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Nozomi Kichida
I used to think I could do it all alone. Like I could take everything on in this world by myself. Then I finally realized I don't have too. That I  have my friends by my side all the way.


The Biography


Birth Name:Nozomi Kichida
Aliases:Nozi,"K"
Gender:Male
Age:18
Birth Day:01/05
Arcana:Strength:Portrayed as a young woman holding up a terrifying beast (more often a lion), the Strength Arcana symbolizes an imagery beyond the Beast And Beauty, and is associated with the morality about the stronger power of self-control, gentleness, courage and virtue over brute force. In tarot readings, it can also represent creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized.
Place of Residence:San Malarus
Evoker: He uses da Tarot card
Academy Semester:College Freshman
Class:Graduated High School


Part/Full Time Job:Works at a Cafe or something.

Appearance:
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Nozomi Kichida appears as a standardly tall 6ft guy weighing in at about 135lbs. Who has a rather well built lean physique. Now sporting dark blue hair. He has traded in his previous attire for a dark blue leather jacket with a red scarf around his neck.Underneath is a white T shirt. Nozomi as well sports a pair of grey jeans and a belt. Alongside dark blue boots. Though on other occassions he can be seen with differently styled outfits. Much to the surprise of others given people would gather the assumption that he has a thing for blue. He has a glint in his eyes some people just really can't understand.

Personality:Nozomi is a pretty Stand-Up Guy when it comes to people. He's a guy that likes to be a shoulder to lean on for those he meets and befriends. Nozomi is not hard to talk to anymore either. As he is a rather social person and often finds himself being the one making the first move in any form of situation. Even then he still gets a little nervous from time to time.He can be a little brash at times and maybe a little hard headed. However underneath that is a decent guy with good intentions to those around him.

Nozomi can be very watchful and caring of those that he meets. Especially from the previous events of Azores. As the events that transpired made him value more the bonds he creates with people and just how much they effect his day to day life. He has a odd way of touching people when he speaks to them. it's almost as if when speaking to him. You can kinda feel like he's alright.

Despite the energy he displays often. Nozomi can be rather compalcent with things and is also rather patient. At times he may even opt to not do anything if that is what he thinks is right for the situation. The Kichida is rather ambitious and desires to have a successful life. Willing to work his way up to the top so he can have what he believes he deserves in life and sees no issue in hard work. Though he doesn't want a lavish life style or anything of the sort.

Really. The only thing Nozomi wants is his life together, and those that he cares for with him.


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The Potential
 


Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)


Strength Name:Understanding
Description:Nozomi has met several different kinds of people throughout his life and because of this has learned how to adapt himself to actually speak to them the way they should be. He understands how to relate to peoples problems as well or change up how he acts in order to get a better answer out of them. Acting as a well built shoulder to cry on.This is something however that people can often feel is his genuine concern and is something that has only developed from who he really is, Unlike others who may formulate a similar skill for deception or "perfection"


Strength Name:The Mentalist
Description:He just knows how to look at you. Paying careful glances to places,people or things around him and carefully placing the pieces of the puzzle together in his mind. Nozomi can analyze situations and the like and come up with a logical solution or conclusion depending on what is in front of him at the time. However Nozomi only pays attention to what's going on at the moment, and sometimes may forget key details from the past.

Strength Name:Exemplar
Description:Nozomi has worked his way up and as a result. People tend to look torwards him when things are going wrong or theres some kind of Conflict. Nozomi knows how to assert himself in a situation and properly manage people as well in times of stress,etc. Especially given his experience in the prior events of Azores.(LeaderShip)

Strength Name:Athlete
Description:Nozomi has constantly improved his body to the pinnacle to that a Human can be. Combining his well found resolve,Persistance,Knowledge and actual hard work. His body is the equivalent of an Athletes at the moment. As a result he is also actually pretty fast. (Speed Boost)

Strength Name:The Will to Live!
Description:Nozomi has a Innate fighting spirit. The Will to Live in his life. In his eyes you can see a Lion nearly. A guy who has the spirit to push on besides difficulty,Hardships and alot of other things. Someone who sets his eyes on the task. People just looking at Nozomi can tell he's a pretty hard working person, and this sometimes with how much focus he genuinely has can actually scare weak minded people.


