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| Subject: Nozomi Kichida(PU turned Part 2 WC) Tue Jun 02, 2015 11:31 pm | |
| Nozomi Kichida I used to think I could do it all alone. Like I could take everything on in this world by myself. Then I finally realized I don't have too. That I have my friends by my side all the way.
The Biography
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Birth Name:Nozomi Kichida Aliases:Nozi,"K" Gender:Male Age:18 Birth Day:01/05 Arcana:Strength:Portrayed as a young woman holding up a terrifying beast (more often a lion), the Strength Arcana symbolizes an imagery beyond the Beast And Beauty, and is associated with the morality about the stronger power of self-control, gentleness, courage and virtue over brute force. In tarot readings, it can also represent creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized. Place of Residence:San Malarus Evoker: He uses da Tarot card Academy Semester:College Freshman Class:Graduated High School
Part/Full Time Job:Works at a Cafe or something.
Appearance:
Nozomi Kichida appears as a standardly tall 6ft guy weighing in at about 135lbs. Who has a rather well built lean physique. Now sporting dark blue hair. He has traded in his previous attire for a dark blue leather jacket with a red scarf around his neck.Underneath is a white T shirt. Nozomi as well sports a pair of grey jeans and a belt. Alongside dark blue boots. Though on other occassions he can be seen with differently styled outfits. Much to the surprise of others given people would gather the assumption that he has a thing for blue. He has a glint in his eyes some people just really can't understand.
Personality:Nozomi is a pretty Stand-Up Guy when it comes to people. He's a guy that likes to be a shoulder to lean on for those he meets and befriends. Nozomi is not hard to talk to anymore either. As he is a rather social person and often finds himself being the one making the first move in any form of situation. Even then he still gets a little nervous from time to time.He can be a little brash at times and maybe a little hard headed. However underneath that is a decent guy with good intentions to those around him.
Nozomi can be very watchful and caring of those that he meets. Especially from the previous events of Azores. As the events that transpired made him value more the bonds he creates with people and just how much they effect his day to day life. He has a odd way of touching people when he speaks to them. it's almost as if when speaking to him. You can kinda feel like he's alright.
Despite the energy he displays often. Nozomi can be rather compalcent with things and is also rather patient. At times he may even opt to not do anything if that is what he thinks is right for the situation. The Kichida is rather ambitious and desires to have a successful life. Willing to work his way up to the top so he can have what he believes he deserves in life and sees no issue in hard work. Though he doesn't want a lavish life style or anything of the sort.
Really. The only thing Nozomi wants is his life together, and those that he cares for with him.
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The Potential
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Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)
—Strength Name:Understanding —Description:Nozomi has met several different kinds of people throughout his life and because of this has learned how to adapt himself to actually speak to them the way they should be. He understands how to relate to peoples problems as well or change up how he acts in order to get a better answer out of them. Acting as a well built shoulder to cry on.This is something however that people can often feel is his genuine concern and is something that has only developed from who he really is, Unlike others who may formulate a similar skill for deception or "perfection"
—Strength Name:The Mentalist —Description:He just knows how to look at you. Paying careful glances to places,people or things around him and carefully placing the pieces of the puzzle together in his mind. Nozomi can analyze situations and the like and come up with a logical solution or conclusion depending on what is in front of him at the time. However Nozomi only pays attention to what's going on at the moment, and sometimes may forget key details from the past.
—Strength Name:Exemplar —Description:Nozomi has worked his way up and as a result. People tend to look torwards him when things are going wrong or theres some kind of Conflict. Nozomi knows how to assert himself in a situation and properly manage people as well in times of stress,etc. Especially given his experience in the prior events of Azores.(LeaderShip)
—Strength Name:Athlete —Description:Nozomi has constantly improved his body to the pinnacle to that a Human can be. Combining his well found resolve,Persistance,Knowledge and actual hard work. His body is the equivalent of an Athletes at the moment. As a result he is also actually pretty fast. (Speed Boost)
—Strength Name:The Will to Live! —Description:Nozomi has a Innate fighting spirit. The Will to Live in his life. In his eyes you can see a Lion nearly. A guy who has the spirit to push on besides difficulty,Hardships and alot of other things. Someone who sets his eyes on the task. People just looking at Nozomi can tell he's a pretty hard working person, and this sometimes with how much focus he genuinely has can actually scare weak minded people.
Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)
—Weakness Name:Hard Headed —Description:Nozomi can be kinda stubborn still sometimes and frankly this hasn't changed. He has a habit of catching himself in predicaments he just isn't supposed to be getting his ass into these days.
—Weakness Name:Fears —Description:Nozomi has internal paranoia within himself since the previous events of Azores. As a result he has developed slight fears that the events of azores will reoccur to him again,except this time they won't end so well. Conferring a 15% extra chance of distress effecting him. As his mind is more vulnerable to this.
—Weakness Name:Needs to Understand Himself —Description:Nozomi himself is lost in life and in his own way. While he is capable of analyzing everything around himand working the pieces of things together. He really doesn't take in the facts of reality and how he needs to get his shit together and his CAREER together at this point.
—Weakness Name:Too Caring —Description:Nozomi is often really quick to put himself in harms way compared to other people when it comes to those he considers friends or important to him. As a result he may go out of his way to risk his life for the sake of his friends even if it seems impractical or just down right stupid.
—Weakness Name:Conductive —Description:Nozomi due to his nature as a person is slightly more vulnerable to electricity, especially with the higher amount of Bio-Electricity he has in his body for unknown reasons off of his Potential (+10% Damage Taken from Electricity)
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Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows and Demons without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))
Weapon Name:Rising Tide Weapon Description:It appears a black short sword that is about 3FT Long in terms of length and has a guard on the handle for the user to grip rather well. Weapon Image: Weapon Attack Type:Slash Weapon Element:
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The Background
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| History:History:Nozomi was a very promising young boy. Though he never stayed in one place. His family was constantly moving all over the place. From the USA to Spain. Due to his parents constantly obtaining new jobs in different places that looked promising. Nozomi eventually ended up in San Malarus Island on his sixteenth birthday. When his parents finally decided to settle down over there after retiring. Nozi was often bullyed/harassed in his younger years because of how he was built. Which led to him developing a strong mindset of persistence to get through it all and overcome all the people that were verbally against him. Though he is glad to have a new start over in San Malarus. Hoping that he doesn't have a repeat of all the previous misfortunes he's experienced when Nozi was younger.
