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PostSubject: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Thu Mar 31, 2016 7:12 pm

The Biography

Birth Name: Teskei Nami
Aliases: Spade Thief
Gender: M (Male)
Age: 19
BirthDay: Jan 24 1997
Arcana: Fool
Place of Residence: Travels, no current home
Evoker: Mental Shackles
Academy Semester: Out of school

Part/Full Time Job: None

Appearance:
Height 6'2
Weight 120 lbs

My characters Attire is black dress pants, white button up shirt, brown Dress Vest and black vans. I have emerald green eyes and long shaggy brown hair.White skin tone, of German decent and heritage.Having a very classy style teskei is surprisingly different in personality. I am also quite fond of suits and proper dress wear, but usually sticks to my current outfit. favorite colors in clothes are mostly whites,brown,and blacks. some times will wear an Irish flat cap and or brown beanie.I also wears brown cut gloves as shown in the picture. also I wear a golden necklace with a golden sigma symbol on it.



Alternate Appearance:
None

Personality:
Well I guess I’m quiet and held back,but can change to a heartless monster when it comes to killing my enemies. I am a chill person and want friends.But I tend to disappear and go off on my own.I Will be ruthless against Those I hate,But avoid all fights with others. Enjoys music,Green apple candy and walking at night. Is broken inside and seeks someone to love deep inside although I won't show it. when I'm angry I do not hold back, I am ruthless and reckless. When happy I am Cheerful fellow, who love helping people. When sad I tend to disappear and go off on my own to think about things.The girl in which my heart desires to keep from shattering any further is a strong independent and kind caring soul. someone who will hold me back, and help me succeed.

The Potential

Strengths: Kendo,Chess/strategy,Sniper Training


—Strength Name: Kendo
—Description: a Japanese form of fencing with two-handed bamboo swords, originally developed as a safe form of sword training for samurai. This training gives Teskei a 10% DEX boost. (10% dexterity Boost)

—Strength Name: Chess/strategy
—Description: a board game of strategic skill for two players, played on a checkered board. Each player begins the game with sixteen pieces that are moved and used to capture opposing pieces according to precise rules. The object is to put the opponent's king under a direct attack from which escape is impossible ( checkmate ). This gives Teskei a unique buff, Before the battle Teskei can apply a chess piece title to himself, this title gives a small combat buff.
The Queen: +10% Critical damage buff
The King: +10 Hp Buff
The Knight: +10 Dexterity Buff
The Rook: +10% damage resistance buff
The Bishop: +10 Sp Buff
The Pawn: +10% Hit Chance

only one title per Fight

—Strength Name: Sniper Training
--Description: The art of long range, projectiles has always required skill in patience, timing and accuracy. This gives Teskei a 10% Accuracy Buff.


Floating strength: N/A
Floating Weakness:N/A

Weaknesses: Lightweight,Counter Act chess,

—Weakness Name: Lightweight
—Description: Being a lightweight fighter, means less armor. (-8 Hp)

—Weakness Name: Counter act Chess
—Description: The counter to my chess strength is counter act chess for every title theirs also a downside.
The Queen: -10 Sp
The King: -10 Dex
The Knight: -10% Damage resistance
The Rook: -10 Dex
The Bishop: -10% Crit Damage
The Pawn: -10% Crit chance

—Weakness Name:
—Description:

Soul Bound Weapon

Weapon Name: Crosstail
Weapon Description: Well It's really strong razor wire that can be manipulated. Some of you might know this one. maximum reach 10 meters, but cannot retract after 7 meters. so wire's must be cut and reloaded.
Weapon Image:



Weapon Attack Type: Slash tier 1

Side-Arm Weapon

Side-Arm Name: Flintlock Pistol
Side-Arm Description: An old fashioned Flintlock Firearm
side arm type: Single Shot Handgun
Side-Arm Image:


Side-Arm Attack Type: Gun Damage tier 1
Side-Arm Style: Revolver

The Background
History:

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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Thu Mar 31, 2016 7:30 pm

Did you read the rules of the site first? That is the first step before you make a character or persona.