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Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)


Weakness Name:Hard Headed
Description:Nozomi can be kinda stubborn still sometimes and frankly this hasn't changed. He has a habit of catching himself in predicaments he just isn't supposed to be getting his ass into these days.

Weakness Name:Fears
Description:Nozomi has internal paranoia within himself since the previous events of Azores. As a result he has developed slight fears that the events of azores will reoccur to him again,except this time they won't end so well. Conferring a 15% extra chance of distress effecting him. As his mind is more vulnerable to this.

Weakness Name:Needs to Understand Himself
Description:Nozomi himself is lost in life and in his own way. While he is capable of analyzing everything around himand working the pieces of things together. He really doesn't take in the facts of reality and how he needs to get his shit together and his CAREER together at this point.

Weakness Name:Too Caring
Description:Nozomi is often really quick to put himself in harms way compared to other people when it comes to those he considers friends or important to him. As a result he may go out of his way to risk his life for the sake of his friends even if it seems impractical or just down right stupid.

Weakness Name:Conductive
Description:Nozomi due to his nature as a person is slightly more vulnerable to electricity, especially with the higher amount of Bio-Electricity he has in his body for unknown reasons off of his Potential (+10% Damage Taken from Electricity)

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Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows and Demons without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))

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Weapon Name:Rising Tide
Weapon Description:It appears a black short sword that is about 3FT Long in terms of length and has a guard on the handle for the user to grip rather well.
Weapon Image:
Weapon Attack Type:Slash
Weapon Element:




The Background
 
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History:History:Nozomi was a very promising young boy. Though he never stayed in one place. His family was constantly moving all over the place. From the USA to Spain. Due to his parents constantly obtaining new jobs in different places that looked promising. Nozomi eventually ended up in San Malarus Island on his sixteenth birthday. When his parents finally decided to settle down over there after retiring. Nozi was often bullyed/harassed in his younger years because of how he was built. Which led to him developing a strong mindset of persistence to get through it all and overcome all the people that were verbally against him. Though he is glad to have a new start over in San Malarus. Hoping that he doesn't have a repeat of all the previous misfortunes he's experienced when Nozi was younger.


Part Two
Nozomi triumphed above the trials of Azores. Resulting in he himself becoming a better person. He had dealt with the angels and the Mother. Albeit not without the sacrifice of a guy he didn't know. Much to the dismay of everyone and 1 person nobody there seemed to know. He left disheartened and paid a sad goodbye to the boy he formed a relationship with towards the end of the supernatural events in Azores. Shunnosuke. Even though Shunnosuke exited his life. Nozomi could never shake a feeling that one day. Maybe he'd see him again.

He would continue to better himself. Improve. Work. He had to build his life back together now that things weren't exactly so supernatural any more. Now he is starting his first year in college. Working out just what the hell it is he wants to do with his life.

The supernatural was out of his life for now, but the bonds he had formed during the event weren't.



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Nozomi Kichida
I used to think I could do it all alone, but now. I realized. I got my friends to help me out.


The Biography


Birth Name:Nozomi Kichida
Aliases:Nozi,"K"
Gender:Male
Age:
Birth Day:01/05
Arcana: Strength:Portrayed as a young woman holding up a terrifying beast (more often a lion), the Strength Arcana symbolizes an imagery beyond the Beast And Beauty, and is associated with the morality about the stronger power of self-control, gentleness, courage and virtue over brute force. In tarot readings, it can also represent creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized.
Place of Residence: San Malarus
Evoker: Yo he uses da Tarot Card
Academy Semester:College
Class:Graduating

Part/Full Time Job:Works at a cafe

Appearance:Nozomi appears as a tall 6ft Male still. Except now he's styled  his hair. Or so he says because it actually really does not look any different. Nozomi has ditched his previous outfit of the classic blue ensemble he wore in favor of a now more smooth red blazer with a white dress shirt on the inside. Combined with a blue pair of pants. Maintaining his previous sense of fashion and cleaning himself up a bit more. Weighing in at about 140lbs at this moment in time and sporting a decently toned body.