Part Two
Nozomi triumphed above the trials of Azores. Resulting in he himself becoming a better person. He had dealt with the angels and the Mother. Albeit not without the sacrifice of a guy he didn't know. Much to the dismay of everyone and 1 person nobody there seemed to know. He left disheartened and paid a sad goodbye to the boy he formed a relationship with towards the end of the supernatural events in Azores. Shunnosuke. Even though Shunnosuke exited his life. Nozomi could never shake a feeling that one day. Maybe he'd see him again.
He would continue to better himself. Improve. Work. He had to build his life back together now that things weren't exactly so supernatural any more. Now he is starting his first year in college. Working out just what the hell it is he wants to do with his life.
The supernatural was out of his life for now, but the bonds he had formed during the event weren't.
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Nozomi Kichida Don't ever tell me to quit!
The Biography
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Birth Name:Nozomi Kichida Aliases:Nozi Gender:Male Age:16 Birth Day:01/05 Arcana: Portrayed as a young woman holding up a terrifying beast (more often a lion), the Strength Arcana symbolizes an imagery beyond the Beast And Beauty, and is associated with the morality about the stronger power of self-control, gentleness, courage and virtue over brute force. In tarot readings, it can also represent creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized. Evoker:Tarot Card (What you use to summon your Persona. This can be a tarot card (P4 Style), gun (P3 style) or a custom one. It must be a device of some short if not the other options available.) Place of Residence:San Malarus (Where does your character live? School Dorms, San Malarus, etc? Location should be one of these.) School Year:Second Year Class:2-c (We'll fill this in once you're approved. This will be your class in school)
After School Club:Martial Arts
Part Time Job:Works Various OddJobs Now
Appearance:- Nozomi's FC:
Nozomi's appearence has not changed much. Appearing as still a tall 6ft Male. However he has gained a very very slight tan as of recently. Sporting often a Blue normal plain shirt with a red tie. Alongside black uniform like pants often. However this look is prone to change with the seasons of course. Nozomi can be seen with various jackets and in fact his still signature black kanji hoodie with peace on the back. However Nozomi has dyed his hair and let it grown out into a full decently grown out medium brown type of style because he decided to ditch the buzzcut. His eye color still remaining a light brown.(At least a paragraph)
Personality:Nozomi is a pretty standup guy. He's a very confident and determined person. Remaining feverent in whatever he sets his mind too. He's often very excitable and tends to try to incite everyone he knows with his excitement at times. However he is kinda shy unless he feels comfortable or secure around whoever he is talking too. This is due to all the trauma Nozomi has had with losing people in the past/being betrayed. As the plot of Azores as progressed. He has developed into a more mature young man. He's a guy who tends to see the bright side of most things. A little stubborn in fact. Though he's grown to be a bit more confident as well and stands up with more of a spine. He tends to make people laugh in the most unexpected of ways as well. A guy who's very loyal to his companions and doesn't waver from them. (At least a paragraph)
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The Potential
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Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)
—Strength Name:Determinator —Description:Nozomi never gives up on anything he sets his mind onto. Not quitting until he is unable to stand up anymore. Never expect him to stop until you got him down for the count.
—Strength Name:Perceptive —Description:Nozomi has a habit of noticing things in the area around him or about people he speaks too that most people do not. Often he casually notices ways of speech,Personality traits,Etc quicker than others or hidden intentions/things around him.
—Strength Name:Strategic —Description:Nozomi is a natural planner and tends to be ready for a majority of situations. Capable of thinking up a plan on the fly.
—Strength Name:Kind —Description:Over the Plot of Azores a new trait has began to show itself in Nozomi. His Kindness. He has just a way with words that helps people out really. Lifting them up when they need it most. Cheering em up when their down. Or just overall lifting the general mood around himself.
—Strength Name:A Voice of Reason(LeaderShip) —Description:Through his experiences with his friends and with others. Nozomi has proven to be a Voice of Reason in and out of Supernatural situation. Tending to be the mediator at times and keeping a level head. He has grown into this type of person and was not like this at all at first.
Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)
—Weakness Name:Awkwardness —Description:Nozomi gets awkward as hell still despite his newfound greater confidence. Sometimes he stammers or does weird things depending on the situation. Or even shuts down completely.
—Weakness Name:Submissive/Overly Kind —Description:Nozomi is too much of a peoples pleaser as it has begun to show over the course of the plot of azores. He will often sometimes do whatever it takes to cheer someone up or satisfy them. Resulting in him being rather submissive at times or at the least overextending his kindness onto them.
—Weakness Name:Lack of Self Value —Description:Nozomi values his friends and those around him yeah,But he doesn't care about himself enough. He barely keeps himself safe these days and is often too willing to risk himself more than he should for the sake of others.
—Weakness Name:Panicy —Description:Nozomi still to this day panics when things get too bad too fast. Resulting in him lashing out emotionally in whatever way he thinks is possible. It could vary depending on how he is feeling during the moment.
—Weakness Name:Stubborn as a Mule —Description:He's persistant yeah but it's begun to show that Nozomi is a stubborn as hell mule. He'll just keep kicking and pushing. Even if what he's doing isn't exactly the right thing he SHOULD be doing or the best possible choice at that exact moment.
Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))
Weapon Name:Thorn Weapon Description:Thorn appears as a basic double edged spear that is about four feet in length. With a predominantly Dark brown handle. The two spear points are black with a brown line going down the center of them. Strange Markings are often seen on Thorn that Nozomi does not understand. Appearing Akin to runes on the handle. (What it looks like) Weapon Image: (Not necessary) Weapon Attack Type:Pierce(Slash, Pierce, or Strike) Weapon Element: (Leave this blank. Only special weapons obtain an element behind its blows.)
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The Background
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History:Nozomi was a very promising young boy. Though he never stayed in one place. His family was constantly moving all over the place. From the USA to Spain. Due to his parents constantly obtaining new jobs in different places that looked promising. Nozomi eventually ended up in San Malarus Island on his sixteenth birthday. When his parents finally decided to settle down over there after retiring. Nozi was often bullyed/harassed in his younger years because of how he was built. Which led to him developing a strong mindset of persistence to get through it all and overcome all the people that were verbally against him. Though he is glad to have a new start over in San Malarus. Hoping that he doesn't have a repeat of all the previous misfortunes he's experienced when Nozi was younger.(At Least 2-3 Paragraphs)
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Character Name Here:Nozomi Kichida "Don't ever tell me to quit!" The Biography
Birth Name:Nozomi Kichida Aliases:Nozi Gender:Male Age:16 Birth Day:01/05 Arcana: Strength Evoker: Tarot Card Place of Residence:San Malarus Island School Year: Second Year Class: (We'll fill this in once you're approved. This will be your class in school)
After School Club:Martial Arts Club
Part Time Job:None
Appearance: Nozomi is a pretty simple guy with how he looks. He appears as a Tall 6 Ft Pale skinned male with black buzzcut styled hair and a Lanky/Fit Physique.Weighing at about 130lbs. He also keeps it simple with his clothes. Sporting only a basic orange T-Shirt with a pair of dark blue jeans and a pair of basic black dress shoes. Accompanied with a black hoodie with Kanji for "Peace" written on the back of it in red. This is what Nozomi wears for most occasions unless it's seasonal or a special event.