I've put a hidden code into the rules. It'll only show once you finish reading them. Once you have that code, come back to me and we can start grading your applications. I'm even going to test you, so be sure to get atleast the basics down.
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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Thu Mar 31, 2016 7:52 pm

I did Why it hidden?

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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Fri Apr 01, 2016 9:25 am

Okay, well I've been informed on this entire situation and I've read the entirety of these interactions.

I'm going to politely ask you to move on, Teskei Nami. It seems you're making alot of the members and even staff uncomfortable. You've been demanding with multiple people, even those who have attempted to help you.

A site like this is not for you, yet. Though we are not elitist there is a posting quality here that we expect. We grow together to get better, but we've all started at a level where we can comprehend one another, and also speak to each other politely when we're confused or want clarification.

There are plenty of Persona sites out there that you could bring your character too. Some will probably work for you, as they probably do not have a rule structure like we have here. However, for this site, I'm sorry to say it's just not going to work.

I apologize again, and I do hope you find a site that fits what you're looking for.

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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Fri Apr 01, 2016 11:04 am

Well i'd like to inform you i have been working on my character sheet and the hostility towards is a little un-called for i have been editing this repeatedly and still am if you want me to leave i need a decent reason as long as im concerned whether not my character is approved currently does not matter, i will keep editing this sheet till approved if your other members misunderstand my intentions or see me as unruly im sorry but i have not broken any rules yet, and im sorry for the misunderstanding i have caused. but im going to continue working till im am satisfied and dont mind working or learning the site better. as for commotion in the chat, i thought it was simply joking kind fun if member were uncomfortable they should have spoke up rather then indulging in. it

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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Fri Apr 01, 2016 11:26 am

I will say this, Teskei Nami. If you're willing to work with staff, which it appears like you're ready to, I have no problem keeping you here. I have no personal disliking of you. Not everyone enjoys rules, nor every staff member either. But from what I've read from the chat, you seemed to complain about them more than understand them. And that's completely fine, we have a question and answers area here because no rules list is perfect.

Though saying you will learn the rest as you go along and just skimming through the battle guide isn't really an answer to that. Someone brought this point up to me, so I'll bring it up for you now.

If you do not enjoy reading or writing paragraphs, do you think your peers here will want to rp with you on a consistent basis? Just keep that in mind and atleast try to push yourself to be able to handle (read thoroughly) paragraphs and full length posts. Especially if you plan on joining plot events where things can get very hectic depending on the situation.

Now I'll grade your app and make a post below this on things that need to be adjusted.
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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Fri Apr 01, 2016 11:42 am

Evoker: Stabbing myself in the heart with a knife

Well, this would kill yourself for one. Also, the Endymion evoker is Mental Shackles. If you're joining the Endymion plot, you may want to touch up on the information regarding it. We can handle that after this.


Part/Full Time Job: None, besides my own decision to live out the rest of my life hunting Shadows

Endymion does not have Shadows, but it does have demons. You might want to change it to that, though in your background you should clearly mark why you know about demons in the first place. They are not common knowledge to the public. All mentions of Shadows in the application should be altered.

You need to expand on your personality alot more. The staff may need to know your character indepth for plot events. How is he when he's happy? How is he when he's sad? What's his loves and hates of the world? How is he infront of others? How is he when he's by himself?

—Strength Name: Chess/strategy
—Description: a board game of strategic skill for two players, played on a checkered board. Each player begins the game with sixteen pieces that are moved and used to capture opposing pieces according to precise rules. The object is to put the opponent's king under a direct attack from which escape is impossible ( checkmate ).


So what is this doing for you? Are you saying he's just good at Chess or is this giving him sort of a strategic ability in battle?


Floating strength: Temporary control of shadows
Description: as it sounds, it's due to my unique human taint, just like how tainted personas exist.


This should be empty. This is a strength you get in RP.


—Weakness Name:Despise shadows
—Description: Due to my past and unrelenting hatred of shadows directly affect my thoughts and can cause me to stop what I’m doing such as a fight, and change me into a hostile sociopath, which puts others around me in danger.


As above, this is a world where Shadows have not been seen or fought. Demons are the primary enemies in Endymion.

—Weakness Name: A nemesis of igor
—Description: Well long story short igor and velvet room attendance hate me and want me dead. Because my arcana is partial tainted and i threaten persona users and other people by being near them. Cause of my natural ability to attract shadows.