Personality: Nozomi is a pretty stand up guy who likes the company of just about anybody. He is open to hearing others out and is a very social person now. You can often find him just about anywhere as the Kichida really does not have any preferences on where he goes or hangs around. He has a odd way of touching people when he talks to them. Almost as if when speaking to him. You just know he's "alright". Greeting you with a smile here and there. He doesn't shy away from challenges of any kind and still can be sometimes stubborn when he approaches a problem. Though he knows when he's overwhelmed. Not being shy of actually asking for help.

Nozomi can be very complacent at times or passive despite all the energy he displays in public. Displaying a great degree of patience. As a person he lives and breathes the phrase one for all and all for one. He likes to support those that he meets and isn't shy of lending a hand here and there for those he considers his friends either. Albeit Nozomi can also be pretty brash at times lately or a little too direct in how he acts. All that built up energy he has in his system doesn't always result in good things.

The Kichida is very ambitious and desires to just have a successful life. Unfortunately he tends to not know how to go about what he sets out to do. Being an Idealist rather than a planner. Confident and determined but not realist sometimes. Which can horribly set him back a few steps until he gets his act together. His best strength is working and understanding things in the moment.However he doesn't understand concepts like greed or avarice or the desire to abuse things. As Nozomi is rather comfortable with what he has in life right now and doesn't try to expand himself to a level which he cannot handle as a person. To him he doesn't really need big or lavish lives or glitz and glammor.

He just really needs the people that matter to him.


 
The Potential
   

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Strengths:
Strength Name:Understanding
Description:Nozomi has met several different kinds of people throughout his life and because of this has learned how to adapt himself to actually speak to them the way they should be. He understands how to relate to peoples problems as well or change up how he acts in order to get a better answer out of them. Acting as a well built shoulder to cry on.This is something however that people can often feel is his genuine concern and is something that has only developed from who he really is, Unlike others who may formulate a similar skill for deception or "perfection"

Strength Name:Athlete
Description:Nozomi has constantly improved his body to the pinnacle to that a Human can be. Combining his well found resolve,Persistance,Knowledge and actual hard work. His body is the equivalent of an Athletes at the moment. As a result he is also actually pretty fast. (Speed Boost)

Strength Name:The Mentalist
Description:He just knows how to look at you. Paying careful glances to places,people or things around him and carefully placing the pieces of the puzzle together in his mind. Nozomi can analyze situations and the like and come up with a logical solution or conclusion depending on what is in front of him at the time. However Nozomi only pays attention to what's going on at the moment, and sometimes may forget key details from the past.

Strength Name:Exemplar
Description:Nozomi has worked his way up and as a result. People tend to look torwards him when things are going wrong or theres some kind of Conflict. Nozomi knows how to assert himself in a situation and properly manage people as well in times of stress,etc. Especially given his experience in the prior events of Azores.(LeaderShip)

Strength Name:Shocking (Persona Strength)
Description:Nozomi due to his Initial Personas Nature and Bonding with him throughout his journey has developed a strange symptom in which the Electrical current that goes through his body is Higher than would be a Normal Persons. Resulting in Minor Phenomena where he has for example minor cases of static cling on his clothes or when he touches things. His Bio-Electricity is higher than a Normal persons would be. Though he can't of course. Randomly shock people at will. This triggers on accident.


Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)


Weakness Name:Hard Headed
Description:Nozomi can be kinda stubborn still sometimes and frankly this hasn't changed. He has a habit of catching himself in predicaments he just isn't supposed to be getting his ass into these days.

Weakness Name:Fears
Description:Nozomi has internal paranoia within himself since the previous events of Azores. As a result he has developed slight fears that the events of azores will reoccur to him again,except this time they won't end so well. Conferring a 15% extra chance of distress effecting him. As his mind is more vulnerable to this.

Weakness Name:Needs to Understand Himself
Description:Nozomi himself is lost in life and in his own way. While he is capable of analyzing everything around himand working the pieces of things together. He really doesn't take in the facts of reality and how he needs to get his shit together and his CAREER together at this point.

Weakness Name:Too Caring
Description:Nozomi is often really quick to put himself in harms way compared to other people when it comes to those he considers friends or important to him. As a result he may go out of his way to risk his life for the sake of his friends even if it seems impractical or just down right stupid.