Personality: Nozomi is a pretty standup guy. He's a very confident and determined person. Remaining feverent in whatever he sets his mind too. He's often very excitable and tends to try to incite everyone he knows with his excitement at times. However he is kinda shy unless he feels comfortable or secure around whoever he is talking too. This is due to all the trauma Nozomi has had with losing people in the past/being betrayed.
The Potential
Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)
—Strength Name:Persistence —Description:Nozomi never gives up whenever he sets his mind onto something. Constantly trying until he can't stand up anymore
—Strength Name:Perceptive —Description:Nozomi is a very aware person of the people around him, allowing him to notice things most people would not usually.
—Strength Name:Strategic —Description:Nozomi is a natural strategist and knows how to plan things out and execute them
Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)
—Weakness Name:Awkwardness —Description:Nozomi despite all his confidence will randomly stutter/break down in the middle of conversations he has with others or just turn completley silent.
—Weakness Name:Panicy"?" —Description:Nozomi at times can get swept up in the heat of a situation and begin to panic. Sometimes even fleeing or lashing out however he can.
—Weakness Name:Weak Attention Span —Description:Despite Nozomis ability to percieve well. He does not pay attention often when others are speaking to him and tends to zone out.
Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))
Weapon Name: Thorn Weapon Description: Thorn appears as a basic double edged spear that is about four feet in length. With a predominantly Dark brown handle. The two spear points are black with a brown line going down the center of them. Strange Markings are often seen on Thorn that Nozomi does not understand. Appearing Akin to runes on the handle. Weapon Image: (Not necessary) Weapon Attack Type: Pierce Weapon Element: (Leave this blank. Only special weapons obtain an element behind its blows.)
The BackGround:Nozomi was a very promising young boy. Though he never stayed in one place. His family was constantly moving all over the place. From the USA to Spain. Due to his parents constantly obtaining new jobs in different places that looked promising. Nozomi eventually ended up in San Malarus Island on his sixteenth birthday. When his parents finally decided to settle down over there after retiring. Nozi was often bullyed/harassed in his younger years because of how he was built. Which led to him developing a strong mindset of persistence to get through it all and overcome all the people that were verbally against him. Though he is glad to have a new start over in San Malarus. Hoping that he doesn't have a repeat of all the previous misfortunes he's experienced when Nozi was younger.
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| NEW APP - Nozomi kichida:That Guy:
Nozomi Kichida Heh life gets harder and harder by the minute. Then again It'd be boring if it was too easy right?
The Biography
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Birth Name:Nozomi Kichida Aliases:Nozi Gender:Male Age:16 Birth Day:01/05 Arcana: Portrayed as a young woman holding up a terrifying beast (more often a lion), the Strength Arcana symbolizes an imagery beyond the Beast And Beauty, and is associated with the morality about the stronger power of self-control, gentleness, courage and virtue over brute force. In tarot readings, it can also represent creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized. Evoker:Tarot Card (What you use to summon your Persona. This can be a tarot card (P4 Style), gun (P3 style) or a custom one. It must be a device of some short if not the other options available.) Place of Residence:San Malarus (Where does your character live? School Dorms, San Malarus, etc? Location should be one of these.) School Year:Second Year Class:2-c (We'll fill this in once you're approved. This will be your class in school)
After School Club:Martial Arts
Part Time Job:Works Various OddJobs Now
Appearance:- Nozomi's FC:
Nozomi's appearence has not changed much. Appearing as still a tall 6ft Male. However he has gained a very very slight tan as of recently. Sporting often a Blue normal plain shirt with a red tie. Alongside black uniform like pants often. However this look is prone to change with the seasons of course. Nozomi can be seen with various jackets and in fact his still signature black kanji hoodie with peace on the back. However Nozomi has dyed his hair and let it grown out into a full decently grown out medium brown type of style because he decided to ditch the buzzcut. His eye color still remaining a light brown. His appearence really does still remain the same. The Kichida is a stubborn guy and really will not change how he looks.(At least a paragraph)
Personality:Nozomi is a pretty standup guy. He's a very confident and determined person. Remaining feverent in whatever he sets his mind too. He's often very excitable and tends to try to incite everyone he knows with his excitement at times. However he is kinda shy unless he feels comfortable or secure around whoever he is talking too. This is due to all the trauma Nozomi has had with losing people in the past/being betrayed. As the plot of Azores as progressed. He has developed into a more mature young man. He's a guy who tends to see the bright side of most things. A little stubborn in fact. Though he's grown to be a bit more confident as well and stands up with more of a spine. He tends to make people laugh in the most unexpected of ways as well. A guy who's very loyal to his companions and doesn't waver from them.
Nozomi after facing several trials is one that lives and breathes the phrase one for all and all for one. He's alot less stubborn now and more focused and professional. He pushes past whatever obstacle tries to get in the way of his goals and always speaks in a light hearted tone. One that people quickly find pleasant. (At least a paragraph)
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The Potential
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Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)
—Strength Name:Unwavering —Description:Nozomi never gives up on anything he sets his mind onto. Not quitting until he is unable to stand up anymore. Never expect him to stop until you got him down for the count. You won't ever get this guy down unless you kill em,but don't really try that cause it ain't nice >_>.
—Strength Name:Perceptive —Description:Nozomi has a habit of noticing things in the area around him or about people he speaks too that most people do not. Often he casually notices ways of speech,Personality traits,Etc quicker than others or hidden intentions/things around him. He is always alert now. Noticing things with much more incredible ease. Though he ain't anything superhuman.
—Strength Name:Back in Shape —Description:Nozomi has finally reaquired his athletic body off of his exercise experience and all of the damn running he has had to do throughout the entire plot. As a result.He now has a speed boost in terms of his own movement. Because he now is in some serious prime shape and moves quicker as a result.