This needs to be changed completely. Igor does not wish death upon anyone. Even enemies to the Velvet Room.

—Weakness Name: Hasty and Reckless
—Description: I am hasty and reckless in a fight.

So what is this doing to you exactly in combat? Are you easier to hit?

You may want to go to an approved application and take a look there, just to see how others structure their strengths and weaknesses.


Weapon Description: Well It's really strong razor wire that can be manipulated. Some of you might know this one. - How far do the wires stretch?


Side-Arm Attack Type: puncture, or pierce

It deliberately says Gun damage. Don't put another type of damage here.


Remove your Persona from this. It has its own application.


Your background needs to be reworked complete. There is no TV world and there are no Shadows in Endymion.
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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Fri Apr 01, 2016 11:52 am

k got it, i would like mention i came in here with knowledge of Persona 4 and 5, shadows are the only know persona enemy for me, igors personality and characteristic are mostly unknown as im new to the persona series. when i call reference to the tv world i mean the alter world in persona 4 i dont know its name. demons got it,and im reworking how strengths and weakness statistically effect battle currently.

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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Fri Apr 01, 2016 11:55 am

also my current ideas being that im only tier one im going to only make strengths boost at make 10% and weakness will act as counter balance to the strengths

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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Fri Apr 01, 2016 12:07 pm

Okay, let me know when you're done.
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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Fri Apr 01, 2016 5:18 pm

I'm done can we go through this again

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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Fri Apr 01, 2016 7:35 pm

You didn't change the evoker. It's mental shackles. You're still killing yourself to summon your Persona by stabbing yourself in the heart.
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PostSubject: Re: My Character sheet Teskei Nami   Mon Apr 04, 2016 6:53 pm

Alright, so first and foremost, while Demons are common knowledge post-Prologue in Endymion, they are basically inivisble to the unawakened, so having a profession as a demon hunter is a no-go as a persona user, or any class period. That includes any mention of demons in background and such.

Next, I'd like you to be a bit more descriptive in how your character looks. Height and weight are mandatory here, mostly for PvP purposes. It does also help us players imagine what your character looks like a bit better.

The Kendo Strength is fine as it is, however, the other two strengths... I'm very iffy towards.

First and foremost, the Chess Strength, while interesting, feels a bit too strong for what it does. I'd stick to one boost to you, and nothing else. Having Strengths that affect allies (Especially as versatile as yours is, not to mention the free revive) is way too strong for just a single Strength... Unless you have a weakness that balances out your strength.

The last one's also very, very powerful for just being a strength. Gaining control over demons is no easy feat, and all of them will resist control unless you can offer them something in return. Having Demons on your side, while not a mechanic on the site, is somewhat replicated into the Mask forging system. If you wanna be unique, perhaps having a strength that makes Mask forging easier for you. Just a tip. But gaining full, if only temporary control of demons, is just too much for a character trait.


Now for the weaknesses. First off, your Despise demons weakness sounds a bit clunky, since you're using 1d20's for the rolls, while the site's system runs on the 1d10 for it's rolls. You should stick to that.

The second weakness, again, is a little clunky, and actually, to little risk is involved with the weakness, given that Dark Skills (with the exception of Soul Skills in Dark Form) are instant death if they hit. So, the counters doesn't even matter for the most part, making the weakness very irrelevant. If you still want a darkness weakness, you could give yourself a 10% vulnerability to Dark Skills, for one reason or another.

The last weakness, is again, a little bit obtuse in it's execution. There are many ways you can emulate Recklessness into PvS, like saying all Physical attacks have X-% Chance to cause a 10% Recoil Hit on myself, or some such, if that's what you're going for.

Hrm... The weapon itself is fine. I'd shorten down it's range down to 7 meters, with 5 meters being the point where the weapon jams itself. But that's just me.

As I stated before, While Demons are common knowledge, you don't see them, and almost, if not all demons, are under the control of the Queen, and the government. I'd Remove all mentions of demons in your past. Also, for the record, I'd like more detail of your past. It makes things easier for the Storyteller and other plot-important staff members on the site getting you set up in our world.

Notify me when these changes have been made.

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