Weakness Name:Conduit
Description:Nozomi due to the Higher electromagnetic field he has around his body because of what his persona has given him. He is more sensitive to EMPS of any kind. Anything that would shut down electronics in a Large area manually (that isnt supernatural) would Tire him out for example.(Electric attacks do 10% more extra damage to him)


Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows and Demons without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))


Weapon Name:Thorn
Weapon Description:Thorn appears as a basic double edged spear that is about four feet in length. With a predominantly Dark brown handle. The two spear points are black with a brown line going down the center of them. Strange Markings are often seen on Thorn that Nozomi does not understand. Appearing Akin to runes on the handle. (What it looks like)
Weapon Image: (Not necessary)
Weapon Attack Type:Pierce(Slash, Pierce, or Strike)
Weapon Element: (Leave this blank. Only special weapons obtain an element behind its blows.)




The Background
   


History:Nozomi was a very promising young boy. Though he never stayed in one place. His family was constantly moving all over the place. From the USA to Spain. Due to his parents constantly obtaining new jobs in different places that looked promising. Nozomi eventually ended up in San Malarus Island on his sixteenth birthday. When his parents finally decided to settle down over there after retiring. Nozi was often bullyed/harassed in his younger years because of how he was built. Which led to him developing a strong mindset of persistence to get through it all and overcome all the people that were verbally against him. Though he is glad to have a new start over in San Malarus. Hoping that he doesn't have a repeat of all the previous misfortunes he's experienced when Nozi was younger.


Part Two

Nozomi triumphed above the trials of Azores. Resulting in he himself becoming a better person. He had dealt with the angels and the Mother. Albeit not without the sacrifice of a guy he didn't know. Much to the dismay of everyone and 1 person nobody there seemed to know. He left disheartened and paid a sad goodbye to the boy he formed a relationship with towards the end of the supernatural events in Azores. Shunnosuke. Even though Shunnosuke exited his life. Nozomi could never shake a feeling that one day. Maybe he'd see him again.

He would continue to better himself. Improve. Work. He had to build his life back together now that things weren't exactly so supernatural any more. Now he is starting his first year in college. Working out just what the hell it is he wants to do with his life.

The supernatural was out of his life for now, but the bonds he had formed during the event weren't.


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I don't see WIP on this so I assume it is done, so here we go.

1. On gender I see a broken code.

2. Evoker: I would still keep it with your tarot card. As far as I recall even in the games when persona went to the next level the evokes used were still there.

3. Appearance: Where is it? Even if it is for part 2, a question mark is not a pass in my book.

3. Personality: This is just a preference thing, but perhaps go back through it to make it flow easier when read. There are some areas I got a bit confused as to what you meant by your wording. Outside of this it is fine.

4. —Strength Name:The Mentalist
—Description:He just knows how to look at you. Paying careful glances to places,people or things around him and carefully placing the pieces of the puzzle together in his mind. Nozomi can analyze situations and the like and come up with a logical solution or conclusion depending on what is in front of him at the time. - I find this to be clashing with what you just said in personality about him not being a planner. In my mind this a planner trait.

5. —Strength Name:Shocking (Persona Strength)
—Description: Nozomi due to his Initial Personas Nature and Bonding with him throughout his journey has developed a strange symptom in which the Electrical current that goes through his body is Higher than would be a Normal Persons. Resulting in Minor Phenomena where he has for example minor cases of static cling on his clothes or when he touches things. - I am goint with a no on this one since I haven't seen this sort of trait before with persona. Typically, I see them as an extension of the soul rather than something that would bonding with their user in any fashion that would give him this skill. I could see it if it a shadow weapon since a chance of merging is there, but not with a persona.

6. —Weakness Name:Conduit
—Description:Nozomi due to the Higher electromagnetic field he has around his body because of what his persona has given him. He is more sensitive to EMPS of any kind. Anything that would shut down electronics in a Large area manually (that isnt supernatural) would Tire him out for example.(Electricity based attacks are 10% more likely to hit him) - The same issue I have with the strength associated with this applies here. I don't mind battle skills its just in this case it I am not comprehending the logic behind these two without further explanation.

7. Get rid of floating weakness. It does not apply to Part 2.

8. On your description for soul bound information take out the stuff in parentheses and just leave the choice taken there. It makes it hard to read other wise.