—Strength Name:Kind —Description:Over the Plot of Azores a new trait has began to show itself in Nozomi. His Kindness. He has just a way with words that helps people out really. Lifting them up when they need it most. Cheering em up when their down. Or just overall lifting the general mood around himself. (Technically,This is a boost to social links)
—Strength Name:A Voice of Reason(LeaderShip) —Description:Through his experiences with his friends and with others. Nozomi has proven to be a Voice of Reason in and out of Supernatural situation. Tending to be the mediator at times and keeping a level head. He has grown into this type of person and was not like this at all at first.
Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)
—Weakness Name:It's like every day is his last. —Description:Nozomi due to all the trauma and current damn stuff he is facing now lives every day as if it were his last. He also is partly paniced internally. He just doesn't know how to deal with everything. As a result. 10% More vulnerable to distress ailment.
—Weakness Name:Submissive/Overly Kind —Description:Nozomi is too much of a peoples pleaser as it has begun to show over the course of the plot of azores. He will often sometimes do whatever it takes to cheer someone up or satisfy them. Resulting in him being rather submissive at times or at the least overextending his kindness onto them.
—Weakness Name:Lack of Self Value —Description:Nozomi values his friends and those around him yeah,But he doesn't care about himself enough. He barely keeps himself safe these days and is often too willing to risk himself more than he should for the sake of others.
—Weakness Name:OverExertion —Description:Nozomi overexerts himself in alot of things he does. Allowing him to achive more than others sometimes....Though it also results in he himself tiring quicker or exhausting himself mentally quicker.
—[b]Weakness Name:Doesn't know when to quit —Description:He's persistant yeah but it's begun to show that Nozomi is a stubborn as hell mule. He doesn't seem to know when to quit either even when a situation looks impossible or clear that it ain't gonna improve.The Kichida just doesn't relent. Claiming it's "The Kichida Way"
Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))
Weapon Name:Thorn Weapon Description:Thorn appears as a basic double edged spear that is about four feet in length. With a predominantly Dark brown handle. The two spear points are black with a brown line going down the center of them. Strange Markings are often seen on Thorn that Nozomi does not understand. Appearing Akin to runes on the handle. (What it looks like) Weapon Image: (Not necessary) Weapon Attack Type:Pierce(Slash, Pierce, or Strike) Weapon Element: (Leave this blank. Only special weapons obtain an element behind its blows.)
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The Background
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History:Nozomi was a very promising young boy. Though he never stayed in one place. His family was constantly moving all over the place. From the USA to Spain. Due to his parents constantly obtaining new jobs in different places that looked promising. Nozomi eventually ended up in San Malarus Island on his sixteenth birthday. When his parents finally decided to settle down over there after retiring. Nozi was often bullyed/harassed in his younger years because of how he was built. Which led to him developing a strong mindset of persistence to get through it all and overcome all the people that were verbally against him. Though he is glad to have a new start over in San Malarus. Hoping that he doesn't have a repeat of all the previous misfortunes he's experienced when Nozi was younger.(At Least 2-3 Paragraphs)
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- OLD APP:
Nozomi Kichida Don't ever tell me to quit!
The Biography
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Birth Name:Nozomi Kichida Aliases:Nozi Gender:Male Age:16 Birth Day:01/05 Arcana: Portrayed as a young woman holding up a terrifying beast (more often a lion), the Strength Arcana symbolizes an imagery beyond the Beast And Beauty, and is associated with the morality about the stronger power of self-control, gentleness, courage and virtue over brute force. In tarot readings, it can also represent creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized. Evoker:Tarot Card (What you use to summon your Persona. This can be a tarot card (P4 Style), gun (P3 style) or a custom one. It must be a device of some short if not the other options available.) Place of Residence:San Malarus (Where does your character live? School Dorms, San Malarus, etc? Location should be one of these.) School Year:Second Year Class:2-c (We'll fill this in once you're approved. This will be your class in school)
After School Club:Martial Arts
Part Time Job:Works Various OddJobs Now
Appearance:- Nozomi's FC:
Nozomi's appearence has not changed much. Appearing as still a tall 6ft Male. However he has gained a very very slight tan as of recently. Sporting often a Blue normal plain shirt with a red tie. Alongside black uniform like pants often. However this look is prone to change with the seasons of course. Nozomi can be seen with various jackets and in fact his still signature black kanji hoodie with peace on the back. However Nozomi has dyed his hair and let it grown out into a full decently grown out medium brown type of style because he decided to ditch the buzzcut. His eye color still remaining a light brown.(At least a paragraph)
Personality:Nozomi is a pretty standup guy. He's a very confident and determined person. Remaining feverent in whatever he sets his mind too. He's often very excitable and tends to try to incite everyone he knows with his excitement at times. However he is kinda shy unless he feels comfortable or secure around whoever he is talking too. This is due to all the trauma Nozomi has had with losing people in the past/being betrayed. As the plot of Azores as progressed. He has developed into a more mature young man. He's a guy who tends to see the bright side of most things. A little stubborn in fact. Though he's grown to be a bit more confident as well and stands up with more of a spine. He tends to make people laugh in the most unexpected of ways as well. A guy who's very loyal to his companions and doesn't waver from them. (At least a paragraph)
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Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)
—Strength Name:Determinator —Description:Nozomi never gives up on anything he sets his mind onto. Not quitting until he is unable to stand up anymore. Never expect him to stop until you got him down for the count.
—Strength Name:Perceptive —Description:Nozomi has a habit of noticing things in the area around him or about people he speaks too that most people do not. Often he casually notices ways of speech,Personality traits,Etc quicker than others or hidden intentions/things around him.
—Strength Name:Strategic —Description:Nozomi is a natural planner and tends to be ready for a majority of situations. Capable of thinking up a plan on the fly.
—Strength Name:Kind —Description:Over the Plot of Azores a new trait has began to show itself in Nozomi. His Kindness. He has just a way with words that helps people out really. Lifting them up when they need it most. Cheering em up when their down. Or just overall lifting the general mood around himself.
—Strength Name:A Voice of Reason(LeaderShip) —Description:Through his experiences with his friends and with others. Nozomi has proven to be a Voice of Reason in and out of Supernatural situation. Tending to be the mediator at times and keeping a level head. He has grown into this type of person and was not like this at all at first.
Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)
—Weakness Name:Awkwardness —Description:Nozomi gets awkward as hell still despite his newfound greater confidence. Sometimes he stammers or does weird things depending on the situation. Or even shuts down completely.
