apparent is that he's hiding the depressed, suicidal side of him from everyone because he does not want people to perceive him that way. He tends to worry a lot about almost everything, if he notices his friends are in a bad spot, or depressed he will worry about it until it is resolved as he doesn't want them to be in the situation he's in. Constant worrying usually leads to his usual panic attacks.

The Potential

Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)

—Strength Name: Creativity
—Description: Raian has a incredible imagination, usually leading to some good plans during a fight.

—Strength Name: Quick-to-Learn
—Description: Raian finds it easy to pick up tricks and tips from other people turning them into his own spin on things

—Strength Name: Supportive
—Description: Raian enjoys helping others excelling in helping his friends in combat in anyway he can

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Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)

—Weakness Name: Strength
—Description: Raian isn't the strongest of guys, not at all, due to that his strength-like attacks are extremely weak

—Weakness Name: Anxiety
—Description: Due to frequent panic attacks, Raian is often incapacitated in the middle of a fight

—Weakness Name: Fear
—Description: Having a constant fear of letting the other side of him out he sometimes tends to ignore, or stop talking to people he used to get along with

*Might add more Strengths and Weaknesses later*

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Soul Bound Weapon: Frying Pan

Weapon Name: Backburner
Weapon Description: It's really just a simple frying pan.. with ridges on the edges and tinted green
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Weapon Attack Type: Strike
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The Background

History: Starting in his teenage years Raian has had to deal with a large amount of stress starting at his Parent's divorce. After years of fighting they finally decided to get a divorce, but without the money to pay for it Raian's parents left him in a hellhome of arguements, yelling, stress, and depression. Being the worrywart that he is, his marks in school have started to drop due to his constant thinking about his home situation. Shortly after, his siblings threatened suicide day after day leaving him to deal with it alone, as his mom was very sick at the time, and his father was never home. This is where his panic attacks first surfaces, but he was helped through it by his mother who had the same issues. Not long after his parents mysteriously vanished while he was away and him, and his sisters were forced to move elsewhere. Raian chose to go separate ways from his sisters and start anew. Now, moving to an entire new place all on his own, he has to deal with new and old problems.

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30

Add a little more personality to flesh your character out since it should be at least a paragraph. For what you have now it seems to fit the Jester Arcana far more than the Moon. Make sure to make your Arcana fit your personality as much as you can. Moon can maybe work but not as much as the Jester. You should be fine after that.

Posts : 33 Join date : 2015-02-13 Age : 26

Alright, I updated it a bit.

And on the topic of the Moon V Jester, I'm not really sure how it fits the Jester.. however the Moon Arcana deals with Anxiety, Fear, Creativity, and Trickery. People with the moon arcana are usually people who hide something about themselves if it'll help them get along with other people. My character is hiding his depression because he doesn't want people to see him as a depressed person who they should feel bad for, he'd much rather have them see him as a happy, sarcastic, asshole.

If you want to explain why you think(or thought if I totally changed your mind) why I was the Jester arcana, go ahead. ^^ I enjoy all feedback

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30

The reason why it fits Jester more is because your character obviously hides his depression and uglier sides while acting like a joker to reinforce it; a big sign of the Jester. They both fit you, just at first it seemed alot more like the Jester. lol. But you're fine. Approved.

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