Keichirou Yoshida

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Keichirou Yoshida
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The Biography

Birth Name: Keichirou Yoshida
Aliases: Keichi
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Birth Day: 11-11-1997
Arcana: Wheel Of Fortune
Evoker: Tarot Card
Place of Residence: Zela Academy's Dorms
School Year: Second Year
Class: 2-A
After School Club: Literature Club

Part Time Job: N/A

Appearance: His Height is 5'7", he has medium length messy reddish black hair, black eyes, wears fingerless gloves with Jack Frost's smile in the palm, and wears a scarf that says ¨Lady Luck¨ and black tennis shoes. In cold days he wears longsleeved shirts and a green sweater over them, with black denim pants. In hot days he wears short sleeved shirts with shorts that reach below his knees. In beaches he wears blue swimming shorts (i have no idea how they are called).

Personality: He's moves on from tragic events fast, goes with the flow of his life, he's quick to accept his fate, he's always determined to discover his purpose in life and his understanding of fate is fast. He feels empathy for everyone and he is fast to help someone in need, he's shy when speaking with people he doesn't know (except when helping them), when he talks with friends he's open minded and helps them with their troubles, he is a bit sarcastic with people he knows, he teases his friends with everything, he's calm in dangerous situations and tends to tease his opponents to death, he is a fast learner and accepts things quickly, but he is deathly afraid of: heights, darkness, and solitude. He covers up for friends when he needs to, he tends to lie, he prefers reading over every other activity.

The Potential

Strengths:

—Strength Name: Writing
—Description: Skillful at writing letters, mail. etc.

—Strength Name: Running
—Description: He is very fast and athletic when it comes to running.

—Strength Name: Reading
—Description: He reads very fast and has really good understanding of what he reads.

—Strength Name: Fencing
—Description: His abilities are pretty good when it comes to use rapiers and other meelee weapons of that sort.

—Strength Name: Extreme Luck
—Description: He has extreme luck with luck-based games and gambles when he feels like it (the mayority of the time winning the bets and winning lots of money), and he has the capability to exploit that luck in battle with lucky dodges and accurate attacks.

Weaknesses:

—Weakness Name: Low Stamina
—Description: He can't do physical activity for long times.

—Weakness Name: Hot
—Description: He can't handle hotness and high temperatures very well.

—Weakness Name: Bad at hand-to-hand
—Description: Since his strength is speed, the more dangerous and close combat tactics work bad for him, like punching and kicking, rendering him useless against hand-to-hand fighters.

—Weakness Name: Heights
—Description: He is deathly scared of heights, to the point of crying.

—Weakness Name: Math
—Description: When it comes to math, Keichirou is horrible at it.

Soul Bound Weapon:

Weapon Name: Rose of Winds Rapier
Weapon Description: It has the shape of a normal rapier, except it has rose details and a green jewel in it's handle and it's 42 inches long.
Weapon Image:
Weapon Attack Type: Slash
Weapon Element: ...

The Background

History:

When he was 9 years old, his parents died in an accident on sea, they where doing a business trip to EUA for his dad's casino branch. When they died, he had gone living his his Grandfather and Grandmother, but tragedy struck again, and his grandma died from cancer at 79 when he was 11, leaving him and his grandpa alone.

His grandfather was 82 years old and the death of his wife made him depressed, when he decided to move on and take care of Keichirou, now 13. They moved to Argentina to take care of Keichirou's deceased parents casino branch in there. Keichirou started a new life in the country and soon found himself bullied by other kids for him being an orphan and having no parents, they called him freak because of his Japan origins.

Five years later, Keichirou's grandpa was in his deathbed, he assigned Keichirou to Zela Academy in Japan (?), and gave him tickets to Japan (?), after his grandfather's funeral, he left for Japan to start anew in his new high school.

Nothing went as expected...

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30

Welcome to the site. It is important to follow what the character sheet recommends. For example, I am gonna need a bit more for your appearance and even more for your personality, since your personality is supposed to match your Arcana as well. Also, with two combat related strengths, you will need two combat related weaknesses. You already have low stamina, so that is one. You will also need to describe the length of your soulbound weapon. Finally, the history just isn't really enough. It says 2-3 paragraphs, and you seem to have covered your history very broadly. Make sure to expand on that. Once all of that is fixed, you will then be approved.

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30

At the very least, make your appearance and personality a paragraph. Maybe describe other things he wears. As for your personality, it needs to be fleshed out more to make him less two-dimensional and match his Arcana.

Posts : 6498 Join date : 2013-07-06 Age : 30

Approved.

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