—Weakness Name:Submissive/Overly Kind —Description:Nozomi is too much of a peoples pleaser as it has begun to show over the course of the plot of azores. He will often sometimes do whatever it takes to cheer someone up or satisfy them. Resulting in him being rather submissive at times or at the least overextending his kindness onto them.
—Weakness Name:Lack of Self Value —Description:Nozomi values his friends and those around him yeah,But he doesn't care about himself enough. He barely keeps himself safe these days and is often too willing to risk himself more than he should for the sake of others.
—Weakness Name:Panicy —Description:Nozomi still to this day panics when things get too bad too fast. Resulting in him lashing out emotionally in whatever way he thinks is possible. It could vary depending on how he is feeling during the moment.
—Weakness Name:Stubborn as a Mule —Description:He's persistant yeah but it's begun to show that Nozomi is a stubborn as hell mule. He'll just keep kicking and pushing. Even if what he's doing isn't exactly the right thing he SHOULD be doing or the best possible choice at that exact moment.
Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))
Weapon Name:Thorn Weapon Description:Thorn appears as a basic double edged spear that is about four feet in length. With a predominantly Dark brown handle. The two spear points are black with a brown line going down the center of them. Strange Markings are often seen on Thorn that Nozomi does not understand. Appearing Akin to runes on the handle. (What it looks like) Weapon Image: (Not necessary) Weapon Attack Type:Pierce(Slash, Pierce, or Strike) Weapon Element: (Leave this blank. Only special weapons obtain an element behind its blows.)
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History:Nozomi was a very promising young boy. Though he never stayed in one place. His family was constantly moving all over the place. From the USA to Spain. Due to his parents constantly obtaining new jobs in different places that looked promising. Nozomi eventually ended up in San Malarus Island on his sixteenth birthday. When his parents finally decided to settle down over there after retiring. Nozi was often bullyed/harassed in his younger years because of how he was built. Which led to him developing a strong mindset of persistence to get through it all and overcome all the people that were verbally against him. Though he is glad to have a new start over in San Malarus. Hoping that he doesn't have a repeat of all the previous misfortunes he's experienced when Nozi was younger.(At Least 2-3 Paragraphs)
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Nozomi Kichida Heh life gets harder and harder by the minute. Then again It'd be boring if it was too easy right?
The Biography
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Birth Name:Nozomi Kichida Aliases:Nozi Gender:Male Age:16 Birth Day:01/05 Arcana: Portrayed as a young woman holding up a terrifying beast (more often a lion), the Strength Arcana symbolizes an imagery beyond the Beast And Beauty, and is associated with the morality about the stronger power of self-control, gentleness, courage and virtue over brute force. In tarot readings, it can also represent creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized. Evoker:Tarot Card (What you use to summon your Persona. This can be a tarot card (P4 Style), gun (P3 style) or a custom one. It must be a device of some short if not the other options available.) Place of Residence:San Malarus (Where does your character live? School Dorms, San Malarus, etc? Location should be one of these.) School Year:Second Year Class:2-c (We'll fill this in once you're approved. This will be your class in school)
After School Club:Martial Arts
Part Time Job:Works Various OddJobs Now
Appearance:- Nozomi's FC:
Nozomi's appearence has not changed much. Appearing as still a tall 6ft Male. However he has gained a very very slight tan as of recently. Sporting often a Blue normal plain shirt with a red tie. Alongside black uniform like pants often. However this look is prone to change with the seasons of course. Nozomi can be seen with various jackets and in fact his still signature black kanji hoodie with peace on the back. However Nozomi has dyed his hair and let it grown out into a full decently grown out medium brown type of style because he decided to ditch the buzzcut. His eye color still remaining a light brown. His appearence really does still remain the same. The Kichida is a stubborn guy and really will not change how he looks.(At least a paragraph)
Personality:Nozomi is a pretty standup guy. He's a very confident and determined person. Remaining feverent in whatever he sets his mind too. He's often very excitable and tends to try to incite everyone he knows with his excitement at times. However he is kinda shy unless he feels comfortable or secure around whoever he is talking too. This is due to all the trauma Nozomi has had with losing people in the past/being betrayed. As the plot of Azores as progressed. He has developed into a more mature young man. He's a guy who tends to see the bright side of most things. A little stubborn in fact. Though he's grown to be a bit more confident as well and stands up with more of a spine. He tends to make people laugh in the most unexpected of ways as well. A guy who's very loyal to his companions and doesn't waver from them.
Nozomi after facing several trials is one that lives and breathes the phrase one for all and all for one. He's alot less stubborn now and more focused and professional. He pushes past whatever obstacle tries to get in the way of his goals and always speaks in a light hearted tone. One that people quickly find pleasant. (At least a paragraph)
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The Potential
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Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)
—Strength Name:Unwavering —Description:Nozomi never gives up on anything he sets his mind onto. Not quitting until he is unable to stand up anymore. Never expect him to stop until you got him down for the count. You won't ever get this guy down unless you kill em,but don't really try that cause it ain't nice >_>.
—Strength Name:Perceptive —Description:Nozomi has a habit of noticing things in the area around him or about people he speaks too that most people do not. Often he casually notices ways of speech,Personality traits,Etc quicker than others or hidden intentions/things around him. He is always alert now. Noticing things with much more incredible ease. Though he ain't anything superhuman.
—Strength Name:Back in Shape —Description:Nozomi has finally reaquired his athletic body off of his exercise experience and all of the damn running he has had to do throughout the entire plot. As a result.He now has a speed boost in terms of his own movement. Because he now is in some serious prime shape and moves quicker as a result.
—Strength Name:Kind —Description:Over the Plot of Azores a new trait has began to show itself in Nozomi. His Kindness. He has just a way with words that helps people out really. Lifting them up when they need it most. Cheering em up when their down. Or just overall lifting the general mood around himself. (Technically,This is a boost to social links)
—Strength Name:A Voice of Reason(LeaderShip) —Description:Through his experiences with his friends and with others. Nozomi has proven to be a Voice of Reason in and out of Supernatural situation. Tending to be the mediator at times and keeping a level head. He has grown into this type of person and was not like this at all at first.
Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)
—Weakness Name:It's like every day is his last. —Description:Nozomi due to all the trauma and current damn stuff he is facing now lives every day as if it were his last. He also is partly paniced internally. He just doesn't know how to deal with everything. As a result. 10% More vulnerable to distress ailment.
—Weakness Name:Submissive/Overly Kind —Description:Nozomi is too much of a peoples pleaser as it has begun to show over the course of the plot of azores. He will often sometimes do whatever it takes to cheer someone up or satisfy them. Resulting in him being rather submissive at times or at the least overextending his kindness onto them.