- Verdict: Fix these issues I can approve it.
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Yo Chill for a Minute

I only forgot to put Wip lol Hold on My Bad. This isn't done at all.

Half of the things left there were accidental typos yeah
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Since the shocking weakness is cosmetic I don't see a problem with it. The mentality I do agree clashes with your personality a little, and as for the weakness since the way people may calculate targets. You can change it to elec attacks having a 10% to ALSO hit you if that helps. It doesn't bother me that the coding is a little wonky or floating strength is there since even in old rules you could gain strengths over time. It can remain empty there. Everything else I don't have an issue with as long as I can read it; typos dont bother me. Once it's done it can be looked over again, but I was asked to check it over.
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Nozomi Kichida
I used to think I could do it all alone. Like I could take everything on in this world by myself. Then I finally realized I don't have too. That I  have my friends by my side all the way.


The Biography


Birth Name:Nozomi Kichida
Aliases:Nozi,"K"
Gender:Male
Age:18
Birth Day:01/05
Arcana:Strength:Portrayed as a young woman holding up a terrifying beast (more often a lion), the Strength Arcana symbolizes an imagery beyond the Beast And Beauty, and is associated with the morality about the stronger power of self-control, gentleness, courage and virtue over brute force. In tarot readings, it can also represent creative or physical energy that needs to be or is about to be unleashed, sometimes out of desire to be recognized.
Place of Residence:San Malarus
Evoker: He uses da Tarot card
Academy Semester:College Freshman
Class:Graduated High School


Part/Full Time Job:Works at a Cafe or something.

Appearance:
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Nozomi Kichida appears as a standardly tall 6ft guy weighing in at about 135lbs. Who has a rather well built lean physique. Now sporting dark blue hair. He has traded in his previous attire for a dark blue leather jacket with a red scarf around his neck.Underneath is a white T shirt. Nozomi as well sports a pair of grey jeans and a belt. Alongside dark blue boots. Though on other occassions he can be seen with differently styled outfits. Much to the surprise of others given people would gather the assumption that he has a thing for blue. He has a glint in his eyes some people just really can't understand.

Personality:Nozomi is a pretty Stand-Up Guy when it comes to people. He's a guy that likes to be a shoulder to lean on for those he meets and befriends. Nozomi is not hard to talk to anymore either. As he is a rather social person and often finds himself being the one making the first move in any form of situation. Even then he still gets a little nervous from time to time.He can be a little brash at times and maybe a little hard headed. However underneath that is a decent guy with good intentions to those around him.

Nozomi can be very watchful and caring of those that he meets. Especially from the previous events of Azores. As the events that transpired made him value more the bonds he creates with people and just how much they effect his day to day life. He has a odd way of touching people when he speaks to them. it's almost as if when speaking to him. You can kinda feel like he's alright.

Despite the energy he displays often. Nozomi can be rather compalcent with things and is also rather patient. At times he may even opt to not do anything if that is what he thinks is right for the situation. The Kichida is rather ambitious and desires to have a successful life. Willing to work his way up to the top so he can have what he believes he deserves in life and sees no issue in hard work. Though he doesn't want a lavish life style or anything of the sort.

Really. The only thing Nozomi wants is his life together, and those that he cares for with him.


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The Potential
   


Strengths: (Anything your character is skilled in, such as Martial Arts/ Drawing/ etc? You are allowed a maximum of five strengths and a minimum of three.)


Strength Name:Understanding
Description:Nozomi has met several different kinds of people throughout his life and because of this has learned how to adapt himself to actually speak to them the way they should be. He understands how to relate to peoples problems as well or change up how he acts in order to get a better answer out of them. Acting as a well built shoulder to cry on.This is something however that people can often feel is his genuine concern and is something that has only developed from who he really is, Unlike others who may formulate a similar skill for deception or "perfection"


Strength Name:The Mentalist
Description:He just knows how to look at you. Paying careful glances to places,people or things around him and carefully placing the pieces of the puzzle together in his mind. Nozomi can analyze situations and the like and come up with a logical solution or conclusion depending on what is in front of him at the time. However Nozomi only pays attention to what's going on at the moment, and sometimes may forget key details from the past.