—Weakness Name:Lack of Self Value —Description:Nozomi values his friends and those around him yeah,But he doesn't care about himself enough. He barely keeps himself safe these days and is often too willing to risk himself more than he should for the sake of others.
—Weakness Name:OverExertion —Description:Nozomi overexerts himself in alot of things he does. Allowing him to achive more than others sometimes....Though it also results in he himself tiring quicker or exhausting himself mentally quicker.
—[b]Weakness Name:Doesn't know when to quit —Description:He's persistant yeah but it's begun to show that Nozomi is a stubborn as hell mule. He doesn't seem to know when to quit either even when a situation looks impossible or clear that it ain't gonna improve.The Kichida just doesn't relent. Claiming it's "The Kichida Way"
Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))
Weapon Name:Thorn Weapon Description:Thorn appears as a basic double edged spear that is about four feet in length. With a predominantly Dark brown handle. The two spear points are black with a brown line going down the center of them. Strange Markings are often seen on Thorn that Nozomi does not understand. Appearing Akin to runes on the handle. (What it looks like) Weapon Image: (Not necessary) Weapon Attack Type:Pierce(Slash, Pierce, or Strike) Weapon Element: (Leave this blank. Only special weapons obtain an element behind its blows.)
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The Background
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History:Nozomi was a very promising young boy. Though he never stayed in one place. His family was constantly moving all over the place. From the USA to Spain. Due to his parents constantly obtaining new jobs in different places that looked promising. Nozomi eventually ended up in San Malarus Island on his sixteenth birthday. When his parents finally decided to settle down over there after retiring. Nozi was often bullyed/harassed in his younger years because of how he was built. Which led to him developing a strong mindset of persistence to get through it all and overcome all the people that were verbally against him. Though he is glad to have a new start over in San Malarus. Hoping that he doesn't have a repeat of all the previous misfortunes he's experienced when Nozi was younger.(At Least 2-3 Paragraphs)
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PART TWO MOTHERFUCKAS
Nozomi Kichida I used to think I could do it all alone, but now. I realized. I got my friends to help me out.
The Biography
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Birth Name:Nozomi Kichida Aliases:Nozi,"K" Gender:Male Age: Birth Day:01/05 Arcana: Strength:Portrayed as a young woman holding up a terrifying beast (more often a lion), the Strength Arcana symbolizes an imagery beyond the Beast And Beauty, and is associated with the morality about the stronger power of self-control, gentleness, courage and virtue over brute force. In tarot readings, it can also represent creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized. Place of Residence: San Malarus Evoker: Yo he uses da Tarot Card Academy Semester:College Class:Graduating
Part/Full Time Job:Works at a cafe
Appearance:Nozomi appears as a tall 6ft Male still. Except now he's styled his hair. Or so he says because it actually really does not look any different. Nozomi has ditched his previous outfit of the classic blue ensemble he wore in favor of a now more smooth red blazer with a white dress shirt on the inside. Combined with a blue pair of pants. Maintaining his previous sense of fashion and cleaning himself up a bit more. Weighing in at about 140lbs at this moment in time and sporting a decently toned body.
Personality: Nozomi is a pretty stand up guy who likes the company of just about anybody. He is open to hearing others out and is a very social person now. You can often find him just about anywhere as the Kichida really does not have any preferences on where he goes or hangs around. He has a odd way of touching people when he talks to them. Almost as if when speaking to him. You just know he's "alright". Greeting you with a smile here and there. He doesn't shy away from challenges of any kind and still can be sometimes stubborn when he approaches a problem. Though he knows when he's overwhelmed. Not being shy of actually asking for help.
Nozomi can be very complacent at times or passive despite all the energy he displays in public. Displaying a great degree of patience. As a person he lives and breathes the phrase one for all and all for one. He likes to support those that he meets and isn't shy of lending a hand here and there for those he considers his friends either. Albeit Nozomi can also be pretty brash at times lately or a little too direct in how he acts. All that built up energy he has in his system doesn't always result in good things.
The Kichida is very ambitious and desires to just have a successful life. Unfortunately he tends to not know how to go about what he sets out to do. Being an Idealist rather than a planner. Confident and determined but not realist sometimes. Which can horribly set him back a few steps until he gets his act together. His best strength is working and understanding things in the moment.However he doesn't understand concepts like greed or avarice or the desire to abuse things. As Nozomi is rather comfortable with what he has in life right now and doesn't try to expand himself to a level which he cannot handle as a person. To him he doesn't really need big or lavish lives or glitz and glammor.
He just really needs the people that matter to him.
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The Potential
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Strengths: —Strength Name:Understanding —Description:Nozomi has met several different kinds of people throughout his life and because of this has learned how to adapt himself to actually speak to them the way they should be. He understands how to relate to peoples problems as well or change up how he acts in order to get a better answer out of them. Acting as a well built shoulder to cry on.This is something however that people can often feel is his genuine concern and is something that has only developed from who he really is, Unlike others who may formulate a similar skill for deception or "perfection"
—Strength Name:Athlete —Description:Nozomi has constantly improved his body to the pinnacle to that a Human can be. Combining his well found resolve,Persistance,Knowledge and actual hard work. His body is the equivalent of an Athletes at the moment. As a result he is also actually pretty fast. (Speed Boost)
—Strength Name:The Mentalist —Description:He just knows how to look at you. Paying careful glances to places,people or things around him and carefully placing the pieces of the puzzle together in his mind. Nozomi can analyze situations and the like and come up with a logical solution or conclusion depending on what is in front of him at the time. However Nozomi only pays attention to what's going on at the moment, and sometimes may forget key details from the past.
—Strength Name:Exemplar —Description:Nozomi has worked his way up and as a result. People tend to look torwards him when things are going wrong or theres some kind of Conflict. Nozomi knows how to assert himself in a situation and properly manage people as well in times of stress,etc. Especially given his experience in the prior events of Azores.(LeaderShip)
—Strength Name:Shocking (Persona Strength) —Description:Nozomi due to his Initial Personas Nature and Bonding with him throughout his journey has developed a strange symptom in which the Electrical current that goes through his body is Higher than would be a Normal Persons. Resulting in Minor Phenomena where he has for example minor cases of static cling on his clothes or when he touches things. His Bio-Electricity is higher than a Normal persons would be. Though he can't of course. Randomly shock people at will. This triggers on accident.
Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)
—Weakness Name:Hard Headed —Description:Nozomi can be kinda stubborn still sometimes and frankly this hasn't changed. He has a habit of catching himself in predicaments he just isn't supposed to be getting his ass into these days.
—Weakness Name:Fears —Description:Nozomi has internal paranoia within himself since the previous events of Azores. As a result he has developed slight fears that the events of azores will reoccur to him again,except this time they won't end so well. Conferring a 15% extra chance of distress effecting him. As his mind is more vulnerable to this.
—Weakness Name:Needs to Understand Himself —Description:Nozomi himself is lost in life and in his own way. While he is capable of analyzing everything around himand working the pieces of things together. He really doesn't take in the facts of reality and how he needs to get his shit together and his CAREER together at this point.
—Weakness Name:Too Caring —Description:Nozomi is often really quick to put himself in harms way compared to other people when it comes to those he considers friends or important to him. As a result he may go out of his way to risk his life for the sake of his friends even if it seems impractical or just down right stupid.
—Weakness Name:Conduit —Description:Nozomi due to the Higher electromagnetic field he has around his body because of what his persona has given him. He is more sensitive to EMPS of any kind. Anything that would shut down electronics in a Large area manually (that isnt supernatural) would Tire him out for example.(Electric attacks do 10% more extra damage to him)
Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows and Demons without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))
Weapon Name:Thorn Weapon Description:Thorn appears as a basic double edged spear that is about four feet in length. With a predominantly Dark brown handle. The two spear points are black with a brown line going down the center of them. Strange Markings are often seen on Thorn that Nozomi does not understand. Appearing Akin to runes on the handle. (What it looks like) Weapon Image: (Not necessary) Weapon Attack Type:Pierce(Slash, Pierce, or Strike) Weapon Element: (Leave this blank. Only special weapons obtain an element behind its blows.)
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History:Nozomi was a very promising young boy. Though he never stayed in one place. His family was constantly moving all over the place. From the USA to Spain. Due to his parents constantly obtaining new jobs in different places that looked promising. Nozomi eventually ended up in San Malarus Island on his sixteenth birthday. When his parents finally decided to settle down over there after retiring. Nozi was often bullyed/harassed in his younger years because of how he was built. Which led to him developing a strong mindset of persistence to get through it all and overcome all the people that were verbally against him. Though he is glad to have a new start over in San Malarus. Hoping that he doesn't have a repeat of all the previous misfortunes he's experienced when Nozi was younger. Part Two Nozomi triumphed above the trials of Azores. Resulting in he himself becoming a better person. He had dealt with the angels and the Mother. Albeit not without the sacrifice of a guy he didn't know. Much to the dismay of everyone and 1 person nobody there seemed to know. He left disheartened and paid a sad goodbye to the boy he formed a relationship with towards the end of the supernatural events in Azores. Shunnosuke. Even though Shunnosuke exited his life. Nozomi could never shake a feeling that one day. Maybe he'd see him again. He would continue to better himself. Improve. Work. He had to build his life back together now that things weren't exactly so supernatural any more. Now he is starting his first year in college. Working out just what the hell it is he wants to do with his life. The supernatural was out of his life for now, but the bonds he had formed during the event weren't.
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| Subject: Re: Nozomi Kichida(PU turned Part 2 WC) Tue Jan 26, 2016 2:57 am | |
| I don't see WIP on this so I assume it is done, so here we go.
1. On gender I see a broken code.
2. Evoker: I would still keep it with your tarot card. As far as I recall even in the games when persona went to the next level the evokes used were still there.
3. Appearance: Where is it? Even if it is for part 2, a question mark is not a pass in my book.
3. Personality: This is just a preference thing, but perhaps go back through it to make it flow easier when read. There are some areas I got a bit confused as to what you meant by your wording. Outside of this it is fine.
4. —Strength Name:The Mentalist —Description:He just knows how to look at you. Paying careful glances to places,people or things around him and carefully placing the pieces of the puzzle together in his mind. Nozomi can analyze situations and the like and come up with a logical solution or conclusion depending on what is in front of him at the time. - I find this to be clashing with what you just said in personality about him not being a planner. In my mind this a planner trait.
5. —Strength Name:Shocking (Persona Strength) —Description: Nozomi due to his Initial Personas Nature and Bonding with him throughout his journey has developed a strange symptom in which the Electrical current that goes through his body is Higher than would be a Normal Persons. Resulting in Minor Phenomena where he has for example minor cases of static cling on his clothes or when he touches things. - I am goint with a no on this one since I haven't seen this sort of trait before with persona. Typically, I see them as an extension of the soul rather than something that would bonding with their user in any fashion that would give him this skill. I could see it if it a shadow weapon since a chance of merging is there, but not with a persona.
6. —Weakness Name:Conduit —Description:Nozomi due to the Higher electromagnetic field he has around his body because of what his persona has given him. He is more sensitive to EMPS of any kind. Anything that would shut down electronics in a Large area manually (that isnt supernatural) would Tire him out for example.(Electricity based attacks are 10% more likely to hit him) - The same issue I have with the strength associated with this applies here. I don't mind battle skills its just in this case it I am not comprehending the logic behind these two without further explanation.
7. Get rid of floating weakness. It does not apply to Part 2.
8. On your description for soul bound information take out the stuff in parentheses and just leave the choice taken there. It makes it hard to read other wise.
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| Subject: Re: Nozomi Kichida(PU turned Part 2 WC) Tue Jan 26, 2016 12:30 pm | |
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I only forgot to put Wip lol Hold on My Bad. This isn't done at all.
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| Subject: Re: Nozomi Kichida(PU turned Part 2 WC) Tue Jan 26, 2016 3:48 pm | |
| Since the shocking weakness is cosmetic I don't see a problem with it. The mentality I do agree clashes with your personality a little, and as for the weakness since the way people may calculate targets. You can change it to elec attacks having a 10% to ALSO hit you if that helps. It doesn't bother me that the coding is a little wonky or floating strength is there since even in old rules you could gain strengths over time. It can remain empty there. Everything else I don't have an issue with as long as I can read it; typos dont bother me. Once it's done it can be looked over again, but I was asked to check it over. | |
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| Nozomi Kichida I used to think I could do it all alone. Like I could take everything on in this world by myself. Then I finally realized I don't have too. That I have my friends by my side all the way.
The Biography
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Birth Name:Nozomi Kichida Aliases:Nozi,"K" Gender:Male Age:18 Birth Day:01/05 Arcana:Strength:Portrayed as a young woman holding up a terrifying beast (more often a lion), the Strength Arcana symbolizes an imagery beyond the Beast And Beauty, and is associated with the morality about the stronger power of self-control, gentleness, courage and virtue over brute force. In tarot readings, it can also represent creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized. Place of Residence:San Malarus Evoker: He uses da Tarot card Academy Semester:College Freshman Class:Graduated High School
Part/Full Time Job:Works at a Cafe or something.