Strength Name:Exemplar
Description:Nozomi has worked his way up and as a result. People tend to look torwards him when things are going wrong or theres some kind of Conflict. Nozomi knows how to assert himself in a situation and properly manage people as well in times of stress,etc. Especially given his experience in the prior events of Azores.(LeaderShip)

Strength Name:Athlete
Description:Nozomi has constantly improved his body to the pinnacle to that a Human can be. Combining his well found resolve,Persistance,Knowledge and actual hard work. His body is the equivalent of an Athletes at the moment. As a result he is also actually pretty fast. (Speed Boost)

Strength Name:The Will to Live!
Description:Nozomi has a Innate fighting spirit. The Will to Live in his life. In his eyes you can see a Lion nearly. A guy who has the spirit to push on besides difficulty,Hardships and alot of other things. Someone who sets his eyes on the task. People just looking at Nozomi can tell he's a pretty hard working person, and this sometimes with how much focus he genuinely has can actually scare weak minded people.


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Weaknesses: (You must have the same amount of weaknesses as strengths. These weaknesses pertain to you and not your Persona. IE: Physically Weaker, lack of attention span, etc.)


Weakness Name:Hard Headed
Description:Nozomi can be kinda stubborn still sometimes and frankly this hasn't changed. He has a habit of catching himself in predicaments he just isn't supposed to be getting his ass into these days.

Weakness Name:Fears
Description:Nozomi has internal paranoia within himself since the previous events of Azores. As a result he has developed slight fears that the events of azores will reoccur to him again,except this time they won't end so well. Conferring a 15% extra chance of distress effecting him. As his mind is more vulnerable to this.

Weakness Name:Needs to Understand Himself
Description:Nozomi himself is lost in life and in his own way. While he is capable of analyzing everything around himand working the pieces of things together. He really doesn't take in the facts of reality and how he needs to get his shit together and his CAREER together at this point.

Weakness Name:Too Caring
Description:Nozomi is often really quick to put himself in harms way compared to other people when it comes to those he considers friends or important to him. As a result he may go out of his way to risk his life for the sake of his friends even if it seems impractical or just down right stupid.

Weakness Name:Conductive
Description:Nozomi due to his nature as a person is slightly more vulnerable to electricity, especially with the higher amount of Bio-Electricity he has in his body for unknown reasons off of his Potential (+10% Damage Taken from Electricity)

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Soul Bound Weapon: (This is the weapon you'll be able to summon to your hand while in combat. This weapon is special for your character specifically and allows you to fight Shadows and Demons without the need of summoning your Persona. This can be anything but a Gun (Or gun related weapon))

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Weapon Name:Rising Tide
Weapon Description:It appears a black short sword that is about 3FT Long in terms of length and has a guard on the handle for the user to grip rather well.
Weapon Image:
Weapon Attack Type:Slash
Weapon Element:




The Background
   
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History:History:Nozomi was a very promising young boy. Though he never stayed in one place. His family was constantly moving all over the place. From the USA to Spain. Due to his parents constantly obtaining new jobs in different places that looked promising. Nozomi eventually ended up in San Malarus Island on his sixteenth birthday. When his parents finally decided to settle down over there after retiring. Nozi was often bullyed/harassed in his younger years because of how he was built. Which led to him developing a strong mindset of persistence to get through it all and overcome all the people that were verbally against him. Though he is glad to have a new start over in San Malarus. Hoping that he doesn't have a repeat of all the previous misfortunes he's experienced when Nozi was younger.


Part Two
Nozomi triumphed above the trials of Azores. Resulting in he himself becoming a better person. He had dealt with the angels and the Mother. Albeit not without the sacrifice of a guy he didn't know. Much to the dismay of everyone and 1 person nobody there seemed to know. He left disheartened and paid a sad goodbye to the boy he formed a relationship with towards the end of the supernatural events in Azores. Shunnosuke. Even though Shunnosuke exited his life. Nozomi could never shake a feeling that one day. Maybe he'd see him again.

He would continue to better himself. Improve. Work. He had to build his life back together now that things weren't exactly so supernatural any more. Now he is starting his first year in college. Working out just what the hell it is he wants to do with his life.

The supernatural was out of his life for now, but the bonds he had formed during the event weren't.

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