Appearance:
Nozomi Kichida appears as a standardly tall 6ft guy weighing in at about 135lbs. Who has a rather well built lean physique. Now sporting dark blue hair. He has traded in his previous attire for a dark blue leather jacket with a red scarf around his neck.Underneath is a white T shirt. Nozomi as well sports a pair of grey jeans and a belt. Alongside dark blue boots. Though on other occassions he can be seen with differently styled outfits. Much to the surprise of others given people would gather the assumption that he has a thing for blue. He has a glint in his eyes some people just really can't understand.
Personality:Nozomi is a pretty Stand-Up Guy when it comes to people. He's a guy that likes to be a shoulder to lean on for those he meets and befriends. Nozomi is not hard to talk to anymore either. As he is a rather social person and often finds himself being the one making the first move in any form of situation. Even then he still gets a little nervous from time to time.He can be a little brash at times and maybe a little hard headed. However underneath that is a decent guy with good intentions to those around him.
Nozomi can be very watchful and caring of those that he meets. Especially from the previous events of Azores. As the events that transpired made him value more the bonds he creates with people and just how much they effect his day to day life. He has a odd way of touching people when he speaks to them. it's almost as if when speaking to him. You can kinda feel like he's alright.
Despite the energy he displays often. Nozomi can be rather compalcent with things and is also rather patient. At times he may even opt to not do anything if that is what he thinks is right for the situation. The Kichida is rather ambitious and desires to have a successful life. Willing to work his way up to the top so he can have what he believes he deserves in life and sees no issue in hard work. Though he doesn't want a lavish life style or anything of the sort.
Really. The only thing Nozomi wants is his life together, and those that he cares for with him.
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Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)
—Strength Name:Understanding —Description:Nozomi has met several different kinds of people throughout his life and because of this has learned how to adapt himself to actually speak to them the way they should be. He understands how to relate to peoples problems as well or change up how he acts in order to get a better answer out of them. Acting as a well built shoulder to cry on.This is something however that people can often feel is his genuine concern and is something that has only developed from who he really is, Unlike others who may formulate a similar skill for deception or "perfection"
—Strength Name:The Mentalist —Description:He just knows how to look at you. Paying careful glances to places,people or things around him and carefully placing the pieces of the puzzle together in his mind. Nozomi can analyze situations and the like and come up with a logical solution or conclusion depending on what is in front of him at the time. However Nozomi only pays attention to what's going on at the moment, and sometimes may forget key details from the past.
—Strength Name:Exemplar —Description:Nozomi has worked his way up and as a result. People tend to look torwards him when things are going wrong or theres some kind of Conflict. Nozomi knows how to assert himself in a situation and properly manage people as well in times of stress,etc. Especially given his experience in the prior events of Azores.(LeaderShip)
—Strength Name:Athlete —Description:Nozomi has constantly improved his body to the pinnacle to that a Human can be. Combining his well found resolve,Persistance,Knowledge and actual hard work. His body is the equivalent of an Athletes at the moment. As a result he is also actually pretty fast. (Speed Boost)
—Strength Name:The Will to Live! —Description:Nozomi has a Innate fighting spirit. The Will to Live in his life. In his eyes you can see a Lion nearly. A guy who has the spirit to push on besides difficulty,Hardships and alot of other things. Someone who sets his eyes on the task. People just looking at Nozomi can tell he's a pretty hard working person, and this sometimes with how much focus he genuinely has can actually scare weak minded people.
Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)
—Weakness Name:Hard Headed —Description:Nozomi can be kinda stubborn still sometimes and frankly this hasn't changed. He has a habit of catching himself in predicaments he just isn't supposed to be getting his ass into these days.
—Weakness Name:Fears —Description:Nozomi has internal paranoia within himself since the previous events of Azores. As a result he has developed slight fears that the events of azores will reoccur to him again,except this time they won't end so well. Conferring a 15% extra chance of distress effecting him. As his mind is more vulnerable to this.
—Weakness Name:Needs to Understand Himself —Description:Nozomi himself is lost in life and in his own way. While he is capable of analyzing everything around himand working the pieces of things together. He really doesn't take in the facts of reality and how he needs to get his shit together and his CAREER together at this point.
—Weakness Name:Too Caring —Description:Nozomi is often really quick to put himself in harms way compared to other people when it comes to those he considers friends or important to him. As a result he may go out of his way to risk his life for the sake of his friends even if it seems impractical or just down right stupid.
—Weakness Name:Conductive —Description:Nozomi due to his nature as a person is slightly more vulnerable to electricity, especially with the higher amount of Bio-Electricity he has in his body for unknown reasons off of his Potential (+10% Damage Taken from Electricity)
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Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows and Demons without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))
Weapon Name:Rising Tide Weapon Description:It appears a black short sword that is about 3FT Long in terms of length and has a guard on the handle for the user to grip rather well. Weapon Image: Weapon Attack Type:Slash Weapon Element:
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The Background
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| History:History:Nozomi was a very promising young boy. Though he never stayed in one place. His family was constantly moving all over the place. From the USA to Spain. Due to his parents constantly obtaining new jobs in different places that looked promising. Nozomi eventually ended up in San Malarus Island on his sixteenth birthday. When his parents finally decided to settle down over there after retiring. Nozi was often bullyed/harassed in his younger years because of how he was built. Which led to him developing a strong mindset of persistence to get through it all and overcome all the people that were verbally against him. Though he is glad to have a new start over in San Malarus. Hoping that he doesn't have a repeat of all the previous misfortunes he's experienced when Nozi was younger.
Part Two
Nozomi triumphed above the trials of Azores. Resulting in he himself becoming a better person. He had dealt with the angels and the Mother. Albeit not without the sacrifice of a guy he didn't know. Much to the dismay of everyone and 1 person nobody there seemed to know. He left disheartened and paid a sad goodbye to the boy he formed a relationship with towards the end of the supernatural events in Azores. Shunnosuke. Even though Shunnosuke exited his life. Nozomi could never shake a feeling that one day. Maybe he'd see him again.
He would continue to better himself. Improve. Work. He had to build his life back together now that things weren't exactly so supernatural any more. Now he is starting his first year in college. Working out just what the hell it is he wants to do with his life.
The supernatural was out of his life for now, but the bonds he had formed during the event weren't.
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